Most disturbing fan fiction you ever read?

[MichaelxXxTrixie 433]

Sweet Apple Massacre!

 

Uhg, I don't look like Cupcakes. However, compared to this pile of terrible filth Cupcakes looks absolutely golden and child-friendly.

 

Sweet Apple Massacre makes me wish I had some sort of shield to protect me from all of this creepy MLP stuff that appears on the internet. Granted I could of stopped reading it at anytime (I was listening to it) It's one of those things that are so terrible you have to simply finish it. 

[DubWolf 17,254]

Looks like I haven't read enough grimdark fanfictions in a while. I'd have to say Sweet Apple Massacre was pretty disturbing and gross. I'm glad nobody has decided to animate it (because I would probably watch it and regret it). And as I was reading a few earlier posts, Cheerilee's Garden is probably worse considering Cheerilee is nuts and "wants to play a game" with all of her students. There is a (official?) sequel to it, which if you pick the right one, has Twist as the main character.

[Dr. Eggnog 203]

Oh that's easy.  The Time of Her Life.  Twilight gets a machine that lets her travel back in time fifteen minutes, and let's just say she picks the wrong time to use it.  It's actually a really creative story and I like it, but it's also perhaps the sickest thing I've ever read, and there were times I almost stopped, especially Twilight raping Spike.

 

Since everyone's talking about Cupcakes, I only find the story mildly disturbing.  This might be because I really braved myself up for it thinking it was going to be much worse.  I'd watched the Cupcakes video before, and I thought that was horrible and very disturbing.  The fact that it was supposed to be silly and funny and over the top just made it much worse for me.  It's the same reason why I find gore in Family Guy more disturbing than gore in horror movies.  I also didn't like the animation and music in the Cupcakes video.

[Ianpiersonjdavis 512]

Pages of Harmony is the best, goriest, and most disturbing Grim Dark Friendship is Magic fanfic ever written in my opinion.

 

Unfortunately it's always overshadowed by the criminally overrated Cupcakes.

 

But, if your into those kind of stories and feel like celebrating Nightmare Night/Halloween then I definitely recommend it.

 

[duidamasterXD 9,627]

Just a reminder to all, discussion of disturbing fanfics is perfectly fine but please don't link to anything especially gory or containing sexual material. That kind of content isn't ok on other parts of the forums and it isn't ok here.

[Noazark 67]

(I hope this isn't violating any forums rules but) I used to read a lot of clopfiction a year ago, and the most disturbing one I read was of Rainbow Dash and the writer's OC. They had to go to the Griffon kingdom in order to deliver a message, but on the way RD is knocked out and the OC decides to "take advantage" of her situation, if you know what I mean. After that when they got to the Griffon kingdom, they were immediately captured and put in a prison cell. There they had a test of "who can last the longest" between a griffon guard and the OC, they said if the OC wins the griffons would let them go. So the competition was going "on Rainbow Dash", and the OC lost, so they were held captive for months, each day with a new "competition" of the same manner, until Celestia came over to the Griffon kingdom to set them free. 

 

It's much worse than what I am allowed to describe on this forum . It was horrible, but surprisingly well-written.

Edited October 24, 2013 by Noazark

[Moonlight 7,286]

Pony-Related:

 

"Sweet Apple Massacre" and "[snowdrop] Two extra holes" are my choices.

 

"Sweet Apple Massacre" didn't disturb me but it was just trying to hard to unsettle the reader to the point where it was just dull.   

 

"[snowdrop] Two extra holes" however, was extremely...out there...it was disgusting, that's all there's really to say. Still didn't disturb me though, I've read worse in the news.

 

 

Non-MLP-Related:

 

"My Immortal"

 

Yeah....wow....yeah...it was awful. Not necessarily disturbing by gore or anything, but it was just so bad that a person can barely read it without wondering what the hell they got dragged into reading. 

[Sweet Dreams 1,893]

I read Sweet Apple Massacre. One of the worst decisions I've ever made. It's gross. Filthy, even.

Another one I read was Cupcakes. What made that worse for me is the thought she's eating ponies, after slowly dismembering them, and keeping the skulls, reminded me of Jeffrey Dahmer.... *shudder*

[~Rose Shimmer~ 34]

Well to be honest, every single Octavia fan fiction. They make me feel so sick to my stomach. I think I rather repeat Sweet Apple Massacre, Cupcakes, and every other gory fan fiction out there, over a million times and also cut of my hearing and sight just to erase all the horrifying images of every Octavia fan fiction I was forced to listen too. I just couldn't take it.

[Mand'alor Dash 2,224]

  Um... I, uh... kinda liked Cupcakes.

 

It's no masterpiece, but it did a good job of tying together canon Pinkie with "brutal serial killer" Pinkie. The cannibal gorefest angle was played well, and it succeeded in making Pinkie Pie into a legitimately scary character.

 

The story's disturbing as all hell, but for the right reasons. And that's a good story in my book.

[Pripyat Pony 2,608]

@, In my opinion, "My Immortal" lands squarely in the "so bad, it's funny" category. Seriously, watch one of the videos on youtube which puts it in a visual format. You will die laughing. XD

 

Far far far worse are these fics.

 

Note: All are non pony. I am not linking to any as it's against the rules and all contain violence and sexual themes.

 

1. Celebrian. Very famous Lord of the Rings squick fic.

 

2. Subjugation. Horrid rapefic set in the world of Harry Potter starring Evil!Dumbledore.

 

3. Prisoner of Imladris. Another rapefic, this time set in Lord of the Rings world.

 

4. Violation of the Evenstar. One word... ugh. Lord of the Rings rapefic.

 

5. Hogwarts Exposed. I don't even want to describe this. O_o

[Arcangel 9]

What was the most disturbing fan fiction you ever read?

Derpy's Finest Hour

There are certain things that you read because you want to find out what everyone else is talking about, and then there are the things you look up because your curiosity overwhelms your common sense.

Derpy's Finest Hour is the latter.

[Lonepony744 17]

I can't remember the name of the fanfic,but I do remember what happened in it all too well.The story was about Vinyl raping poor Octavia with a sand paper strap on,In my opinion it was worst than cupcakes :<.