How's my Fluttershy sound?

[Fluffy The Dragon 46]

Hello, I'm practicing voice acting, and I'd like to know what you think:

 

Also, if you know of any open casting calls, PLEASE let me know!

[MLPForums Phanact 1,374]

That's actually really accurate! Well done :3 10/10

[Fluffy The Dragon 46]

That's actually really accurate! Well done :3 10/10

Thank you very much for the feedback!

[LittleMissBloo 101]

I agree! You have a very good base voice for fluttershy.  One thing I would suggest working on is your emotion.  This is a very fluttershy sounding piece, however it lacks her scared, shy, nervousness.  It sounds like you're kinda bored.  Try thinking about what she might be feeling when she's saying this, and then expressing it (or even over expressing depending on the character) through your voice. Since people can't see your facial expressions, it all depends on how you speak to communicate how the character feels.  Your vocal tone and pitch are both spot on! You have the potential to do an absolutely fantastic fluttershy.

 

8/10 you're almost there~

[sailu 38]

i agree with pandoa/bloo a very good base for sure but just work on emulating the shy quiet nervousness that makes all things flutter~ 7.8/10 great job keep up the good work

[Fluffy The Dragon 46]

i agree with pandoa/bloo a very good base for sure but just work on emulating the shy quiet nervousness that makes all things flutter~ 7.8/10 great job keep up the good work

 

I agree! You have a very good base voice for fluttershy.  One thing I would suggest working on is your emotion.  This is a very fluttershy sounding piece, however it lacks her scared, shy, nervousness.  It sounds like you're kinda bored.  Try thinking about what she might be feeling when she's saying this, and then expressing it (or even over expressing depending on the character) through your voice. Since people can't see your facial expressions, it all depends on how you speak to communicate how the character feels.  Your vocal tone and pitch are both spot on! You have the potential to do an absolutely fantastic fluttershy.

 

8/10 you're almost there~

Thank you, I was trying to go for an excited emotion (well you know, Fluttershy's version of excited).

[sailu 38]

ah like when she was all uppity about Rainbow Dash wanting a pet! well then never mind my last post 8/10 for you

 

 

(btw there needs to be more flutterdash duet's and just all in all more flutterdash relationship building) 

[Starlight Lunamoon 109]

Amazing job! You sound like a perfect Fluttershy but you should work on the emotions and expressions a little bit.   Keep up the good work!

Edited December 10, 2013 by Star Burst

[Frosty Flurry 173]

veeeeery good the voice is spot on! just try to give it that shyness

Also try her angry voice, that would be good practice

[Alpha Centauri 169]

Good Job!

 

Although like a few have already mentioned the voice lacks emotion.

For example, in the scene your reenacting Fluttershy's voice shows more excitement than usual while still being in her soft spoken manor to show that she is enjoying the picnic with the critters.

 

It is good practice to try a range of different emotions when voice acting so that the character has more reality to them.

 

I'm sure if you watch more of the Fluttershy based episodes you'll be able to identify the different emotions behind her voice that you may be able to mimic to help you progress.

 

Once again Good Job and Keep It Up! 

[LittleMissBloo 101]

If you want to practice something, I could write you up a short monologue for you to read as fluttershy. Instead of trying to copy the show exactly, you could put your own creativeness into it and experiment with it so you aren't bound by show dialogue.

[Adrien Brony 21]

Sounds just like the original.

[Alex Kennedy 1,228]

I can only think of when time I ever heard one of the mane six impersonated better, and that was by a professional. I'd say this is really good, although I think it needs to be a little bit more expressive. Otherwise, it's spot on.

[Sugar Pea 2,681]

ENCORE!
Nyah~

If I tried hard enough, I can sound like Applebloom. :3

10/10 paws down!

[fimdash 1,196]

ooh impressive. It sounds really similar to Fluttershy, but there's something I can't quite put my finger on that sounds kind of different. Oh well, it's still a great impersonation nonetheless. Keep up the good work

[Fluffy The Dragon 46]

Thank you everyone! you all have a special place in my heart.