Rarity Fan Club

[Rarity Paige Belle 1,854]

Has a little bit of a Deus Ex vibe with the big corporations. Is it more of a present technology level story or more future tech?

Present level tech. Also to go into Rarity's back story, she used to run her Boutique until a recession hit Equestria, and Rarity defaulting on her mortgage, loses the shop. However her father is a retired officer, and at his gentle prodding, Rarity joins the police. And with her special talent gets promoted quickly. However, because of her ways, she's not too popular at the station, and none of the other detectives want to be partnered with her!

[Castle Bleck 19,376]

 

Because when I think Detective!Rarity...

[Obsidian Sky 14,004]

Present level tech. Also to go into Rarity's back story, she used to run her Boutique until a recession hit Equestria, and Rarity defaulting on her mortgage, loses the shop. However her father is a retired officer, and at his gentle prodding, Rarity joins the police. And with her special talent gets promoted quickly. However, because of her ways, she's not too popular at the station, and none of the other detectives want to be partnered with her!

Sounds cool.

 

What i don't understand ist why they would not like to be partnered with her. Do they see her as an airheaded beauty that only got so far because of "favours"? Because depending on how gritty your story is going to be i can see plenty reasons why a corrupt, selfserving male cop would want to team up with a good looking female colleague? Depending if such cops exist in your story.

 

Maybe they would even want to be partnered with her and she is very popular with the male population of her station, but because of... lets say the wrong reasons. Could be interesting too. They maybe see her as the pretty girl that should not be detective because they think she is incompetent, but they lust after her at the same time. So she kinda has to fight at two fronts there.

[Rarity Paige Belle 1,854]

Sounds cool.

 

What i don't understand ist why they would not like to be partnered with her. Do they see her as an airheaded beauty that only got so far because of "favours"? Because depending on how gritty your story is going to be i can see plenty reasons why a corrupt, selfserving male cop would want to team up with a good looking female colleague? Depending if such cops exist in your story.

 

Maybe they would even want to be partnered with her and she is very popular with the male population of her station, but because of... lets say the wrong reasons. Could be interesting too. They maybe see her as the pretty girl that should not be detective because they think she is incompetent, but they lust after her at the same time. So she kinda has to fight at two fronts there.

Because of what some perceive as her snobbish behaviour. I have a friend who works for the police, and the one thing they hate is when suspects and members of the public talk down to thethem. So you can imagine what all the officers would think of Rarity!

[ghostfacekiller39 23,860]

Because of what some perceive as her snobbish behaviour. I have a friend who works for the police, and the one thing they hate is when suspects and members of the public talk down to thethem. So you can imagine what all the officers would think of Rarity!

She doesn't really talk down to anyone, though...nor is she a suspect or a civilian

[Obsidian Sky 14,004]

She doesn't really talk down to anyone, though...nor is she a suspect or a civilian

Well they seem to just think that because of her refined behavior, she does not really do it. At least i got it that way.

[Rarity Paige Belle 1,854]

She doesn't really talk down to anyone, though...nor is she a suspect or a civilian

But when she goes into a squad room using the terms 'darling' and such, can you imagine what the other officers would think? Especially if she's been promoted quickly.

[Obsidian Sky 14,004]

But when she goes into a squad room using the terms 'darling' and such, can you imagine what the other officers would think? Especially if she's been promoted quickly.

Well, like i said. Maybe they think she did some "favors" for the police chef, so they despise and lust after her at the same time? They cannot understand that it was just her talent at crimefighting and her smarts that got her promoted so fast.

 

They are kinda frustrated that she got so far and are frustrated because they cannot have her?

 

I like my idea... Why do i always have to bring stuff like that into stories?

[hawkflame 3,310]

Over 1000 posts since I last checked this thread.  My god. 

[Rarity Paige Belle 1,854]

Alright, my first chapter! Please tell me what you think!

 

 

There was a small crowd of ponies and people. Rarity noticed Two uniformed officers, one human, the other pony, trying to keep the crowd away so approached them, asking them ' what have we got?'

'Young female, Unicorn.' the human officer replied.

'Do we have a name?' Rarity asked.

