Seeking advice for my fanfic

[yisetab28 89]

So I've been writing a fanfic about a Celestia VS Luna war with WW2 era weapons, and one of the main elements in it is a paratrooper found by a Lunar tank crew. However, I can't decide if he will be a Celestian soldier or a Lunar soldier. Making him a Celestian soldier and only revealing it at the end would add an interesting twist to the plot, but it would be harder to write it, as I need to find a reason for why he landed behind enemy lines and why the crew didn't realize he was actually an enemy. Writing him as a Lunar soldier would be more simple, but I think I would miss a great opportunity to show a more significant psychological development of that character. So, what should he be?

 

Also, would the name Silver Streak be nice for him?

[Cannon and rarity 38]

Why is CELESTIA the enemy I kinda picture Luna being the enemy

[yisetab28 89]

Why is CELESTIA the enemy I kinda picture Luna being the enemy

 

Celestia is the enemy for the crew. Both sides do horrible things (because you know, world war going on). 

[Ziggy + Angel + Rain 11,303]

I don't get these sorts of fanfics, but I digress.  Perhaps you could make him a captive aboard a Lunar prisoner transport (aerial).  He somehow frees himself from his bonds and incapacitates what scant crew is present.  The pilot also gets knocked out during the scuffle.  He hurriedly slips into whatever he can find aboard the transport and straps on a parachute before escaping from the plane.  He lands behind enemy lines because the transport was flying through Lunar-controlled air space.  When he's discovered by Lunar ground troops, he's wearing clothing indicating that he's part of the Lunar prisoner transport crew.

[Cannon and rarity 38]

Celestia is the enemy for the crew. Both sides do horrible things (because you know, world war going on).

 

So I'm guessing you're the lunar empire then I can mostly tell SAYIGN you called solar celestian

[yisetab28 89]

So I'm guessing you're the lunar empire then I can mostly tell SAYIGN you called solar celestian

 

Well what should I call Luna's forces? Moonbutts? Celestian is for Celestia, Lunar is for Luna.

[Cannon and rarity 38]

Well what should I call Luna's forces? Moonbutts? Celestian is for Celestia, Lunar is for Luna.

No you got lunar right but the main term is solar for celestia's side we KNWO this because this book is kinda copyrighted off of let me see: 1,000 other fics

[yisetab28 89]

No you got lunar right but the main term is solar for celestia's side we KNWO this because this book is kinda copyrighted off of let me see: 1,000 other fics

 

Well I say f*ck you other fics. I didn't start drawing or getting my fanfics out there for them to blend in the crowd. I did it so that they stand out. I will call Celestia's army Celestians. Even though she represents the sun, she is named Celestia after all. 

 

Also not to be offensive, but you should watch your grammar.

 

And did you say my story was... copied? I've seen my share of WW2 fanfics but no other tells the story of a Tiger tank crew, so I don't see where you find the "1000 other copied fics".

Edited April 21, 2015 by Blitzkrieg

[Cannon and rarity 38]

Well I say f*ck you other fics. I didn't start drawing or getting my fanfics out there for them to blend in the crowd. I did it so that they stand out. I will call Celestia's army Celestians. Even though she represents the sun, she is named Celestia after all. 

 

Also not to be offensive, but you should watch your grammar.

 

And did you say my story was... copied? I've seen my share of WW2 fanfics but no other tells the story of a Tiger tank crew, so I don't see where you find the "1000 other copied fics".

I didn't say it was exactly copied I was just ranting on how many of these there are

[yisetab28 89]

I didn't say it was exactly copied I was just ranting on how many of these there are

 

How many of what exactly?

[Tom Snyder 4,112]

Well I say f*ck you other fics. I didn't start drawing or getting my fanfics out there for them to blend in the crowd. I did it so that they stand out. I will call Celestia's army Celestians. Even though she represents the sun, she is named Celestia after all. 

 

Also not to be offensive, but you should watch your grammar.

 

And did you say my story was... copied? I've seen my share of WW2 fanfics but no other tells the story of a Tiger tank crew, so I don't see where you find the "1000 other copied fics".

I think they meant that this Luna and Celestia war fic thing has been done so many times. I don't think he/she meant it like that(at least i don't think so).

[Cannon and rarity 38]

I think they meant that this Luna and Celestia war fic thing has been done so many times. I don't think he/she meant it like that(at least i don't think so).

What she said (rainbows and unicorns jsut because I need 20+ characters)

[yisetab28 89]

I think they meant that this Luna and Celestia war fic thing has been done so many times. I don't think he/she meant it like that(at least i don't think so).

 

Oh. Yeah, I must admit the war has been done OVAR 9000 times, but I really couldn't find two better ponies to make them go in war against each other.

[Cannon and rarity 38]

How many of what exactly?

Celestia and Luna war fics

[Tom Snyder 4,112]

Oh. Yeah, I must admit the war has been done OVAR 9000 times, but I really couldn't find two better ponies to make them go in war against each other.

Calm down, no need to get angry over an opinion. if you want to do this, then go ahead, nobody's going to stop you. Its a good idea to me, but can i ask that you try to learn some restraint before you start arguing. It makes me sad to see others fight like this. Plus i think you meant "Over". 

Edited April 21, 2015 by Candy Star

[yisetab28 89]

Calm down, no need to get angry over an opinion. if you want to do this, then go ahead, nobody's going to stop you. Its a good idea to me, but can i ask that you try to learn some restraint before you start arguing. It makes me sad to see others fight like this. Plus i think you meant "Over". 

 

I wasn't angry, I was doing a DBZ reference. 

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SiMHTK15Pik