Hope you enjoy my new song which was featured on EQD

[Nymira 31]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W153JfVeb5I  Thanks! Love you all! And I hope you enjoy the song. The EQD link is down below. Thanks again!!!

 

 

http://www.equestriadaily.com/2016/08/spotlight-music-my-last-words-ill-show.html

[4HFan 476]

Awesome!!! Four and a half stars!

[Nymira 31]

Awesome!!! Four and a half stars!

<3 thanks!!!!!!! sooooo muchhhhh!!!

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

Ok.

 

It's an ok listen. However, the electronic drive just takes away from the emotion that this song is conveying. This song, being about saying goodbye, should be more of a light electro/chill piece, with a more melodic category of waves such as solo sines, squares and triangles. Also, you might want to slow the song down from that 120bpm feel, because that's the biggest thing that is keeping the emotion out of this song. Strip the 120bpm percussion and replace it with a more chill/soul percussion to give it that emotion.

 

I do like those bright saws you were using. However, I'd lower the attack on them to make them sound like high-end synth strings. I also like those sweeps you had running. I'd give them more reverb to add more space.

 

As for the vocals, give them a little more reverb to give it that spacey feel. In terms of vocal technique, I'd put some vibrato where you see best fit. Additionally, I'd put grace-note pitch rises on certain notes and lines like in "say goodbye". On "say" start on Ab and pitch rise to A. Some light delay would also work on these vocals too.

 

All in all, it's a decent piece but it just lacks the emotional feel I was expecting. I'm here if you need any help understanding with what I said in my feedback.

[Vlazamal 338]

This song is awesome! I love the chord choice!

[woodgazer 71]

I don't agree with "ok", I think it's great and an interesting move not automatically match the music style with the depth of the lyrics. Good job!!

[Dabmanz 2,139]

Wow great song its got like a chillstep vibe to it good job

[Pone 141]

This is pretty neat, I'd love to remix it

This is pretty neat, I'd love to remix it

[Nymira 31]

Hey! Go for it Do you want the stems?

This is pretty neat, I'd love to remix it

This is pretty neat, I'd love to remix it

[Pone 141]

@@Nymira,

Yes please

Sorry I took so long, been away for a while 

[weesh 690]

such a lovely voice...don't drown it out with harsh electronica....

less is more.