Crit my Surprise Drawing

[nami438 90]

To get back into digital linework, I picked out a sketch from months ago and inked it. What do you think? Criticism is needed :8
 
Surprise

Pinkie Pie Recolor

 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

D'awww they are both adorable. Love that style!

 

Could've made the muzzle a bit rounder though. 

[nami438 90]

Thanks, I've been working on rounder muzzles/snouts. I'll get around to uploading some new sketches one of these days.

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,354]

Very well done, I'd say.

The right wing coinciides with the hindleg somewhat unfortunately, but these things happen.

If anything, I'd say watch out for outlines getting to thin in places and maybe consider adding some highlights to the irises (they look a bit flat at the moment).

[nami438 90]

Very well done, I'd say.

The right wing coinciides with the hindleg somewhat unfortunately, but these things happen.

If anything, I'd say watch out for outlines getting to thin in places and maybe consider adding some highlights to the irises (they look a bit flat at the moment).

Thank you!

 

That's what I get for drawing the wings after drawing the main body, lol...

 

I'll try adding some show-style highlights.

Eyes updated, shading added:

Pinkie Pie only b/c I somehow deleted the one with Surprise colors:

 

Eyes updated, shading added:

Pinkie Pie only b/c I somehow deleted the one with Surprise colors: