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  1. yisetab28
    The attack was a cheap DDoS made with a 3rd part program, I highly doubt that the data is gone. Even if it is, I have a .txt copy of my 3000 word story anyways. You should do that too, writing stories on a notepad file before putting it in FF.
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    Why would that kek sect even do that? If they wanted the world to know they're mindless SJWs who take down anything they do not like then you have my official Québec "Bravo". Bravo for taking down a site of perfectly fine writers who just want to share their creations to others. Why not take down Stormfront or the WBC website if you wanted to stop degeneracy? Also, Bravo for showing us you can't even hack by using LOIC to do your stuff instead of you know, doing it yourself with your own computer knowledge?
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    Any idea of why FF is down?
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    Well, I've got my alternate WW2 timeline fic going on here, it's listed as adventure in FimFiction. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/256918/the-30th-tiger
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    So, my fanfic has been going on a little bit longer, and now it's published and chapter 2 is on its way. Are there any things to change? Did I write this right? Leave the criticism in the comments in Fimfiction or directly here on the thread. Story link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/256918/the-30th-tiger
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    May I ask, is it vector art? Digital art?
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    The anatomy seems a little problematic. I would recommend you to go here (http://www.reddit.com/r/MLPdrawingschool/) and submit it, it's a nice small community of MLP artists. As for the backstory, it seems a little flat. Just the stereotypical "girly outside tomboy inside" girl. As for any character, add flaws. For example, take out the instant befriending with everypony. That is a little too op, and really unrealistic in real situations. Most people, unless they have incredible amounts of charisma, will take weeks, if not months to become friends with someone.
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    Just watched some old episodes again, and I can agree now that they did not create the world. As for the sun and moon thingy, raising the sun is still a pretty important task. Living 1000 years is also something worth mentioning, as even though villains also lived that long, they may rather be demons. Unless... Just had this idea: what if Equestria royalty functioned like Egyptian pharaohs? The current Luna and Celestia are just Equestrian representatives who are considered gods, like in ancient Egypt with the pharaohs. They also both have a cult about the sun, so ancient Egypt is canon confirmed?
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    Normally if the wavelength got less intense at greater distances, the colors would range from blue to red respectively from the inside to the outside, but this does not happen. So maybe magic, but also maybe f*cked up physics in Equestria. P.S. Not for advertising, but if you were interested in how that WW2 fanfic I was writing was going, the 2nd chapter is started and the 1st one finished on fimfiction. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/256918/the-30th-tiger
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    My comment from above, and its theory about the electromagnetic wave boom instead of a mechanical wave boom.
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    So, anybody thinks the cancer pony in Read it and weep it got it because of a rainboom?
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    Technically EQG is canon, but I prefer to think it's not. I hope it's not. The IDW comics could be canon, but if you want to stay safe, consider it non canon. As for the DD books, you didn't watch Daring Don't didn't you? AK. Yearling or whatever is her name is Daring Do, and she is not from a long time ago. RD and the Mane 6 actually helped her in her most recent adventure.
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    Well still a more brighter future than my alternate ending with the Rainbow Power draining all the magic left in the tree, thus destroying the main magic source of Equestria and disabling magic in Equestria altogether.
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    I don't think that Rarispike should be canon. While Rarity knows about Spike's feelings, we need to remember that Spike is still at least 8 years younger than Rarity, and considered sexually immature for his species. I think Rarity only thinks of Spike as an adorable baby, but nothing past friends. With that comes the fact that Spike is relatively (excuse me for the expression) dumb compared to most other main characters. He can barely focus on what he is doing, has a lot to learn and cannot apply a theorical credo correctly in the practice world, as seen in "Spike at your service". Furthermore, he is from an entirely different species, and if Rarity loved him, it would be the equivalent of zoophilism or bestiality in the human world. So unless Rarity has some kind of mental disorder, no, Rarispike is not canon. Enjoy this nice PaK36 cannon for now.
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    Well there's that time in Winter Wrap Up when Colgate and BP snuggled together, along with AJ doing the same with other ponies, but saying that this case confirms LGBT ponies would be a little far-stretched. It did look lesbian as hell when I first saw it though.
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    That may be possible. I once had a small theory about the sonic rainbooms: Unlike the normal sonic booms which create mechanical waves, sonic rainbooms create electromagnetic waves from all over the spectrum. The inside layer without the rainbow ranges from gamma to UV rays. The rainbow layer is visible light, and the other exterior layers are everything from infrared to radio waves. The position of the color would suggest that the wave length is somehow smaller on certain parts, which is explained by a totally rational solution magic. So basically, if you're too close to a SRB, you get irradiated and die from radiation poisoning. Well, this is nice in a magical world about rainbows and friendship.
