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That looks really cool, yay! Although you should try shading some more.
Which reminds me...I forgot to shade my OC (punches hoof through face)
I'm too used to drawing Twi so I have nothing to say, really.
I wonder if the TV airs My Little Human?
AJ's mane looks a little large. I like that hat though.
I'm still not sure what's going on in the second image. It's as though Fluttershy's in a spotlight and Dash broke through a cloud wall.
Let's clarify that:
The lighting seems a little odd. It could be the perspective.
Well, there's my brutally honest critique.
Still better than me; your freehand's awesome!