this is old

[Nova Ink 5]

this is old and will nit be used

Edited February 1, 2015 by biscuit639

[Tilt 286]

So it's a MLP + FNAF crossover where the he (blu?) has come back to life but now works at the place that killed him to begin with? What reason would he have to go back?

[Nova Ink 5]

its gonna be like the five nights at freddys comics as i want to make my own revamp version and he is come back to life to know what happen around his past 

[Sunny Shimmer 259]

FNAF had comics? Where would one find these?

[Nova Ink 5]

this it is a really good series and very funny ones but this is the drama of the story  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-v94o5XGJYc 

[Unr3alGamer 230]

hello my name is biscuit or Blu spark and i am looking for Writers for a fan project now before i say anything this is just for writers but i will explain the plot but warning this project is a oc project if you want to help that's fine add me on Skype by darcybelle3. and blu spark will pop up

 

 

Plot: The  story is about how a colt named Blu died on the bite of 87 as the colt was bitten. he had a rough life as a Animatronic but  turn into the hugest jerk in Equestria as he was brought back to life for a second chance. He has a job as a night watch at Freddy fazbears pizza. the ceo has set up a meeting at the old location at Las Pegasus hey fly's to Las Pegasus but a really bad storm comes in and lighting hit he Crashed on Ponyville and met six ponies as they are going to the biggest adventure of there life.     

So...Blu Spark dies by the bite of 87, becomes an animatronic, comes back to life as a huge jerk, decides to work at the place he was killed, and then another plot where the CEO crash lands to Ponyville (via a storm-ex-machina) on a business trip and meets the mane 6? What kind of adventure are they going on? How do these 2 plots fit together? Who is the CEO? Who is Blu? Why is Blu a jerk when he comes back to life? 

 

I would suggest rewriting the plot so it's not as sloppy, then it will give any potential writers easier material to work with.

[Nova Ink 5]

ok i will fix that let me get a better plot

[Tilt 286]

This is exactly what I brought up but then he said it followed Mike who is not mentioned anywhere in the post, perhaps you should reword the plot a bit better.

[Nova Ink 5]

ok i have fixed the story

hey can i have some help with my script