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    Because you know, they created the world, raise the sun and moon everyday, defeated Discord one time and have lived for more than 1000 years?
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    Well as for any OC, make him have flaws. From what you told me it looks like he/she could be socially akward, and have little to no friends at all except maybe Fluttershy or some other pony who shares his/her interests, or that can go past his mute condition. Communication with other ponies would be extremely difficult as it's kind of impossible for them to have a language based on finger movements, so he's probably very misunderstood. Even with that, do not make him a cliche "no one understands absolutely perfect guy" pony. Even though people reject him, he is not necessarily a completely flawless character to anyone who gets past that.
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    Just do what I do when writing a fanfic: try getting in the said character's mind. Try having Pinkie's childish view of the world, and imagine how you would react if you had that knowledge and that vision of the world.
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    So, I've been writing on my fanfic a bit more and I would need feedback. It's about a tank crew 25 years after the events of the S4 finale, after the rainbow power has drained up all that was left of magic in Equestria. The main problem of this story has been introduced, and I would like to know if the characters are well written, if they're not too sue-ish and if the events are realistic. Story link below. A copy is also in the attached files, although the formatting didn't go very well and the text is really a pain in the plot to read. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/256918/the-30th-tiger So, anything to change? The 30th Tiger.txt
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    Mary sue sensors are active! Load HOAMS shells! (High Originality Anti Mary Sue) Feuer!
  22. yisetab28
    Coming from a novice drawer, don't be afraid. If you don't learn to draw quickly and your hands are always shaky at the start, it's normal. If drawing on a physical medium is too difficult, you can try vector art, which is basically building ponies with program generated curves. But for the love of Celestia, DO NOT USE ANY TEMPLATE OF THE PONY CREATOR GAME OR RECOLOR PONIES. That is highly uncreative and it ruins the efforts of hundreds of artists who could have helped you, but who didn't get to do it because someone used a generator to create a pony and claimed it as "art". Recoloring, templates and generator games are nice to make a first sketch of your OC, to appreciate how it will be, but it is not something to use and claim as your own. If you really want an OC, ask an artist or learn to draw. Below, I'll give you a link to the MLP drawing school, a nice community of drawers and learners. http://www.reddit.com/r/MLPdrawingschool/ Also (not to advertise myself or anything), if you have an idea of how you want your OC to be, I could try drawing it out for free so that you can at least get an idea. At least it's going to be a fun exercise. Or you can ask some of the commission artists, but they normally charge you for it. PM me if you're interested. As for the color scheme, do not use fully saturated colors, they are just awful and hurt your eyes. Use colors you like, or colors that you think will match your OC's personality. Mane and tail should be same color, and even if red and black is ok, using it can be quite a challenge for an inexperienced artist. Then, for the race, if it's a self-insert you should go with a race you like more, if it's an OC, use a race that identifies to his personality and suits his occupation. Also, do not make an Alicorn, please. From what we understand with the show, Alicorns are godly beings who rule Equestria, and they should not be abused. Also, before even choosing your color scheme, think about your OC's backstory. Many people just go on Pony Creator and create a pony, and then let other people choose a name and story for them while not even putting their hearth into it, or even worse, adopt ponies. A consistent backstory is critical, and it should be develloped before the actual character.
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    I realize that, and the reason why I didn't say Flash Sentry is because I do not hate him, except for the ridiculously fast promotion. Flash has potential, and giving him a backstory and making him appear in other episodes would make him a better character. Brad however, has been featured in 2 movies and has no role whatsoever.
  24. yisetab28
    Brad. Lack of backstory, used only and solely as a plot device and unites multiple cliches and stereotypes in a show I fell in love with for challenging them. Also, his rise to become a princesses personal guard and another's "love interest" is way too fast for any decent character, and even novice writers will see the Gary Stu under him.
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    As Midnight said, give us a feeling Twilight is upset to make the intro really spot on. Maybe tell the story part time form a 3rd person "god" narrator and another part in italics with what's happening in Twilight's mind. Example: "Hey Twilight, mighty fine of ya helpin' us get rid of dem changelings!" said Applejack. "We really couldn't have done it without ya and your suspicion about that Cadence!" Well why didn't you stand with me earlier when I had those suspicions? Why did you leave me behind and then try to make it sound like you always stood by me? Stuff like that, with Twi going paranoid and doubting about friendship during the story.
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