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I wrote a pretty mediocre poem for English class, bit decided to share it anyway :P

 

 

I’m Not A Little Girl.

By: *cough*Pencilhoof *cough*

Yes, My Little Pony.

No, I’m not a little girl.

The correct term is a brony.

Eeyup,

They’re all around the world.

Yes, I know what FOX news said.

The fact is they were wrong.

Those rumors have been put to bed.

Huh,

Can’t keep us down for long.

Ghost on speaks on the radio.

He claims bronies are trouble.

The second one who doesn’t know.

Well,

Now the fun’s been doubled.

Ms. Magazine says she hates it.

Says Lauren Faust can’t fool her.

Ignorance blocks her from bliss.

But

We‘re 20% cooler.

So media, long story short,

I tip my hat, good game!

You labeled us just for sport.

And,

We trot on just the same.

 

LOL told you it was mediocre, oh well, i was tired :3

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It's quite good actually.

:)

 

Thanks :)

 

Are you Johnathan Williams? ANYWAY...that was okay. A standard ABAB if I'm correct. I'm also too lazy to go and proof it.

 

LOL I'm not Jonathan William, it's just a pen name I use (it's going to be posted on other forums)

 

Well technicall it was abacb, only because of the single words between the 3 and fourth lines, but you're basically right, and thanks :)

 

I quite liked it, especially the rhymes. Rhymes are important! For some reason...

 

Thanks to you as well! ^_^

Didn't expect replies to come in so quickly :P

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Don't forget about "girl" and "world" or "trouble" and "doubled." :P

 

Well that's debatable since the only real problem with those are that the second rhymes end with D's, and those don't really changfe a rhyme

But i see where you're coming from! :)

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You should name your poem "Ballad of the Brony". Sounds 20% cooler. Anyway, thanks for this, it made my day. And it's quite good, as well.

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Well that's debatable since the only real problem with those are that the second rhymes end with D's, and those don't really changfe a rhyme

But i see where you're coming from! :)

 

*shrugpony* I'm just saying that since the final consonant sounds are different it's considered a half-rhyme.

It's no big deal really, it doesn't really take much from the poem.

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This isn't mediocre, this explains how bronies don't give up in the light of criticism, it's awesome.

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You should name your poem "Ballad of the Brony". Sounds 20% cooler. Anyway, thanks for this, it made my day. And it's quite good, as well.

 

Wow, I didn't expect to make anyone's day! :D

That just made my day!

 

 

This is fantastic

 

LOL, Thank you! ^_^

amazing

 

And another thank you to you sir!

This isn't mediocre, this explains how bronies don't give up in the light of criticism, it's awesome.

 

That's exactly what it's about! Thanks!

This is the first pony related poem iv herd and i love love love it :)

 

Thanks for the comment, and the compliment :D

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I was totally expecting one of those poems with the hidden meanings. This was pretty straight-forward. Good job.

 

 

 

 

*sees this almost a year later* O_O

LOL sorry about that XD

Thank you very much :P

I was totally expecting one of those poems with the hidden meanings. This was pretty straight-forward. Good job.

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