fan fiction Apple's Core

[Saiko 67]

Hey guys. Recently, I've started writing an AppleDash fan fic - looking at my avatar, you can guess it's my favorite MLP couple. I'm finally done with the first chapter and I think it really isn't bad. I would really appreciate it if you read it and shared your opinions with me.

 

Here it is, enjoy:

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/9256/Apple%27s-Core

[Adro2503 121]

That was really good. How long have you been working on it??

[Saiko 67]

I came up with the idea a few days ago and writing the first chapter took me 3 days.

[Skyobsession~P.K 21]

Oh god... CAN'T STOP READING, IT'S TO AWESOME!