critique wanted Redrawing (and re-imaging) of old drawing.

[Catpone Cerberus 23,427]

I got a new drawing tablet, and to test it, I recreated one of the drawing I once made. I'm not seeking critique per say, but if you have something constructive to say, go ahead. 

 

 

The original drawing:
 

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[Opal 6]

I think it would be more beautiful if you traced the contours

[Catpone Cerberus 23,427]

7 minutes ago, Opal said:

I think it would be more beautiful if you traced the contours

Do you mean that the lines would be visible, or do you mean actually tracing over a base or something?

Edited March 27, 2019 by Catpone Cerberus

[Opal 6]

52 minutes ago, Catpone Cerberus said:

Do you mean that the lines would be visible, or do you mean actually tracing over a base or something?

that's what it means to know bad english, try to show and explain

the figure shows how to emphasize the bold line contours (bold purple color):

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On your art a mix of ponies, which, in my opinion, does not look very beautiful.

[Catpone Cerberus 23,427]

1 minute ago, Opal said:

that's what it means to know bad english, try to show and explain

the figure shows how to emphasize the bold line contours (bold purple color):

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On your art a mix of ponies, which, in my opinion, does not look very beautiful.

I used to use have outlines in my digital drawings, but I came to the conclusion that it's lot more enjoyable for me to do in this flat style, and it also allows me to do other things than ponies without changing my style.

I appreciate your comment and agree that it could look slightly better with outlines, but in the end what's important for me is that i enjoy what i'm doing.