"Umbra" comic

[Minos 40]

Hi, there. I wanna introduce you a comic, name Umbra, based on survival game Don`t starve.

Warning: I am non-english speaking person, so It may be not perfect.

 

 

If you liked it, you can find other pages on tumblr, or on Deviantart.

If you find something wrong, please tell me.

Edited June 22, 2015 by Minos

[Odyssey 5,713]

Hello @Minos! Since this topic deals with a piece of visionary work, I have moved it from the Other Fan Works sub-forum to the Fan Art sub-forum.

[~Kitty~ 165]

Wow... You did a great job! I envy you- I wish I could draw as great cx Other than a few grammatical errors, everything was perfect! (I know you can't speak English very well) And yes- you posted in the correct forum section ^^ It's fabulous =D

[That Bored Mare 10]

Good Job! But I do advise you spend a little more time on the figures, the background looks too detailed compared to the characters. Try shifting your importance on them, they are what makes the story.

[Minos 40]

Or, maybe I should post ALL the comic here? I just didn`t want to overload the page.