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Pokemon Black/White or the Super Mario Galaxy series have an excellent range of music for all occasions.

Does pacing in a circle count? I tend to do that a lot of times when I need ideas for a story or some such... I get kinda restless, I suppose.

Hello, Corded Gaming! I'm here to help you with your stuff. First off, I notice you chose to write your story as a "script fic". This is a choice that affects how you need to convey information heavily, so make sure you follow a couple rules: make sure your dialogue has a lot of thought put into it, and that it is entertaining, because it comprises the grand majority of your writing. This means things like punctuation, and words with connotation are even more important. In a script fic, you can't simply write a sentence explaining exactly how the character is saying it, and thus how the reader is to interpret it. You'll want to use connotation to help get across what you are trying to write, without stuffing it down the reader's throats. As an example, thin and emaciated have the same definition, but thin is understood to be a positive thing, and emaciated is usually used to describe someone starving. Punctuation: It's very important. Note this important comparison: "Let's eat, Jane!" vs. "Let's eat Jane!" Very different. Pauses and small gaps in speech help communication of meaning, and many of your sentences run a bit flat. Concerning your story content: It seems like the main character has access to all the magic and abilities he could ever need through the Chrono Trigger. This is concerning, because what conflict could challenge him? A story needs conflict, or there's no excitement to it. I would definitely tone down his powers. Don't worry about doing it, being challenged makes a character more interesting. Unless of course, you already had a plan for doing that. In conclusion, I present to you Pixar's 22 rules of storytelling. It helps, trusts me. So, yes. Writing is hard. Editing is hard. But, keep at it. Everything worth doing is hard, and if you put in the time and effort, it can certainly become something incredible. Keep at it! ...I hope that helps. Lemme know if you need any help beyond what I have said.

Art requests? Not yet! In time- a LOT of time, I really need to practice drawing before that will halfway feasible- maybe. But you guys are so nice. Thanks for being so supportive! I will definitely check out Octavia's Hall, and I hope to make something you guys will enjoy! Writing stuff, mostly original stuff, is in my prospects as of right right now. But summer vacation is on, so that other stuff will be PRACTICED until it is NOT TERRIBLE enough to warrant displaying to you nice guys. Seriously, you guys are the greatest. I don't know any other fandom so good-natured.

My Favourite Mane 6 Pony: Pinkie Pie How did you find MLP Forums?: Google. How you became a fan of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic: After watching the Discord episodes, there was no alternative. Good day, everyone! It's my first time on any sort of pony community, so we'll see how that goes. I enjoy playing the piano, thinking too hard about ponies, Pokemon, Mario Kart, Homestar Runner, and a whole lot of other stuff. In this point in my life (16), I'm trying to develop my talents. I see all the impressive stuff people draw, write, and compose, just because they enjoy it. I hope to learn how to do what they can do. And what better place to start than here? Bronies are pretty incredible in terms of how productive they are, so hopefully some of it rubs off! ...So, yeah. I admire what you guys do. I hope to show you what I can do, and make it something you'll enjoy!