'We do. Gemma Twilight Sparkle Goodeson. Age 27.'

'Okay, Show me.'

'Sorry mam, we can't leave the perimeter, but the victim is just over there' said the earth pony officer, pointing to a small patch of grass.

 

'Good God,' Hannah Dash exclaimed when she saw the victim.

'What's the matter, never seen a body before?' Rarity asked.

'Not like this.' Hannah responed, beginning to look visibly pale, which was a hard task, being as she was a blue pegasus.

'Rainbow, darling,why don't you go and wait for foresnics' Rarity said as she put on a pair of gloves.

'Sure,' Rainbow replied, looking relieved.

Rarity noticed a small purse beside the victims body and decided to take a look. There was nothing much in there, apart from Gemma's driving license and a few Bit notes.

After only five minutes, Rarity noticed a white van pull up. Forensics.

She walked up to the van to talk to the two unicorns inside.

'I warn you, it's messy,' Rarity said,

'It's nothing we haven't seen before,'

One of the forensics team said.

Just then, Rainbow emerged from nowhere, smelling faintly of sick.

'Are you okay,' Rarity asked.

'It's nothing,' Rainbow Dash replied.

'Come on,' Rarity said, 'Let's take a look in the victims apartment.

 

In the elevator Rarity asked Rainbow Dash again whether she was okay to continue

'I'm fine, it's just a shock, you know, seeing a body like that,'

'Falling from 500 feet does that to a body,' Rarity replied.

'Yeah, thanks for reminding me.'

When the elevator doors opened, they came upon a familiar sight.

'Oh, No' Rarity exclaimed 'What are you two doing here!'

'We should be asking you the same question,' said the taller of the two officers, a Canine.

'Who's this?' asked the shorter officer, a dragon.

'I'm Detective Constable Hannah Dash, but everyone just calls me Rainbow,'

'Well, I'm Detective Sergeant John Runyon, and my dog partner is DS James Stanton. A word of warning, Dash, I'd put in for a transfer if I were you, Miss hoity-toity here will drive you crazy otherwise. Isn't that right?'

'Be Careful Runyon,' Rarity replied, ' I outrank you.'

At that, Runyon said 'Sorry, Mam.'

'Thats better. Now tell me, has anyone else been inside apart from you two cretins?'

'No,'Runyon replied.

'I'm sorry,'

'No,Mam,'

'That's better, now lead on,' Rarity replied, with a slight touch of sarcasm.

What Rarity and Hannah saw when they entered the apartment shocked them. The living room was blood soaked and there was obvious signs of a struggle.

'Maybe you should stay outside,' Rarity suggested to Rainbow Dash.

'No, I'm good,' Dash replied.

They both turned their attention to the bay window, which was completely smashed.

'This is reinforced glass,' Dash said ' You couldn't throw someone out of the window, it would take a Minotaur to smash the glass.'

'Or,' Rarity pondered 'a unicorn's powers.'

'Are you saying Gemma did this to herself,' Dash asked incredulously

'Of course not, just look at the bloodstains,'

Suddenly Stanton called out 'hey, you wanna take a look at this.'

'What is it?' Rarity replied.

'Take a look for yourself.'

Rarity and Dash wandered into the kitchen to find a bloodstained meat cleaver.

'What is that doing here.' Rarity wondered out aloud

'Why do you ask?' Dash asked.

'In case it has escaped your attention Dash, us ponies are vegetarian, the victim had no reason to have it. Stanton, bag it'

'Whatever you say,'

 

Next, Rarity and Dash looked around the two bedrooms.

'She has a kid,' Dash said

'What?'

'I've been inside his bedroom, he's adopted though,'

'How do you guess that?' Rarity asked.

'Kids a dragon.' Dash said handing Rarity a photo. It was a picture of both the victim and the Dragon kid at a park.

'I've found something else, ' Dash said, handing Rarity another photo.

'Oh,god. This takes things up to another level.'

'Why?' Dash asked.

'Do you know who this? Celestia Norton.' Replied Rarity.

'Shit. You're joking me,'

'No I'm not. Alright here's our plan of action.Stanton' Rarity called out, ' do we know where the victims child is,'

'Yes, he's at the victim's parents. They've been notified'

'Good, well we will pay them a visit anyway, and then,' Rarity sighed ' Looks like we'll be paying a visit to the Empress.'

