advanced The Good King (OOC)

[Jadefire 2,797]

most likey, though he will squee about anything

We'll see. Anyway, hopefully we'll post to a point where you can post again soon. x3

[AnonyPoni 564]

Surprisingly enough, you're not too far off. Sule's new cannons are pretty much going to function as primitive artillery.

 

 

 

Oh, and here I was thinking that he was talking about a lizard......

[Jadefire 2,797]

Oh, and here I was thinking that he was talking about a lizard......

 

Basilisk artillery, from Warhammer 40,000.

 

So, Train Ride post yes/no?

[AnonyPoni 564]

Basilisk artillery, from Warhammer 40,000.

 

So, Train Ride post yes/no?

 

 

Yes. I was a bit busy and was trying to catch up with you guys there... I was just about to do one now

[Jadefire 2,797]

Yes. I was a bit busy and was trying to catch up with you guys there... I was just about to do one now

 

Kk.

 

So, who's up for posting in The Good King now? You, me, or TAO?

[AnonyPoni 564]

Kk.

 

So, who's up for posting in The Good King now? You, me, or TAO?

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'd normally ask you to post next, but I think I need to post anyway <..< I'll start thinking up something

 

As for TAO, I think he should post soon, also

Ten HUT

 

 

I recommend you post soon. I'm not exactly sure what NF is doing right now, though. See if you can

[Prince Midnight 817]

guys, guys guys, best. post. idea EVER

 

midnight goes to the future, comes back, and has an AR-15 with him he could single handedly win the conflict

[Jadefire 2,797]

guys, guys guys, best. post. idea EVER

 

midnight goes to the future, comes back, and has an AR-15 with him he could single handedly win the conflict

 

Go to bed Midnight, you're drunk.

[Prince Midnight 817]

Go to bed Midnight, you're drunk.

i think this thread diserves more AR-15'sand the like i think it would be awesome and fun, dontcha think?

[Jadefire 2,797]

i think this thread diserves more AR-15'sand the like i think it would be awesome and fun, dontcha think?

Perhaps, though I say we save that for the sequel, when Sule invents the semi-automatic firearm action.

Edited December 2, 2012 by Jadefire

[AnonyPoni 564]

Perhaps, though I say we save that for the sequel, when Sule invents the semi-automatic firearm action.

 

 

After that, he can invent the toilet, telephone, Internet, and Duct Tape.

 

Obviously, today is going to be pretty busy, so I doubt I'll be able to push out a TGK post right now

 

News flash. I'm going to try and post something this weekend. It wont be a mega post. However, hopefully, it will get us moving again

 

Perhaps, though I say we save that for the sequel, when Sule invents the semi-automatic firearm action.

 

 

I acknowledge that the post sucked. Sorry. I'll edit it later when I have internet time!

 

Just know that Sule wakes Indigo up and he can talk.... Maybe you can have sule captured

 

Also, the Alicorns should take the forest, so starcrest can start his barrage on them

[Prince Midnight 817]

but, i have one question to ask you, WILL. IT. MOTHERBUCKING. BLEND.

my name is chuck testa and we will find out tonight

[Jadefire 2,797]

but, i have one question to ask you, WILL. IT. MOTHERBUCKING. BLEND.

my name is chuck testa and we will find out tonight

 

I dunno, I don't think Alicorn Bug Monster and Proto-Basilisk Artillery soup would taste very good. But that's just me.

 

So I suppose this means I'm up next? Damn it.

[AnonyPoni 564]

Alright guys, I can see that we're all really busy and running low on creative fuel.

 

Thus, I recomend we stop focusing on the RP. With winter break coming up and and all, I say we now start the fic. After finals (mine end this coming Friday),we'll begin some serious cleaing and rewriting of the beginning of the story. I hope we'll have the first chapter done by February. After we get halfway though this, it'll become really easy to write this up as we started to improve our writing quality.

 

Remember this isn't easy as "cut and paste". There is a lot of things we need to add/take out. In the end,I hope we'll have an incredibly awesome fic

 

Course, the RP isn't dead. If one of us gets an epiphany, the RP needs to be here for that.

