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Iridescent Edge

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  1. “Thanks, Shiny ( @Shiny Silvermoon).” *Iridescent drank the potion, gagging slightly at the bitter taste. But after a few seconds, he could feel the potion’s effects settling in. He sprinted off to the proper path of the race. It did take a while, and Iridescent was still behind the other racers, but he eventually did make it back to the track. He resumed his strategy of bucking trees as he felt the cool air wash over him, sending a shiver down his spine.*
  2. "Now I will call your names, and our judges will determine if you have passed the exam. However! I must warn you, there are many ways to fail. If you fly too far west, you will fail. If you drop below the cloud layer, you will fail. If you perform the exam in reverse, you will fail! What if we opt out of taking the test? The exam is offered again in the fall, and upon that exam, you will fail! What if we finish too fast? Then you will fail! And what if we pass? Then you exit the educational system... and that is a world an educator is frowned upon to understand. I know not what will happen. So, we don't have to go to school anymore?! I assume yes! Though I dare not contemplate the consequences..."
  3. “I’m not under the influence of alcohol, I’m under the influence of adolescence.”
  4. The only criticism I can think of is that their Cutie-Mark is a little disproportionately small.
  5. Iridescent Edge had finally caught up with Shiny Silvermoon (@Shiny Silvermoon), screeching to a halt once he reached the clearing. He noticed Dynamo pad (@Dynamo Pad) was there too, and weakly, momentarily raised his hoof in a greeting-like gesture. "Hi...*pant* Shiny...*pant*" Iridescent leans against a tree for support as he catches his breath. "I see...*pant*...you found...*pant*...your bat..."
  6. Iridescent flinched slightly from the thunder as her noticed @Shiny Silvermoon running away. “Hey! Wait!” Iridescent gallops after her. At least, he tries to. Iridescent pants heavily as he feels like his lungs are going to explode. He can’t tell is he’s mostly soaked in precipitation or perspiration at this point.
  7. I like your OC. I think they're endearing and interesting. However, I do feel like the part where Luna mentored them feels a little forced. That aspect could be reworked or fleshed out a little more. But overall, I think this is pretty good! As for a name for their specific morph? Hmmm... How about...Alterling?
  8. What software did you use to create this?
  9. I feel like a goldfish right now.
  10. Welcome, fellow organism, to the Major League Pickleball Forums.
  11. We welcome our newest initiate, @Starlight Forever, to the My Little Pony Forums. May your friendships be strong and your enjoyment flourish.
  12. “I see.” Iridescent Edge pauses momentarily, his hoof idly dragging small circles in the mud. “My name’s Iridescent Edge. Would you like me to help you find your pet?”
  13. *Iridescent had noticed how @Shiny Silvermoon’s bat had ran off, and after a moment of hesitation, he walked up to her.* “Uh, excuse me, but…was that your pet that just ran away?” *Iridescent points his hoof in the direction that Socrate disappeared into.*
  14. *Iridescent Edge suddenly comes to a stop when he sees the rushing river. He cautiously puts one hoof in and nearly slips on the wet rock. He looks up again and sees two Alicorns trying to block the current with their wings while the other contestants push through the current. Iridescent steps another hoof in, careful not to slip on any rocks this time. He takes another step, then another, hooves shaking with each one. Until, he eventually climbs his way to the other side. Unfortunately, Iridescent’s back hoof slips on a rock and his face falls in the mud. He then gets up and takes a moment to catch his breath before running to the next tree.*
  15. Happy birthday, fellow organism.:fluttershy:

  16. Well, I did that and got this: What should her name and backstory be?
  17. Welcome to the forums, fellow 17-year-old. Or, welcome back, I suppose. Also, you have the same name as that one boos from Super Mario RPG.
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