Dripping Dreams

[Slice0Pie 815]

It is confirmed. Her name is Dripping Dreams. Ok, listing time.

Some of you were suggesting to change her colors to a more brighter color, but, I love her color the way it is, but, maybe if anyone suggests a color that I might like, then I will think about it.

Her cutie mark is a red heart with black paint dripping on it.

Funny stuff: One person was like 'I like how you said your old OC was to green, and yet this one has a lot of gray/black'. I used to love green, but now I hate it. And my other OC was, like, every thing on her was green, and it killed me

Her personality: Quiet, lonely, impatient, rude and mean at times, and she is mixed with insanity

Backstory? I am working on one right now ^^ Anyway, go ahead and post what you think!

[Noone 3]

It's good. It seems like an interesting character that you could make a good in depth back story to. All I would say as an improvement would be to put her wings down for one reasons. It will make her look a lot more sad and depressed. Also I would recommend just using this is that OC is for role plays.

[Slice0Pie 815]

Critiquing time. *puts on monocle and top hat*

The ear is too much like a triangle. The sides need to be pushed out a bit more, as seen in my avatar.

The mane is done incorrectly. The top should be smaller, the "v" should be closer to the end of the face, and the part behind her ear's length should match up with the part behind her head's length.

The face should be more circular, and the eye should be brought forward a little. Speaking of the eye, it's missing the white part and it has no reflections (little white circles.)

The muzzle (thing poking out of her face) should be turned a little, and the mouth should connect with the edge of the muzzle. The nostril should be a curved line (again, as seen in my avatar) and not a circle.

Her back should curve a bit rather than being a straight line.

The wings are done incorrectly. They should be brought up to about the center of her back, and the feathers should be more ovular.

The front left looks like it's fused with itself. The legs should be split into three sections, hoof, leg and joint. The hoof should be tilting, while the leg should extend from the top of the hoof. The joint should connect the top of the leg to the body.

The front right leg should be a bit slimmer.

The back left flank should stick out more. It should cut into the black left leg, and not meld into the wing.

The back left leg should be straighter and a bit longer. The same goes for the back right leg.

The tail should come out of the flank. Part of the tail is coming out of the back left leg, and that's a no-no. Make the tail curve back up into the flank rather than going straight.

Your lines are very jagged and need to be thickened and straightened.

Holy shit, calm down ;3;. This is so much critique!

I tried making the pose like my avatar, but I can see I failed.

I draw better on paper.

I try my best.

The program I use is crap.

I don't know how to use one of the lines on my cruddy program to make it smoother.

I use Paint and WLMM.

When I uploaded it, I saw I forgot the white part, and the circles.

Omg, I feel like a terrible artist now. I need to practice more. That's what I am going to do now.

I enjoy critique and try to get better each time, but this much critique made me feel so bad.

I am not cut out to draw this stuff yet

It's good. It seems like an interesting character that you could make a good in depth back story to. All I would say as an improvement would be to put her wings down for one reasons. It will make her look a lot more sad and depressed. Also I would recommend just using this is that OC is for role plays.

I used that to make her, but I have to redraw it since I cant upload stuff that's not my art.

Mostly because Octavia's hall is for your art only.

Edited August 28, 2013 by CadenceDerp