 

So don't worry posting here. Think a about improvements we can make to the story. This RP deserves respect, so we need to make it legendary.

 

We'll regroup during winter break. see you then

[Prince Midnight 817]

wait wait wait........what fic? i dont temember anything about a fanfic about this RP........ *shakes head* whatever.....

[The Awesome One 1,315]

I'm baaaaack........

 

 

What I miss? Can we get this RP back up to speed? The reason people have stopped posting on this is because it has gotten boring. Why not spice it up just a little bit?

[AnonyPoni 564]

 

 

 

We're gonna take a break from actual posting for final exams and such. After that, we'll focus on the fic. If anypony gets an idea for a new post, go ahead. However, that fic is going to get more focus and thought

Edited December 16, 2012 by AnonyPoni

[The Awesome One 1,315]

Well, for some reason, my exams are starting pretty late. 7th of January, so I'm pretty much free at the moment. 

[AnonyPoni 564]

Well, for some reason, my exams are starting pretty late. 7th of January, so I'm pretty much free at the moment.

 

 

then feel free to post.

 

As for the fic, I think I have a good idea of what to do for our beginning. I'll explain it after school if I can

 

 

 

^^Sorry, but that was just awesome

 

 

Oh guess what? I has a twitter account CUZ AH CAN!

 

@AnonyPoni

 

Feel free to put your accounts or something. It'd be pretty cool if we all had one....

Edited December 18, 2012 by AnonyPoni

[The Awesome One 1,315]

For no reason? Meh, I'll pass. Also, I think I'll be very inactive from the 25th of December because that's one exams are literally just round the corner and Pakistan and India meet each other on the cricket pitch in a series after a really long time.

 

By the way, I'll post right now but I'm just a bit lost as to where Night Flash is right now. I just wanna regroup with Sule and Indigo.

[AnonyPoni 564]

Ok guys, I'm done with my finals. TAO, I know you still have your ways to go, and I dont remember when Jade's were....

 

BUT NOW WE CAN BEGIN TO START THAT BUCKING FIC

 

 

 

So, my idea for a re imagined beginning... It starts out years before Sule is Archon; specifically, the time of South Wind's revolt. Now, don't worry, we're not going to write a whole lot about that (since revolts like that were probably really common). What we WILL write about is South Wind's execution. We'll change it a bit from the RP, though. Instead of being killed on the battle field, There is a parade where they drag her around the city (or something). When they get to the castle, she's crucified.

 

There are several reasons why I sorta came up with this. First, a young Sule is going to be in the city watching this. South Wind will say something REALLY profound (and short) which will get him thinking of overthrowing Tyrannus in the future. This also gives a chance for us to describe Chiroptera a bit and show the conditions everypony was living in. Indigo is also there as one of the guards and Midnight is probably playing a role in the "putting the pony on the cross" thing. Tyrannus is also be there to give a speech or something to show his evil.

 

This is like an intro for our story, like a pro-prologue. I considered doing a prologue with Sule taking power, but it just.... didn't seem to work. I HAVE NO IDEA WHY. It just didn't set up the story well when i thought about it... it was too predictable... which is ironic (?)

 

South Wind can say something that will be a reverberating theme throughout the story. Not like a riddle, but just something that the reader can see about... something. Look, it may seem like an annoying reminder of English class BUT TRUST ME ON THIS.

 

Im sure there are a lot of holes in this idea, but I think it will give a good intro for the reader. Again, we put far too much work in this story for us to slap the thing together.

 

(and if you're still scratching your head about who the hay "South Wind" is, she's ((or he)) was this revolutionary that tried to oppose Tyrannus a while back. She was in ONE post, where Indigo was doing a flashback about his military career)

Edited December 21, 2012 by AnonyPoni

[Jadefire 2,797]

Ok guys, I'm done with my finals. TAO, I know you still have your ways to go, and I dont remember when Jade's were....

