Pixel Heart- (persona/oc)

[pix 15]

Hi! Glad you actually stopped by. So... this is kinda messy and not in great lighting or anything, but yeah. She's how I'd imagine my persona (or whatever you call them here, idk... i don't really speak pony) would look in this universe. I'm no professional artist, and i can only really do traditional drawings... not to mention i've never really drawn a decent pony before. But tell me what you think! I'd love some feedback. Some constructive criticism and the like. I could definitely use advice here if you have any to give so feel free to share!

it's also a fair bit smaller in person, which is part of why the lines can look so shaky. sorry about that...

 

Edited November 21, 2016 by pix

[KiraTakahashi 748]

I think it's pretty adorable. Though I feel like the legs look too small..thin.

[Rikifive 23,502]

Aww she's cute. :3

It's still better than I could do, so.. yeah. 

[pix 15]

I think it's pretty adorable. Though I feel like the legs look too small..thin.

thanks! yeah, i know i need to work on my pony anatomy xP this was kinda a first shot at trying something like this.

 

Aww she's cute. :3

It's still better than I could do, so.. yeah. 

than you c: it just takes practice. we've all got room for improvement to no end ^^

[Kenshiro 13,492]

She looks so pretty. I would like to see her cutie mark

[Adagio Dazzling 42]

This lookin' great sugarcube! 

[Storm 199]

She's really cute! The wing's feather may need to be only one or two colors though. People seem to hate more rainbowy looking things. Just some advice XP

Oh And practice the legs a bit. Other than that it's pretty damn good!

[pix 15]

Thanks all of you ^^ Update: APPARENTLY I CAN USE QUOTES IN MOBILE. I feel like I've now failed at the internet. I had no idea.

 

Kenshiro- it's a work in progress. All I could come up with is to base it off of my logo-ish... thing elsewhere. But I don't know how that would add up, seeing as they're supposedly supposed to reflect the destiny and/or role of the pony in some manner.

 

Adagio Dazzling- thank you! I'm really no artist though Cx

 

Tangle- hmm. I guess I have noticed that. Anyways it'd be more canonically accurate if I eliminated some of the colors. I just thought it looked kind of cool at the time. But thanks for the suggestion! And as I've said before, pony anatomy is... not my area of expertise. I'm working on it though. Thanks again c;

 

-edited because I had no idea I could do these things on mobile like holy crap that's amazing

Edited December 2, 2016 by pix