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This seems abrupt, but I am taking a vacation from GM'ing and am announcing a one week hiatus.
I won't be checking the RP until next monday at the least.

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@ExplosionMare

What I've posted hasn't been addressed. I can have something else happen, but I want to give you a chance to respond to what I've put in front of Starlight.

 

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*pant pant* long post

if anyone wants a summary of what Fuchsia and Limbo have been up to you can read the latest post :3 It was hard not to parody it :P 

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1 hour ago, Props Valroa said:

because the US flag is the ultimate pride flag

 

 

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21 hours ago, Loud Opinion said:

@ExplosionMare

What I've posted hasn't been addressed. I can have something else happen, but I want to give you a chance to respond to what I've put in front of Starlight.

 

I didn’t forget, school has just been taking away too much of my time. I’ll respond as soon as I can

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@Imperium

Welcome.

The effort you put into your character is remarkable. I want to keep that in mind. I do have some reservations, but that shouldn't distract from what you've managed so far.

Now, this RP has a unique tone, and there are some tonal clashes with Calamitous.

Power: the story thus far follows Starlight, Magnolia, and Fuchsia. They are all more capable than the average pony, but only slightly. If any one of them were outnumbered, they would be in danger. Calamitous being a dragon already puts him over that threshold. My first instinct is to say the lightning that struck his egg did give him magic, but also stunted his physical growth.

Morality: I noticed that he went out of his way to save some ponies from a timber wolf attack, and befriends a unicorn latter. This puts him a little too close to 'good guy' territory. This isn't an issue as a starting point. The characters here though, have some quality that would make them evil from the right perspective. Starlight Glimmer needs no explanation, Magnolia carries herself in a very domineering fashion and is quick to condemn others, Silver Tongue is an expert in hexs and curses, and Fuchsia steals artifacts from sacred grounds.

Him being a weird dragon makes it understandable for people in the world to be suspicious of him, but it's not a reason to make the reader suspicious of him.

The moral element is dependent on how you play your character, but the power will need to be adjusted. You don't have to alter your character sheet, just explain here or in my DM's what changes you'll commit to.

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changed "Most characters..." to "The characters here though..."
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3 hours ago, Starforce said:

@abrony-mouse @Loud Opinion @ExplosionMare

I changed Magnolia's character sheet. It was very out-dated and I developed upon her personality and backstory a bit more here. Some of it may not be relevant to this RP but it is there if you want to look at it. 

https://mlpforums.com/character/20-magnolia/

Look how huge the human Magnolia image turned out to be :ButtercupLaugh: (may just be a result of being on mobile)1DDF6E6C-785D-456F-9935-2AC039501D8A.thumb.jpeg.568cfb7b86d6301a23ac0d82af4a6cfc.jpeg

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reading the Bon Bon saga :D 

 

Magnolia blowing up balloons is the best thing!

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Moonlight observed her surroundings, there was plenty of party supplies and similar objects set up and ready to go for a welcome home party, it seemed. She rose an eyebrow to Lyra. "Errr...I guess I'll set these balloons up. And other...things? I guess? I don't know, I don't do this on a daily basis..." Magnolia said sarcastically but expected this to be part of a test. Maybe a test Limbo or Silver Tongue set up for her? Maybe it was just fate, that Moonlight was destined to be here? Whatever the case was, she went along with it for now.

"You uh, talk to your mayor and I guess...I'll inflate these balloons for you, then. Is that all I am to you, your party planner? I don't understand any of this...but fine." she'd grumble as if she was annoyed and go to over to the balloons. She took a white one in her mouth and began to blow into it, once it reached its expected pressure she tied it off and hung it in her magic. She couldn't help but get an idea at this. Once, she found out that balloons make manes stand up? Was that really true? She wanted to find out.

Moonlight couldn't help but grin a bit evily as she levitated the inflated balloon over to Lyra, and rubbed it onto Lyra's mane. She wanted to see what would happen when she pulled the balloon up. Would Lyra's mane stick to it, via static? Perhaps she wanted to embarrass Lyra here. 

 

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BonBon waved as her friend approached, "Hey Lyra! You won't believe what just happened!"

"Same here! Theirs this moody pony that I met," They both took on a gossipy tone as they caught up with one another.

"Hold on," BonBon said with a grin and removed Lyra's decorative balloon, "You were saying?"

 

 

Mayor mare has the absolute worst party guests for the Princess :D One can't blow up balloons and the other one is going to ruin her flank. Meanwhile Bon sympathises with Starlight wanting to peg flank, though Lyra winces. At least Mayor mare knows enough to use the anti-party against the anti-flank. She should definitely have words with Silver too though. And now... sandwiches!

 

The next thing you know, Bon has lost her mouth! That's what comes of turning down the anti-flank. Then Magnolia lights up like a beacon and Starlight gets angina trying to get into Moonlight's heart.

Anyway, so one moment Mayor Mare's mane turns pink and the next Bon has lost her mouth. Meanwhile 'Taviais driven mad every night. Is the temple responsible? From what Fuchsia read no, but does she trust what she read? D: And now Limbo Pass has appeared and has kidnapped Phantom. Is it the ponies who Silver brought to Ponyville who are responsible for all this!? Well at least they're not responsible for 'Tavia. Very strange.

 

 

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1 hour ago, Props Valroa said:

because the US flag is the ultimate pride flag

 

 

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More at eleven from our hooves on the ground at the Pony News Network: Are the Glovers the targets of assassination, or is the shame of their latest scandal too much to face?

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To clarify. I never gave a source for the light. The implication is that Starlight has spontaneously become much more sensitive to light.

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I'll be skipping @ExplosionMare this time just because of how rapid the mane six's response is to what @Starforce posted. Hopefully this'll be the only time I have to do this.

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@Starforce @ExplosionMare

As much as I'd love to write 800 characters of Lyra saying "lead the way" multiple times, I think it would be best if we just assumed she follows you wherever you go.

 

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@Loud Opinion

I wanted to inform you of an idea @Starforce and I have. We think that Starlight and Moonlight are now very skeptical of the process of ascension because of how it has hurt other ponies and how dark the texts are that they read. The two unicorns were considering going off on their own as a means to protect themselves and preserve their friendship. In order to do that, @Starforce and I were planning on doing a separate 1x1 RP with them.

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@Starforce @ExplosionMare

It was a joy having the both of you involved in my story.

I wish you the best of luck on your adventure.

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and my other OC Silver tongue can be found here

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