First time drawing with a different style

[Ezynell 2,037]

I'm trying out a different style of drawing, and here's the first thing I made. It took about 30 minutes and I rushed it a little bit, but what do you think? Comments and critiques are welcome. Also, I've never drawn Rarity before, so that was new too.

Edited June 20, 2012 by Ezynell

[Speedy Transition 788]

Who is her Hot date? haha

Nice job!

[Marra da poni 100]

Nice!

[FortyShadows 217]

Well, I don't see any problems. Quite amazing for 30 minutes o_O

Style-changing's fun but I find it hard.

[The Awesome One 1,315]

Rarity seems to be interested in some pony....I wonder who it is. Amazing as always Ezy.

[ProjectRKA 2,848]

This looks rather good. I'd love to see a non-rushed picture with this style :3

 

Who is her Hot date? haha

Nice job!

 

I thought that was you ?

[Speedy Transition 788]

This looks rather good. I'd love to see a non-rushed picture with this style :3

 

 

I thought that was you ?

 

Sorry, i would never cheat on you <3

[ProjectRKA 2,848]

Sorry, i would never cheat on you <3

 

Oh you :3

[Speedy Transition 788]

Oh you :3

 

OH COME HERE YOU!!! *NOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOMN*

[Dizzy Ditzy Doo! 1,120]

Loving it Ezynell! new style turned out exquisite!

 

Aweh, sweet love making right before my eyes, I'm gonna sketch this now. Hehe

 

jk...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

or am I?

[Nah 3,182]

I like it, another well done drawing you did Ezynell!

[EWAN 31]

For 30 minutes, this is pretty good.

well done!

[~Chaos~ 3,967]

I love that style of art! nice job!

[Thunderbolt 35]

Nice. I think I might try to draw a pony sometime.

[CaptainAsh98 20]

Nice Work!

[Dusty Soul 2,611]

This is awesome! Great job.

[Zweiterversuch 50]

Wow...

 

I love it.

 

Next time pay a little bit more attention to the shadows.

I'm sure it will turn out better.

[Strawberry Tart 161]

As Zweiterversuch said, you might want to pay attention to shadows more. What you did was the most basic shadowing and I think you could do much better with it. I think the left ear should be smaller; right now they're not equal in size. The head is very well made, it reflects the official MLP style very well. However, since I can't see any of her body other than her head and front legs, I'm assuming you didn't draw it; might want to next time, or poor Rarity will be dead! Rarity's hair is hard to draw and you did a very good job on it for a first time, although I could point out that the right curl (the longer one) should be bigger. I like the eyes very much, it looks like you put a lot of work into them, and they turned out fantastic! You're very good at this style and if you put a little more work into it, I doubt I would be able to find anything wrong. Keep going!