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yisetab28

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  1. I just drew it quickly on paint at 11pm, so yeah, sorry for the messiness. And is Ponyville really that close? It takes something like 6 hours on a horse carriage which would go at something like 4km/h to get to Canterlot, meaning Canterlot would be something like 24km away. It also takes less than a day, so lets say another 6-7 hours to get the the Crystal Empire on a train going at a speed from 150 to 200km/h, making it anywhere from 900 to 1200 km away, giving us an approximately 2000 something km large continent, which is not that small. Based on that, Equestria Mainland's size would be somehwere near Europe's, so unless the planet has a circumference 8 times inferior to earth's, there's probably way more on this world.
  2. Well, based on my headcanons, elements figured in the show and plot related issues for my fanfic, Equestria as a planet would look something like this... Note that this is a fanfic set several years in the future with Luna and Celestia splitting again. Saddle Arabia would be under control of the Celestian empire, with the Griffons allied with Luna. For Maretonia to be so important for Celestia in the season 4 pre-finale, it could be an important exporter or resource island vital to Equestrian economy. So, is it half way realistic?
  3. This is the main continent I've talked about. You see, Saddle Arabia, the Griffon's french land and many other places are not there. Plus, the bottom of the map is not a tundra or artic weather place, so this map probably ends at the planet's equator, and there's probably more to it.
  4. From the start it was pretty straightforward, just Equestria, a big pangea land. But then there's Saddle Arabia, Maretonia, the old frozen world, etcetera etcetera. I'm a bit lost in all of this, so I'm asking you guys/girls out there if anyone has a map of Equestria with all that has been presented in the show. From what I see from the official map, Equestria is in the northern hemishphere of the planet they're on, so there's probably much more than that.
  5. Well I don't think they have anything to do with Brad now, he's had his chance in 2 movies and just stayed the same, never changed a little bit. Flash on the other hand can still be saved, as he has been seen rarely in the episodes. He still didn't show how he really was, and I think it would be a big waste of potential to not give him a good backstory. Sure, there are problems like Twili getting an instant crush on him and him rising so fast through the ranks, going from recruit to princess's personal guard in not even a year, but he could be saved. Bonus joke Shining Armor and Flash are in a bar, drinking cider. SA: Hey Flash, tell me, what's the smartest thing you've ever done? FS: Your little sister. And that's the story of why we have never seen Flash again.
  6. Too cheesy. The fic is here (http://www.fimfiction.net/story/256918/symphony-of-steel), and if you read it, you'll see it's more of a darker fic centered on war instead of a big action "Totally good and awesome guys VS Totally idiotic and unskilled guys" fic.
  7. No picture, I'm not drawing colts yet. I won't use PC, and even if I did, I don't think his physical appearance would matter much in choosing a name for him. Sounds good, he does have less experience with big calibers though. He's the commander and was a scout in a previous war, the gunner specializes in using the tank's main guns. The only disadvantage is that it sounds way too cheesy and out of place for the character.
  8. I've been writing a fanfic for a while, but I still need a name for one of the characters, a tank commander. I've been trying to figure out a name that would represent him, or any good name in general, but couldn't find one, so I'm asking you guys. The said commander already participated in previous wars, and because of that, has a lot of experience with firearms and combat tactics, but also because of that, he suffers from PTSD. Based on this info, how do you think he should be named?
  9. A compass is way too generic. From what I've learned from camping and forest survival exercises, a knife would be a very useful thing to have on the road. So maybe a swiss knife for a CM, or like Luka said, a stick. You never know when a stick is going to be useful for you.
  10. Also, races and provenance in MLP does not seem to work like real human race and provenance. Although most of the supposed Caucasians are ponies, some of them are griffons like Gustave. I don't really think the concept of race even exists in that world. There are so many colors and different species that classifying them would be a really big pain in the ass, and till now, the only two location and species link I've found are with Saddle Arabia and Griffons.
  11. It's really good as backstory. It also fits in with how most over rational and curious people are, not a lot of social skills but still pretty good folks to be around. Really love her! Also, strangely reminds me of myself.
  12. Based on what I see, she would probably a geographer or map maker, combining adventure and serious. A grey coat with a little brighter mane may do the trick. Maybe her mind will be more artistic or rational, that depends on how she sees the world. But for a serious character, a more rational and logical mind would suit her better. Also, maybe change the mane style to a longer tied together mane, like what would happen when you're outside during a long period of time and move a lot.
  13. You should really look into genetics and how cannon parents affect their child's appearance. For psychological characteristics, I think Fluttershy's daughter would be a more extrovert mare, as the saying goes in french: "A greedy father has a generous child", meaning characteristics in the parents will be the opposite of those in their child's. But really, I don't know how she will be. Just keep in mind children will be willing to follow their parent's behavior when they are little, but as they grow up, they kind of get away from that.
  14. So, I've been writing my fic for a few weeks, but I've seem to have come to an impasse because of the lack of constructive criticism. So, would any critics out there be willing to help me with it? I would like to know if you like the story, if it's too fast paced, literally anything to help me make it better. Really, any kind of criticism would be really appreciated. (Story link:http://www.fimfiction.net/story/256918/symphony-of-steel)
  15. I like the pony Flash better because he didn't have his chance yet. He's only been in short glimpses in episodes, and the only bad thing I can find is that he got to royal personal guard that quickly. Brad is just a 2D piece of cardboard, but Flash could become an awesome character if explained.
  16. Brad is undeniably dead, but Flash "could" still be saved with a good backstory. If Faust comes in and gets him out of the marketing cliche zone, I could like him.
  17. It was strange at first, but after a few months, it's become a little bit more normal. I just don't like their anorexic hooker design made only for marketing.
  18. Unless they bring the TARDIS in and Flash out, I'm not watching it.
  19. Well who knows? The concept of race isn't the same as the concept of species, and race for ponies would just be coat color. These are ponies, not humans you know. AJ could very well be the most tanned, as she is the one who works outside the most.
  20. No one? Can someone at least tell me if the story is good?
  21. Voted yes cause there's no HELL YEAH! My fic is also set in a similar timeline, and it also has the Solar Empire in an all out war against the Lunar Republic! I could help you with making your fic historically correct, as I love WW2 tanks and airplanes and know a lot about how they worked, their specs and how they would realistically behave themselves in combat. Would you be interested in collaborating with me to write the fic? And also while we're at it, what is your War Thunder username?
  22. Maybe format it a big? A whole chunk is really difficult to understand. Also, please, no random capital letters. Also, improve your grammar a little. The story can be understood, but if you want to get this published on Fimfic, correct the grammar errors.
  23. I am currently still working on the first story of my alternate timeline, but I've become a little stucked due to lack of feedback. I mean it's nice upvoting my story, downvoting is also nice to a certain extent, but not without feedback. So, could you guys here provide me with some basic feedback on how "Symphony of Steel" is and where the story should be headed? (Story link:http://www.fimfiction.net/story/256918/the-30th-tiger)
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