Create a couplet!

[Pulcinella 1,016]

It's a contest! You must write a couplet about ponies. (a couplet is a poem with two lines that rhyme.) I will choose who's is the best for each page, and post it. There is no reward, but at least you get the feeling of winning! Thanks for playing, I look forward to seeing your responses!

[CluelessLlama13 55]

Are you asking just for two rhyming lines? Or is that just the rhyme scheme? In other words, is the challenge here to make it as awesome as possible whilst still keeping it only two lines long?

[Pulcinella 1,016]

Yes. this is an example, Soarin is so very fast,

I hope he doesn't fall and need a cast!

[CluelessLlama13 55]

Cool. Can we submit more than one??

[Pulcinella 1,016]

I guess...

[jdor11 91]

pinky pie is in the sky

but she forgot she can not fly

[Pulcinella 1,016]

Nice! How did she get up there? You should write another one about how she got in the sky.

[The Awesome One 1,315]

She made a contraption of course.

Because she isn't dumb like a horse.

[jdor11 91]

she made a pair of wings

that were made from things.

[Pulcinella 1,016]

I kinda lol'd a bit at both

[CluelessLlama13 55]

WHAT?!?? NOW WE'RE TELLING A STORY WITH COUPLETS?!? NO!!!

I just wasted so much time on the ones you see below....

 

 

The Most Energetic Pony, as nopony can deny

Is of course the one and only, happy Pinkie Pie!

 

Fluttershy, though quiet, and, frankly, easily scared,

Can, herself, be frightening, once at you she has stared.

 

If you ever hear a pony shout, "Well howdy, y'all!"

You always know Applejack gave that friendly call.

 

Rarity, so proper; her hooves always clean.

Nopony can top her with her sewing machine.

 

Rainbow Dash is one for speed.

Her sonic rainboom did succeed.

 

Twilight Sparkle is always reading books.

She's much more powerful than she looks.

[jdor11 91]

wow you described the mane 6 in couplet form

that is incredible

[CluelessLlama13 55]

wow you described the mane 6 in couplet form

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that is incredible

 

Haha why, thank you.

I was going to go further and move on to Celestia, Luna, the CMC and, of course, Zecora, but I didn't have time to think through that many words today... http://mlpforums.com/public/style_emoticons/default/dry.png

[Pulcinella 1,016]

WHAT?!?? NOW WE'RE TELLING A STORY WITH COUPLETS?!? NO!!!

I just wasted so much time on the ones you see below....

 

 

The Most Energetic Pony, as nopony can deny

Is of course the one and only, happy Pinkie Pie!

 

Fluttershy, though quiet, and, frankly, easily scared,

Can, herself, be frightening, once at you she has stared.

 

If you ever hear a pony shout, "Well howdy, y'all!"

You always know Applejack gave that friendly call.

 

Rarity, so proper; her hooves always clean.

Nopony can top her with her sewing machine.

 

Rainbow Dash is one for speed.

Her sonic rainboom did succeed.

 

Twilight Sparkle is always reading books.

She's much more powerful than she looks.

 

omg... Speechless.... That is soo good! Wow... You just might win on this page! My favorite one is the one about Pinkie Pie. Again, wow.

[CluelessLlama13 55]

omg... Speechless.... That is soo good! Wow... You just might win on this page! My favorite one is the one about Pinkie Pie. Again, wow.

 

Wow, thanks! I'm glad you like them!

[Pulcinella 1,016]

Like them? They're AWESOME!

[CluelessLlama13 55]

Haha well I guess I thought they could be better, but I posted them anyway because I didn't have time to come up with others. XD