Working on a new OC, could use some opinions, feedback, ect.

[Blue Moon 6,341]

Hm, well I actually think it looks pretty good, and its a nice color to fit into the coat color to.

 

The only concern I could really have with it is the fact it may be slightly crowded, but eh idk, it looks pretty good though , just idk, seems slightly crowed maybe, thats about my only real complaint at the moment.

 

Might actually use it i think . Its better then what I could make probably xD.

Also a singing talent sounds interesting, so I could roll with that actually .

 

Thanks for your help again Blue .

Your welcome!

 

 

Anyway, if you think it looks crowded, I could always remove the note thingy, and just leave the microphone. Would you like me to do that?

[Zygen 6,066]

Your welcome!

 

 

Anyway, if you think it looks crowded, I could always remove the note thingy, and just leave the microphone. Would you like me to do that?

Hm, well I would say yeah, but idk then it might look kinda generic.

 

Can you maybe like put the music note onto the mic? Would that work?

[Blue Moon 6,341]

Hm, well I would say yeah, but idk then it might look kinda generic.

 

Can you maybe like put the music note onto the mic? Would that work?

I tried putting a note, but no matter what I did, it always ended up crowded.

 

But here's another microphone cutie mark I found that you may like. It's a bit generic, but it's not crowded.

[Zygen 6,066]

I tried putting a note, but no matter what I did, it always ended up crowded.

 

But here's another microphone cutie mark I found that you may like. It's a bit generic, but it's not crowded.

Zygen's OC CM.png

Hm, ok, well thanks for trying regardless.

 

I'm not sure if I like it quite as much as the other mic personally, so idk, maybe it would look better in the other color, not sure.

 

Maybe I could just put the note in, I mean my ponysona has a tied 8th note, so a treble clef for this OC might look good, not sure. 

 

Sorry if I'm asking alot, I don't mean to sound demanding, I might do some work myself if you don't wanna later tommorow or something, but regardless thank you for all the help you've done with this Oc so far .

[Blue Moon 6,341]

Hm, ok, well thanks for trying regardless.

 

I'm not sure if I like it quite as much as the other mic personally, so idk, maybe it would look better in the other color, not sure.

 

Maybe I could just put the note in, I mean my ponysona has a tied 8th note, so a treble clef for this OC might look good, not sure. 

 

Sorry if I'm asking alot, I don't mean to sound demanding, I might do some work myself if you don't wanna later tommorow or something, but regardless thank you for all the help you've done with this Oc so far .

I shall not give up! How's this? It's the same microphone as before, but without the note and moved over to the right a bit. It's a bit simple though.

[Zygen 6,066]

I shall not give up! How's this? It's the same microphone as before, but without the note and moved over to the right a bit. It's a bit simple though.

Zygen OC.png

, alright then  

 

Um, it looks good and all, just idk it feels like it goes to simple maybe, not sure. I don't really know if I should have the mark be to generic. 

 

Idk maybe its just me, you think it looks to generic?

[Blue Moon 6,341]

, alright then

 

Um, it looks good and all, just idk it feels like it goes to simple maybe, not sure. I don't really know if I should have the mark be to generic. 

 

Idk maybe its just me, you think it looks to generic?

Where's Rarity when you need her?

 

 

I'm not really sure. One one hand, cutie marks should be simple. On the other hand, they shouldn't be too generic or simple. I'll come back to this tomorrow. 

[Zygen 6,066]

Where's Rarity when you need her?

 

 

I'm not really sure. One one hand, cutie marks should be simple. On the other hand, they shouldn't be too generic or simple. I'll come back to this tomorrow. 

Yeah, i'll try to do some thinking myself, thanks for all your help . I might have got a bit demandy, so if I did sorry ;/. but regardless you where very generous like Rarity about it.

 

I'm sure i'll be able to work something out eventually.

[Blue Moon 6,341]

Yeah, i'll try to do some thinking myself, thanks for all your help . I might have got a bit demandy, so if I did sorry ;/. but regardless you where very generous like Rarity about it.

 

I'm sure i'll be able to work something out eventually.

Nope, you weren't too demandy (demandy? Never heard that word before. )

 

I'll come back tomorrow for it, and let me know if you come up with anything.  

[Zygen 6,066]

Alright i drew a cutie mark for her, its not final, but for now i'm using it, i changed her color scheme a little bit, and thats really it.

 

I'm open to name ideas now, since shes closer to being done, i'm not saying i'll use any, but feel free to suggest if you want.

 

Thanks to everyone who has helped so far btw!

