fan fiction Waking up in a new world

[Finesthour 7,287]

Chapter 1-

https://docs.google....I431dp2iO0/edit

Chapter 2-

https://docs.google....5iEA-r3BgI/edit

Chapter 3-

https://docs.google....p_Sy9HAfcc/edit

Chapter 4-

https://docs.google....7Nc_OoLr3w/edit

Chapter 5-

https://docs.google....DANIq7jY4M/edit

Chapter6-

https://docs.google....i_UxUwVBzI/edit

Chapter7-

https://docs.google....o7i4mzo-MY/edit

Chapter8-

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JKTQWgha7I33JPnarslUFMGJce9gPR_QToaxdIIGTww/edit

Tell me what you guys think c:

 

EDIT: Read here-

http://poni.0au.de/story/4645/Waking-up-in-a-new-world

Edited December 21, 2011 by PinkiePie

[HomuraBL 851]

That was nice. Quick question, is this a one shot or will it have more chapters?

[Finesthour 7,287]

That was nice. Quick question, is this a one shot or will it have more chapters?

 

I ended it on purpose like that.

 

It will have many chapters.

[ProjectRKA 2,848]

And when it began to get exciting, it's ending :C

 

-Anyways, can't wait to see more from this. Very well written

[Finesthour 7,287]

And when it began to get exciting, it's ending :C

 

-Anyways, can't wait to see more from this. Very well written

 

Heh, really?

 

Usualy people tell me I write like shit.

[ProjectRKA 2,848]

Heh, really?

 

Usualy people tell me I write like shit.

 

Aw... don't listen to them. Your writing is very good Edited December 17, 2011 by ProjectRKA

[Finesthour 7,287]

Chapter 2 is done c:

 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BvDwc9eYp8-MKdkvyNaZXNhl7Q5GEgnI05iEA-r3BgI/edit

[HomuraBL 851]

Chapter 2 is done c:

 

https://docs.google....5iEA-r3BgI/edit

 

That reminds I need to get more work done on the second chapter of my fanfic.

Good job btw.

[TomokoKuroki 1,707]

This slightly reminds me of a pony dream I had XD.

[Finesthour 7,287]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/13TFZbAjt3f-1zhfDyJdhFlTocTJSjDuTbp_Sy9HAfcc/edit

Chapter 3 is finished c:

 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DpdSDmIb5wrxKmD-__pxwDq-sB0gtOxFm7Nc_OoLr3w/edit

 

Chapter 4 updated.

 

Chapter 5 updated-

 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aNLkxINoKfUezr82vzRg0nKWsUCj7EzqcDANIq7jY4M/edit

 

Chapter 6 updated-

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QJ7XxUpI9qD_jcZOj2Ht4GgoTd6xvz-FYi_UxUwVBzI/edit

[DarkenedPath 1]

this isn't bad, it gave me something to kill a few minutes with and it was actually fairly well written, i see a few minor problems but nothing distracting, that's my inner grammar nazi pointing that out, all in all, good work.

[Braeburn 52]

https://docs.google....p_Sy9HAfcc/edit

Chapter 3 is finished c:

 

https://docs.google....7Nc_OoLr3w/edit

 

Chapter 4 updated.

 

Chapter 5 updated-

 

https://docs.google....DANIq7jY4M/edit

 

Chapter 6 updated-

https://docs.google....i_UxUwVBzI/edit

 

PLEASE PLEASE, PLEEEAAASE... Don't post another chapter unless you have two or more! I can't stand waiting on people to write! Edited December 19, 2011 by sobadnomad

[pondus30 152]

its good!, Keep it up! now i got something to do while waiting for new episodes!

 

Edited December 20, 2011 by pondus30

[Finesthour 7,287]

its good!, Keep it up! now i got something to do while waiting for new episodes!

 

 

Is it really that good?

 

I must be undermining myself then, as I think it is bad.

[pondus30 152]

Is it really that good?

 

I must be undermining myself then, as I think it is bad.

 

Yeah i began reading it, couldn't stop before i was done, I REALLY REALLY REALLY hope to see more in the future!!!!!!!!! I really mean it! I wanna know how it goes! :D

[Finesthour 7,287]

Yeah i began reading it, couldn't stop before i was done, I REALLY REALLY REALLY hope to see more in the future!!!!!!!!! I really mean it! I wanna know how it goes! :D

 

Hmm, thanks for the compliment.

 

I was actually starting to get tired of writing it, but I think you just sparked it up again c:

[pondus30 152]

Hmm, thanks for the compliment.

 

I was actually starting to get tired of writing it, but I think you just sparked it up again c:

 

I do not allow you to stop!

 

Im getting Robojot to read it tomorrow but he's gone for bed, I bet he'll like it too!

[Finesthour 7,287]

I do not allow you to stop!

 

Im getting Robojot to read it tomorrow but he's gone for bed, I bet he'll like it too!

 

Heheh, you aren't the first to say that.

 

I guess I should stop being lazy and get to writing

[pondus30 152]

Heheh, you aren't the first to say that.

 

I guess I should stop being lazy and get to writing

 

 

Im so excited to find out what happens next but i really need to get to bed now, C'ya

[Finesthour 7,287]

Im so excited to find out what happens next but i really need to get to bed now, C'ya

 

Heh, alright.

 

I will get to work on the next chapter soon.

[ProjectRKA 2,848]

I just read chapter six... Why do you always stop the chapters when they become exciting !? D:

[Finesthour 7,287]

I just read chapter six... Why do you always stop the chapters when they become exciting !? D:

 

Because I love for people to continue reading c:

 

Chapter 7 updated-

 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bpu5gVlTs3aZHP9EDxzuqYWoR1jq8KlHTo7i4mzo-MY/edit

[ProjectRKA 2,848]

Because I love for people to continue reading c:

 

Chapter 7 updated-

 

https://docs.google....o7i4mzo-MY/edit

 

Can't wait for more

[Finesthour 7,287]

Can't wait for more

 

I might do another today, I spiked my own interest.

 

Do you remember when I talked about the mulitverse theory?

[Inkfeather 597]

This is so great! I'm sitting here, grinning at myself. I really can't stop smiling. I'm a hopeless romantic so the whole deal between Fluttershy and Gary throughout chapter 4 and 5 are like candy to my soul.

 

It's nice to read a story which fits my taste in every single way, very rare that I ever find something like that.