 

BUT NOW WE CAN BEGIN TO START THAT BUCKING FIC

 

 

 

So, my idea for a re imagined beginning... It starts out years before Sule is Archon; specifically, the time of South Wind's revolt. Now, don't worry, we're not going to write a whole lot about that (since revolts like that were probably really common). What we WILL write about is South Wind's execution. We'll change it a bit from the RP, though. Instead of being killed on the battle field, There is a parade where they drag her around the city (or something). When they get to the castle, she's crucified.

 

There are several reasons why I sorta came up with this. First, a young Sule is going to be in the city watching this. South Wind will say something REALLY profound (and short) which will get him thinking of overthrowing Tyrannus in the future. This also gives a chance for us to describe Chiroptera a bit and show the conditions everypony was living in. Indigo is also there as one of the guards and Midnight is probably playing a role in the "putting the pony on the cross" thing. Tyrannus is also be there to give a speech or something to show his evil.

 

This is like an intro for our story, like a pro-prologue. I considered doing a prologue with Sule taking power, but it just.... didn't seem to work. I HAVE NO IDEA WHY. It just didn't set up the story well when i thought about it... it was too predictable... which is ironic (?)

 

South Wind can say something that will be a reverberating theme throughout the story. Not like a riddle, but just something that the reader can see about... something. Look, it may seem like an annoying reminder of English class BUT TRUST ME ON THIS.

 

Im sure there are a lot of holes in this idea, but I think it will give a good intro for the reader. Again, we put far too much work in this story for us to slap the thing together.

 

(and if you're still scratching your head about who the hay "South Wind" is, she's ((or he)) was this revolutionary that tried to oppose Tyrannus a while back. She was in ONE post, where Indigo was doing a flashback about his military career)

 

That's not too bad of an idea, actually. And from there we'll segue into Sule's dealing with the revolt that happened at the beginning of our RP?

[AnonyPoni 564]

That's not too bad of an idea, actually. And from there we'll segue into Sule's dealing with the revolt that happened at the beginning of our RP?

 

 

Yeah. We'll talk about Sule becoming Archon rather than actually having the whole thing go down. We'll skip forward to the mob

 

That's not too bad of an idea, actually. And from there we'll segue into Sule's dealing with the revolt that happened at the beginning of our RP?

 

 

For no reason? Meh, I'll pass. Also, I think I'll be very inactive from the 25th of December because that's one exams are literally just round the corner and Pakistan and India meet each other on the cricket pitch in a series after a really long time.

 

By the way, I'll post right now but I'm just a bit lost as to where Night Flash is right now. I just wanna regroup with Sule and Indigo.

 

 

im surprised you knew what i was talking about but two questions, 

 

A: are they mobile, and

2: WILL THEY BLEND

 

 

 

Ok, so I sorta have something for the intro, I'm in the proccess of typing it up. PLEASE feel free to help out. (You better)

 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YPDzERWAq1kjvyx9v4Pc1hXzbd1tJxMMUYYriTYErcM/edit

 

^^^TGK INTRO

 

I KNOW i'm not the best at writing this stuff out. Jade, when we're done with this part, can you please go over it and make it... better? (You tend to have that ability)

 

I Hope to have this intro done  by Thursday, but that's not possible without your guy's help (that means you too, Midnight)!

 

 

And a Happy Hearths Warming to you

[The Awesome One 1,315]

I made some VERY minor changes to your sentences which were not properly written. I just proof read it to make sure there were no grammar mistakes and such.

[AnonyPoni 564]

I made some VERY minor changes to your sentences which were not properly written. I just proof read it to make sure there were no grammar mistakes and such.

 

 

Thanks dude. I sorta know where I want to go with this part, like i have a mental movie of it, I'm just having a hard time expressing it in words. What I might do is just type out a script thing and have see if Jade can type up the whole scene with that. We've done it before, and it's worked really well.

 

 

 

That's not too bad of an idea, actually. And from there we'll segue into Sule's dealing with the revolt that happened at the beginning of our RP?

 

^^^ What do you think?