web How did I do? [I made a Ytp, and want honest critique/tips on improving.]

[SilverStarApple 849]

I made a Youtube Poop-styled parody of Naruto, but I tried to put in a MLP reference whenever I could. This vid is only the first part of episode one, I'm probably going to make the episodes better for the next ones.

 

 

How did I do this time, and how can I improve?

Edited September 26, 2014 by Asquerade

[Banul 3,831]

I made a Youtube Poop-styled parody of Naruto, but I tried to put in a MLP reference whenever I could. This vid is only the first part of episode one, I'm probably going to make the episodes better for the next ones.

 

 

How did I do this time, and how can I improve?

Its a good start, but its not obnoxious enough. observe:

 

 

Notice how there is some stupid shit happening at all times. I felt that in your video, there were too many long stretches of just the normal show going on.

[remove p l e a s e ? 800]

Looks okay, but I should ask what software you used.

I'd recommend something like Sony Movie Studio, which is only 50-60 US dollars.

Visually, it would need improvement.

[SilverStarApple 849]

Looks okay, but I should ask what software you used.

I'd recommend something like Sony Movie Studio, which is only 50-60 US dollars.

Visually, it would need improvement.

I used Windows Movie Maker, because I am a poor, sad sack of fail who cannot shell out that many US Dollars when he can barely afford 29p noodles most days.

[Snow Frostflame 3,567]

here is a video on what to do and not to do

 

I have not made a YTP but I plan on doing them with my friend sometime much later we would make a good team I would give him ideas on what to do and how to do it and he will edit the videos but we don't plan on doing this tell much later in the future