Some art I did

[ArtStreak 12]

Here are a couple of my works. Made with paper, pencil crayons and crayons

 

Rarity

Roseluck

Applejack

Bubbles(Friend's OC)

Art Streak(OC) Shrugpony

Sketchy Art Streak

Sleeping Art Streak(Personal Favourite)

 

Please comment with ideas/suggestions!

[Leafeon 2,702]

Do Trixie.

 

The Rarity one looks very good. There isn't much to critique with so many of them really. I would suggest making the bodies a bit less bulgy for the standing ones though.

[ArtStreak 12]

Most are just boredom sketches, which I color later.(not much effort put into Boredom Sketches, explaining bulgy bodies.) ill try to do Trixie but it'll probably be an epic fail because I can't draw hats :/

[~Starlight~ 764]

I really like these art works I must congratulate for drawing Rarity's mane correctly because that is a challenge. Also great work with just crayons!

[marlyly 187]

Nice work, my favorites are AJ and Sketchy, who is more cartoon style.

You should try to work on the legs, some of them don’t look really “natural”, Bubble’s one even looks like they are broken.

 

It’s not a big deal since the rest is great, and the legs are (for me) the trickiest part. Just watch some episodes and try to really pay attention to the way it’s done, you’ll see that’s not such a big deal.

[OkBuddy 586]

Suggestions for this great style? Try out Rainbow Dash. You sure do very good with pegasi, so why not draw the best flyer in Ponyville?

[Argos 191]

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Edited March 16, 2014 by Argos

[ArtStreak 12]

Thanks for criticism, I'll replace bubbles. I'm not very good with anatomy :/ I'm glad you like them and I'll try and draw more (keeping the crits in mind) however, I need to go to the store and get more paper

 

EDIT: Can someone make the Shrugpony into avatar format? I keep getting "file too big" and I wouldn't mind having an actual avatar

Edited January 20, 2013 by ArtStreak