Lord Valtasar

i was pretty dissapointed when the first dragon age came out,mostly because i had great expectations it being bioware and kind of a successor to baldurs gate and Neverwinter but Sacred 3 takes the cake i think edit: i just remembered elder scrolls online,it was certainly the biggest dissapointment in my videogame history

like a swan,white and elegant with a dark amethyst mane and as for what marks her flank three cerulean diamonds there Rarity 23

Our brightest artist,Rarity meet who paints with threads ribbons and silks and all ponies her work seek thats why she oppened three boutiques Rarity 22

a splendid morn,brand new day so i'll try not to be rude applejack you don't know they say until she calls you sugarcube AppleJack 81

or it could be Luna desperetely trying to make her nights attract attention I was in madagascar during the Rainy season,but they had a drought so the river level droped and we had repeated blackouts(the power came from a dam facility)

The great Countdown OMG only 1 day left !!! drawing

Daring Do discovers the lost land of the Alicorns(my rendition of it at least) Daring came across an Ancient Civilization that once thrived with Alicorns however something must have happened to wipe them out from this time in history. As she ventured deep within the ruins she came across an old temple,going inside her heart ached seeing it engulfed by decay and rot,but it was also exhilirating,thats what she lives for.As she ventured deeper she reached a heavy old door,trying to push it open she struggled to move it at first,but eventually it succumbed to her strenghth and the door flew wide open,landing with a thud, Daring scrambled up brushing the dirt off her with her wings,as she scanned the room,she noticed its in a surprisingly good state,there was an old book case with some scrolls still intact on its shelves.Picking one up at random she unraveled it and started reading... as she read the first scroll she frowned,at first glance it seemed like a poem,but as she progressed it looked more like a prophecy we are immortal,or so we think but our race faces certain doom a wizard with great promise we'll make king and crown him in this very room but for his arrogance we will all sink to endless time's depths in a loop and he'll imprison us and horrors bring for his intentions differ from what they look this fate shivers up my mane for its much worse than timely death we'll suffer in this cycle anew again and never draw our final breath so hear me now and listen well for we must put trust in two foals sent them away far from this hell and hope they don't forget their goals one will be born under sun's sign and will inherit all its power the other is her sister and don't sigh for the moon she will raise and lower their quest will be to find the six spoked star and raise it delicately with care for she's the one to heal time's own scar doing so freeing every colt and mare to know her look for the birth of a dragon under a rainbow blazing in the sky a unicorn she'll be and i can not fathom how she'll achieve it so i won't even try the star that gleams is her adversary but she will teach her in time's ways in finding friends she needs some comentary and a student thus she gains but on her own she'll never find us so she must find the sacred tree to gain the map to where he binds us and come to finaly set us free "Lighttsong the Royal Seer" many thanks to @RaphLuna for the original prologue that inpired this all and to @ChB since his Zacora Cider competition made me discover i could actually rhyme

6 the lyrics are a bit weird because its a part of a story with the rest of the album but i think this one can stand alone just fine

thank you very much,i hope you achieve your dreams and get published,after all isn't it the greatest thing when you get to share with the world something you made completely on your own?that said i'm already writing a non-mlp story for some years now,and the goal is to publish it in manga-ish style and format.but its not in poem-form so maybe i'll experiment with the poems here first before adding them to the mix.thank you again,amd the one with the twins sounds awesome(i wish you hadn't told me she dies though so i could read it unspoiled when its out) p.s. and when you do get published,sent me a message maybe i'll be able to make you a nice cover art

7/10 for a bit there i was afrait it's only going to say "dressed as goblins" for the whole song just because we are forced to listen to the whole thing

as false as it gets,give me a blizard but don't scortch me, i mostly love rainy days of autumn and early spring TPAM is secretly wishing to be a flower

did you take C at least?when i fail i fail with F- doc,i see dead people

YOU WONT GUESS WHAT KILLED MY BOREDOM (watch till the end it was NOT STAGED) reading a book

it used to be mark crilley but he's become a bit repetitive lately so,Ross draws,

i'm still a big fan of A song of ice and fire and everything Brandon Sanderson writes(especially mistborn)wizard of earthsea and wheel of time were also a great part of my life,basicaly everything fantasy related i adore but if we only talk about tv then rick and morty and berserk

it could increase my prose in rhyming if only english was my 1st tongue like Twilight sparkle books i'm hitting and thankfully it helps a ton Twilight Sparkle 2 but sometimes it becomes so scary and i become intimidated this forum seemed good place to tarry and test my skill without the hatred for to release it to the world i'm weary like fluttershy i hide where shaded fluttershy - (invalid but waiting 30 minutes between poems seemed counter productive when i have to go) and since this is already invalid i think i'm out this time for good i wish you well AJ you got it you have worked hard these rhymes to shoot AJ - and if you ever want some inspiration full with rhymed stories of the old sort canterbury tales is my recomendation since its what got me in this sport (plus it has the word Canter in it as a bonus) and though i don't expect your admiration i thank you all for bearing this presentation

so rarity as i was saying can be a bit too slick and sweet but that our admiration isn't swaying more like increases it with speed Rarity 17

cider affects you badly,its clear said rarity with slight disgust first burps and now two "somethings"dear? maybe to hit the hay you must Rarity 16

but now let us go back to Rarity who loves her gems all bright and shiny but get only the ones with clarity for drama queens need little reason to be whiny Rarity 15

and since i went this far,i might as well go forth i'm adding Twilight Sparkle as the fourth Twilight Sparkle :1

oops. granted but they get along so well that all merge with eachother and indivutuality loses its meaning i wish i hadn't skipped you

bad choice of wish then but its granted but it won't stop growing ever it'll tear you assunder i wish everyone spoke with rhymes like zacora

does it matter if i rhyme for two or three its a bit crazy so this one goes to pinkie pinkie pie:3