[ghostfacekiller39 23,860]

Over 1000 posts since I last checked this thread.  My god. 

We're the evil empire of fan clubs now

 

Started at the bottom,  now we're here

 

I plan on reading that fanfic above me when I get home, btw. 

[Andaasonsan 3,205]

Alright, my first chapter

I don't know if it's intentional, but Rainbow Dash is acting extremely out of character here. She should always trying to at least act like she's tough, and probably wouldn't be as subservient to Rarity. She's a rookie, but she should still be more assertive.

For the role of Rarity's partner -if that's how you're going to characterize them- then Sweetie Belle or Coco Pommel would be a better choice.

[Rarity Paige Belle 1,854]

I don't know if it's intentional, but Rainbow Dash is acting extremely out of character here. She should always trying to at least act like she's tough, and probably wouldn't be as subservient to Rarity. She's a rookie, but she should still be more assertive.For the role of Rarity's partner -if that's how you're going to characterize them- then Sweetie Belle or Coco Pommel would be a better choice.

Well its Rainbow's first week, after being thrown out of the Equestrian air force, and Rarity's been on the job for five years. Plus, I think Dash's tough girl act is just that, and as soon as she see's a dead body she'll crumble!

[Castle Bleck 19,376]

We're the evil empire of fan clubs now

 

Rarity: Something... something... something... Dark Side. Something... something... something... complete.

 

Edited April 23, 2014 by Anti-Villain

[Andaasonsan 3,205]

Well its Rainbow's first week, after being thrown out of the Equestrian air force, and Rarity's been on the job for five years. Plus, I think Dash's tough girl act is just that, and as soon as she see's a dead body she'll crumble!

Yeah, she may crumble, but she's Rainbow Dash, so she's going to try to pretend like it doesn't bother her.

[Woohoo 34,341]

Rarity: Something... something... something... Dark Side. Something... something... something... complete.

 

Good. Use your generous feelings, boy. Let the fabulousness flow through you...

[Castle Bleck 19,376]

Good. Use your generous feelings, boy. Let the fabulousness flow through you...

 

Now witness the firepower of this fabulously armed and operational battle station! Fire at will, darling!

 

[baba_booey 4,303]

Good Afternoon (for me) everyone.

[Woohoo 34,341]

What Rarity does in her spare time

 

[takai 1,060]

What will become of our goddess of fabulosity this Saturday? I'm really excited.

 

http://www.equestriadaily.com/2014/04/the-hub-drops-teaser-for-inspiration.html

Edited April 24, 2014 by takai

[ghostfacekiller39 23,860]

I stumbled upon this I could feel my heart flutter a bit

 

 

Adding to profile, like, nao
 

[Radiance64 7,053]

Rarity: Something... something... something... Dark Side. Something... something... something... complete.

 

"Hey Rarity, how do you feel about all of us thinking you're the best pony?"

Rarity: Knew it :comeatus:

#RarityPalpatine

What Rarity does in her spare time

 

 

Pfft, I'd hope that Rarity would at least be a bit more hardcore than that.

Who knows

[Castle Bleck 19,376]

@Radiance64,

 

Gamer... Rarity?

 

Well, she does share her VA with Luna, so...

 

Edited April 24, 2014 by Anti-Villain

[Panne 1,342]

I demandle moar gamer Rarity!

SPOILER PICTURE FOR NEW RARITY EPISODE!!!!!!

 

 

 

 

Looks like somebody is in trouble...

[Radiance64 7,053]

I demandle moar gamer Rarity!

 

SPOILER PICTURE FOR NEW RARITY EPISODE!!!!!!

 

 

 

 

Looks like somebody is in trouble...

K fine

Best thing I could find that had anything game-related in the image.

 

And about the episode pic, I'm pretty sure we're dealin' with a Rarity changeling here.

http://img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130228234638/mlp/images/b/bb/Chrysalis'_eyes_flash_green_S2E25.png

Well, either that or she's under control by one...

My prediction in that case is that Spike might be the changeling, but we'll see I guess.