[Blue Moon 6,341]

Alright i drew a cutie mark for her, its not final, but for now i'm using it, i changed her color scheme a little bit, and thats really it.

 

I'm open to name ideas now, since shes closer to being done, i'm not saying i'll use any, but feel free to suggest if you want.

 

Thanks to everyone who has helped so far btw!

I got nothing for names right now, but I'll try to help with that later.

 

Anyway, I have a suggestion to fix the size issue of the cutie mark. Instead of using Pony Creator to put the cutie mark in; put it on manually. You could use MS Paint (you'll have to change the white box around the cutie mark to do this), or you could use Paint.NET (I personally recommend using this.)

[Zygen 6,066]

I got nothing for names right now, but I'll try to help with that later.

 

Anyway, I have a suggestion to fix the size issue of the cutie mark. Instead of using Pony Creator to put the cutie mark in; put it on manually. You could use MS Paint (you'll have to change the white box around the cutie mark to do this), or you could use Paint.NET (I personally recommend using this.)

Its ok , you've helped so much already that you really shouldn't even feel like you have to anymore .

 

And actually thats a really good idea.. I never thought of that. Of course i'm gonna use gimp, because thats why i do my pony art on and what i have and am use to(Plus MS.Paint sucks .) but yeah thats actually a really clever idea, didn't think of it.

 

Thanks blue moon! Again .

[Blue Moon 6,341]

Its ok , you've helped so much already that you really shouldn't even feel like you have to anymore .

 

And actually thats a really good idea.. I never thought of that. Of course i'm gonna use gimp, because thats why i do my pony art on and what i have and am use to(Plus MS.Paint sucks .) but yeah thats actually a really clever idea, didn't think of it.

 

Thanks blue moon! Again .

No problem! I love helping!

 

So, good luck with the cutie mark, and I'll try to come up with some name ideas later.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here are some name suggestions:

 

 

Pearl

Shea

Aurelia

Juniper

Flora

Coral

Alena

Elena

Siena

Arianna

Pear

Pear Tree

Eggplant

April 

Summer

June

Meadow

Hannah

Wrenna

Fawn

Starla

Nora

Wyn

Isla

Harlow

Iona

You said you wanted one word names, and more human-like names.

 

 

Also, I randomly decided to draw a picture of your two OCs together. It's not the most romantic thing around, but oh well. Hope you like it.

 

 

 

Sorry for using a different snout for Zygen, but I couldn't get his normal snout right, so I just went with this one. Hope you don't mind.

Are there any specific words or letters that you want to have in The Mare Not Currently Named's names? That might be of use to come up with a name.

Edited August 18, 2013 by Blue Moon

[Zygen 6,066]

No problem! I love helping!

 

So, good luck with the cutie mark, and I'll try to come up with some name ideas later.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here are some name suggestions:

 

 

Pearl

Shea

Aurelia

Juniper

Flora

Coral

Alena

Elena

Siena

Arianna

Pear

Pear Tree

Eggplant

April 

Summer

June

Meadow

Hannah

Wrenna

Fawn

Starla

Nora

Wyn

Isla

Harlow

Iona

You said you wanted one word names, and more human-like names.

 

 

Also, I randomly decided to draw a picture of your two OCs together. It's not the most romantic thing around, but oh well. Hope you like it.

 

Zygen and OthersF.png

 

 

Sorry for using a different snout for Zygen, but I couldn't get his normal snout right, so I just went with this one. Hope you don't mind.

Are there any specific words or letters that you want to have in The Mare Not Currently Named's names? That might be of use to come up with a name.

Alrighty then

 

 

Well darn thats alot of names, i dunno, its hard to say if any totally catch me as the one.

 

I really don't know what i want for her name though :/. I really have no idea.

 

I'm just gonna have to read through a bunch of names and brainstorm them until one comes up i guess.

 

Hopefully one will hit me as the one.

 

thanks for the help though.

 

And I love the picture <3. Its really nice . I don't mind that the snout isn't the same, its nice to have my Oc's drawn together, especially since i'm not quite experienced enough to do so myself.

 

Plus i didn't even ask for it or anything, so that makes it all the more nice and makes me love it all the more .

 

Thanks , i really appreciate it! looks great!

 

Thats like, the first fully colored picture i have of them together(I have a sketch i got from someone else, but nothing fully colored yet.)

 

So again, thanks, for all your help, and the beautiful cute little adorable picture .

[~Silver Essence~ 2,625]

Wow, nice OC there Z.

