ooc Sombra's Shadow [OOC]

[sunfury 20]

its fine but i'm curious what was the reason ? still too op?

[Pucksterv 4,508]

its fine but i'm curious what was the reason ? still too op?

To op, not a real good backstory. just not much depth.

[sunfury 20]

i can change it if you want because the real back story is super sad there is death and revenge in it its sad

[MozillaToast 233]

Hey, I have an OC in developmen but is good for RP right now. Still writing the backstory with a couple of good friends and sorting out minor details.

 

 

 

Username:Tempest Shift

OC name: Moonbane (Link: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/moonbane-r8591 )

Role: Recruit/General

Fraction: Harmony

Extra: Is an undead batpony, who uses wingblades as weapons.

 

 

[Pucksterv 4,508]

i can change it if you want because the real back story is super sad there is death and revenge in it its sad

I'm going to start the rp pretty soon, you can make whatever backstory you want. Just make it in time and you might still have a chance.

[sunfury 20]

nah its fine since i made a rp too so i'm way too busy doing it maybe another time(if there is another time....)

[Pucksterv 4,508]

Hey, I have an OC in developmen but is good for RP right now. Still writing the backstory with a couple of good friends and sorting out minor details.

 

 

 

Username:Tempest Shift

OC name: Moonbane (Link: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/moonbane-r8591 )

Role: Recruit/General

Fraction: Harmony

Extra: Is an undead batpony, who uses wingblades as weapons.

 

 

Your oc does indeed need a bit more backstory. I have to discuss with the others if he will be accepted or not.

nah its fine since i made a rp too so i'm way too busy doing it maybe another time(if there is another time....)

Alright

Edited August 4, 2015 by Pucksterv

[MozillaToast 233]

Your oc does indeed need a bit more backstory.

Ok, so my friends and I have come up with a lesser detailed version of the final backstory. If you feel it isn't enough then cool but, if its not too much could you give it a glance over and see if it's detailed enough for now?

[Pucksterv 4,508]

Ok, so my friends and I have come up with a lesser detailed version of the final backstory. If you feel it isn't enough then cool but, if its not too much could you give it a glance over and see if it's detailed enough for now?

Backstory looks good but I still need to discuss your application with the others. Also, harmony side does not have any ranks. that is only for the Sombra side

Edited August 4, 2015 by Pucksterv

[Pripyat Pony 2,608]

@@Pucksterv, Speaking of the Sombra side, perhaps it might be a good idea to close signups for the Harmony side so that we can get more on the Dark team? Only a suggestion, mind.

[Pucksterv 4,508]

@@Pucksterv, Speaking of the Sombra side, perhaps it might be a good idea to close signups for the Harmony side so that we can get more on the Dark team? Only a suggestion, mind.

Nah, I think it's best to keep it open like this.

[Randimaxis 8,652]

@@Randimaxis,

 

Sorry for the late responds, a bit busy at the moment.

Your oc looks good, a good chance that you will be accepted. Although I have to discuss it with the others first.

 

 

I shall wait patiently.  Thankies!

[Pucksterv 4,508]

@,

 

Do you have a character yet? Cause we might be starting the rp soon. 

[That One Techpriest You Used To Know 2,286]

@@Pucksterv, 

username: Magos Amphrose

Name oc plus link: Lilith Crow
What side (Harmony or Sombra): Sombra
What rank (only for sombra's side): Recruit/Captain (take your pick; Capt. preferred)
If Sombra's side, why: Lilith has journeyed to the Crystal Empire to serve under Sombra, hoping that she can use the resources at her disposal to pursue her own side-quest of destroying the monster that destroyed her home. She has no care about the populace, or of the Princesses, or of the Elements of harmony, or of the rebellion- she only cares about destroying this beast, and she'll do whatever she needs to, even if that means she'll sell her soul to darkness.
Something extra about your character that I need to know: If caught alone and talked to as opposed to immediately destroyed, she might be able to be talked into crossing sides, since she is, above all else, a survivalist. She'll take probable death over certain death any day.

 

((Please keep in mind that her abilities are still being worked on; her most potent skills will probably rely on her limited amounts of enchanted arrows of various abilities- magical armor-piercing, a fiery explosion, a single-target freeze for live captures, etc))

[Pucksterv 4,508]

@,

 

Sorry it took so long to respond. I like the character, I really do. I'll talk with Jonas about it if he is online tomorrow 

Oh probably no captain though.

Edited August 6, 2015 by Pucksterv

[Pucksterv 4,508]

@,

 

Your character is Accepted! Only she will not be a captain, she will be a recruit, fighting among the shadow recruits. 

 

@,

 

Although I do not like the idea of immortality, I have come to the conclusion that your character is accepted

 

@@Randimaxis,

 

I've discussed your character, you are accepted! One thing though, there are no ranks on the harmony side so that part of your application will not apply. 

https://mlpforums.com/topic/135114-sombras-shadow/

Finished the first post, rp is now online!

Edited August 8, 2015 by Pucksterv

[Randimaxis 8,652]

Wow... ranks?  Okay, uhm... maybe a Sgt.?  He doesn't need to be high-ranking; just enough to not be a fresh recruit... if that's okay.

 

(Just curious: was it just easier to add ranks, or is there a different reason?) 

[Pucksterv 4,508]

 

 

Wow... ranks?  Okay, uhm... maybe a Sgt.?  He doesn't need to be high-ranking; just enough to not be a fresh recruit... if that's okay.

 

I made a typo, I meant no ranks instead of now  

[Randimaxis 8,652]

It's okay, I understand type-o's misstaks  issewz problumes...

 

... I feel your pain.

[Pucksterv 4,508]

@@Randimaxis,

 

You mention Diamond a lot in your post (which is blazed's oc) but you quoted me... are you talking to Diamond or did you get the names wrong and meant my oc? 

[Randimaxis 8,652]

I was in the midst of posting when Blaze posted; I was trying to add Diamond in - my apologies if it came out strangely.

[Pucksterv 4,508]

I was in the midst of posting when Blaze posted; I was trying to add Diamond in - my apologies if it came out strangely.

Ooh, I see, logical. Did Harcout notice Trivy running towards the ruins? (A bit vague for me still if he did or not)

[Randimaxis 8,652]

He did... gimme a mo'; I'll fix it.

[Pucksterv 4,508]

He did... gimme a mo'; I'll fix it.

alright

[Randimaxis 8,652]

Done.  Hopefully, it now makes more sense.

 

Am I giving the feeling of desperation properly?