 

If you still need a name, the best I can do is either harp happy or light tune.

 

Seems the most fitting if you ask me.

[Blue Moon 6,341]

Alrighty then

 

 

Well darn thats alot of names, i dunno, its hard to say if any totally catch me as the one.

 

I really don't know what i want for her name though :/. I really have no idea.

 

I'm just gonna have to read through a bunch of names and brainstorm them until one comes up i guess.

 

Hopefully one will hit me as the one.

 

thanks for the help though.

 

And I love the picture <3. Its really nice . I don't mind that the snout isn't the same, its nice to have my Oc's drawn together, especially since i'm not quite experienced enough to do so myself.

 

Plus i didn't even ask for it or anything, so that makes it all the more nice and makes me love it all the more .

 

Thanks , i really appreciate it! looks great!

 

Thats like, the first fully colored picture i have of them together(I have a sketch i got from someone else, but nothing fully colored yet.)

 

So again, thanks, for all your help, and the beautiful cute little adorable picture .

You're welcome!

 

Also, I have an idea that may help you find a name. Try making a thread specifically asking for help finding a name for your new OC. That may give you more names or ideas.

[Zygen 6,066]

Wow, nice OC there Z.

 

If you still need a name, the best I can do is either harp happy or light tune.

 

Seems the most fitting if you ask me.

Thanks Silver , glad you like her!

 

Both are nice names, but i kinda want a 1 word name more, not sure what, but i don't really want a 2 word name, especially since my ponysona is a 1 word name, and a 1 word name for my new OC makes the two of them fit together better.

 

But thanks for the help .

 

You're welcome!

 

Also, I have an idea that may help you find a name. Try making a thread specifically asking for help finding a name for your new OC. That may give you more names or ideas.

Hm, you know thats actually probably a good idea , i think i'll try and go ahead and make one of those.

 

Hopefully something will pop out to me.

 

Thanks again!

[~Silver Essence~ 2,625]

Thanks Silver , glad you like her!

 

Both are nice names, but i kinda want a 1 word name more, not sure what, but i don't really want a 2 word name, especially since my ponysona is a 1 word name, and a 1 word name for my new OC makes the two of them fit together better.

 

But thanks for the help .

 

Hm, you know thats actually probably a good idea , i think i'll try and go ahead and make one of those.

 

Hopefully something will pop out to me.

 

Thanks again!

Oh, then if you need a one name pony persona, here's the best I can come up with.

 

Creek or Jam

 

Seems fitting as well if you ask me, but that's just me.   

[Zygen 6,066]

Oh, then if you need a one name pony persona, here's the best I can come up with.

 

Creek or Jam

 

Seems fitting as well if you ask me, but that's just me.   

Hm, well idk, I think i'd like a more girly name personally, i might be going for a human name, it just seems like more humanish names will fit better to my OC.

 

They're good names, just not what i'm looking for(I'm freaking picky with names sorry :/.)

 

But thank you for your help again .

[Blue Moon 6,341]

Hm, well idk, I think i'd like a more girly name personally, i might be going for a human name, it just seems like more humanish names will fit better to my OC.

 

They're good names, just not what i'm looking for(I'm freaking picky with names sorry :/.)

But thank you for your help again .

You're welcome.

 

Also, do you mind if I make a thread asking for critique on that drawing I made? I'm trying to be a better artist, so constructive criticism would be nice.

[Zygen 6,066]

You're welcome.

 

Also, do you mind if I make a thread asking for critique on that drawing I made? I'm trying to be a better artist, so constructive criticism would be nice.

I don't mind at all, feel free! Its your drawing afterall haha.

 

I think you did a great job, feel free to make a thread though! I'm happy you made one .

[Blue Moon 6,341]

So, may I make the thread for the picture? I don't want to do that if I don't first get your permission to do so. I'll make sure to say they are your OCs.

 

@@Zygen

Okay, thanks!

 

But since they are your OCs, I felt the need to ask for your consent.

 

And no problem! It was really fun to draw.

Edited August 20, 2013 by Blue Moon

[Zygen 6,066]

So, may I make the thread for the picture? I don't want to do that if I don't first get your permission to do so. I'll make sure to say they are your OCs.

 

@@Zygen

Okay, thanks!

 

But since they are your OCs, I felt the need to ask for your consent.

 

And no problem! It was really fun to draw.

Well, i guess i understand that, but i'm fine with it i guess. Especially since you asked anyways .

 

And your welcome, I love the drawing, and I'm glad to hear you enjoyed drawing it!