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We need to make this into a movie or something some day O_O I'm just saying...

 

My plan exactly! Who else agrees? It would be really popular because it explains equestrian history, especially the parts the MLP episodes left out.

 

All the history lines up really well!


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My plan exactly! Who else agrees? It would be really popular because it explains equestrian history, especially the parts the MLP episodes left out.

 

All the history lines up really well!

 

Once we finish the RP - let's head down to the Creative Resources section... B) We need some animators, mwahaha!

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Once we finish the RP - let's head down to the Creative Resources section... B) We need some animators, mwahaha!

 

Yay! And we need original music and voice actors, but I think other ponies would love to be a part of it!

 

...this is generally the part when jadefire drags me back into reality, unless he likes the idea as well.


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Yay! And we need original music and voice actors, but I think other ponies would love to be a part of it!

...this is generally the part when jadefire drags back into reality, unless he likes the idea as well.

 

I don't want to go back into reality though xD If we get voice actors - I will so VA as Storm Comet. That would be amazingly epic *_*

 

I can actually see this idea going somewhere though :D My dream, hehe

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...this is generally the part when jadefire drags me back into reality...

 

You rang?

 

We'll need to hit it hard with proofreading and editing, first. Some of the characterization is wonky, some of the dialogue isn't believable, and thanks to the fact that we all have different schedules, some of the scenes will come off strange (for example, Indigo surely would've had more to say when Tyrannus overthrew the city, and when Midnight Moon was captured by the heroes; I wasn't online for some of those parts, and therefor Indigo stayed uncharacteristically quiet)

 

Not to mention animation and all that will be a massive undertaking, and I don't think we all have the necessary social skills and whatnot to keep everyone organized and willing to work. I think making a movie is an unrealistic goal.

 

 

An idea I DO like, however, is making a fanfic out of this roleplay. It could garner interest, since it deals with the batpegasai, and would be far more feasible to make. x3

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You rang?

 

We'll need to hit it hard with proofreading and editing, first. Some of the characterization is wonky, some of the dialogue isn't believable, and thanks to the fact that we all have different schedules, some of the scenes will come off strange (for example, Indigo surely would've had more to say when Tyrannus overthrew the city, and when Midnight Moon was captured by the heroes; I wasn't online for some of those parts, and therefor Indigo stayed uncharacteristically quiet)

 

Not to mention animation and all that will be a massive undertaking, and I don't think we all have the necessary social skills and whatnot to keep everyone organized and willing to work. I think making a movie is an unrealistic goal.

 

 

An idea I DO like, however, is making a fanfic out of this roleplay. It could garner interest, since it deals with the batpegasai, and would be far more feasible to make. x3

 


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You rang?

 

We'll need to hit it hard with proofreading and editing, first. Some of the characterization is wonky, some of the dialogue isn't believable, and thanks to the fact that we all have different schedules, some of the scenes will come off strange (for example, Indigo surely would've had more to say when Tyrannus overthrew the city, and when Midnight Moon was captured by the heroes; I wasn't online for some of those parts, and therefor Indigo stayed uncharacteristically quiet)

 

Not to mention animation and all that will be a massive undertaking, and I don't think we all have the necessary social skills and whatnot to keep everyone organized and willing to work. I think making a movie is an unrealistic goal.

 

 

An idea I DO like, however, is making a fanfic out of this roleplay. It could garner interest, since it deals with the batpegasai, and would be far more feasible to make. x3

 

Yeah, we could do the fanfic... We could work together to write it.

 

BUT, I am siding with isobel with following dreams. I think with enough effort, we (us, MLP forums and the Brony community) could pull it off.

 

We could do the fanfic, and if it gets really popular, then we can worry the movie.

 

This way, we take realistic filly steps, and there will be (hopefully) enough Brony buzz around it to get animators, musicians, and voice actors interested

 

Question!

 

Ok, you made some good points about a supposed 'good king' Movie. And the RP alone needs some work in fixing some stuff.

 

But, if we got to the point of writing a fanfic, got the popularity needed, and got all the talents and staff for it, would you be on board?

 

You never actually stated what you thought of the RP. What do you think of it (not all the missed details, but as a whole)?

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I think we all should work on the fanfic. Make it around like 10 chapters long, not too rushed, not too long. But we'll do that once this RP is over.

 

Once this RP is finished, I'm going to make one final post where Comet makes a party and everyone attends it in the palace :P

 

As for the mission, I'm hoping to achieve to things from it:

 

1.Get valuable information on how to beat Tyrannus and that pesky Nova pony.

2.GTFO of there with the hostages before anyone notices us.


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I think we all should work on the fanfic. Make it around like 10 chapters long, not too rushed, not too long. But we'll do that once this RP is over.

 

Once this RP is finished, I'm going to make one final post where Comet makes a party and everyone attends it in the palace :P

 

As for the mission, I'm hoping to achieve to things from it:

 

1.Get valuable information on how to beat Tyrannus and that pesky Nova pony.

2.GTFO of there with the hostages before anyone notices us.

 

Let's avoid killing random guards of you can... Sule would get angry if he finds out....

 

Anyway, what information will the find? I suspect super soldiers, but are they also going to talk about mind control of citizens, what tyrannus thinks Nova's goal is?


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Oh my gosh. I just posted, but I swear my brain isn't functioning. I couldn't remember how to spell window >_< So the quality of my post may not be great :D

 

i think its with clover XD

 

and that could work, but he needs to learn a few spells, to protect himself from being found out, and a few offensive, so in case he has too he can fight

 

If there's still an open spot, I'd like to join in now.

 

Can I get a quick recap? I've been out 'o' commission for a while...

 

Done.

 

Quoted for attention

 

(damn f5 key, why you ruin what I write?)

 

Several of us, if not all of us have expressed some interest for turning this 'The Good King' RP into a Movie. If we really want to do that, we need to make this story more...global. Being an RP (from what i've seen, this kinda stopped being a normal RP by the third post) most other ponies on the forum wont pay much attention to it because RPs are more for the RP players, so they stick to their own. We should write up a fanfic to get other ponies to look at it. We need to finish the RP first (do RPs finish?) on a good note. I have a feeling it won't end in Chiroptera, since we need to find out if the Malumai ever go to Equestria (we worry about that later, I think they did, personally...).

 

Jadefizoid is right, though. We need to fix up the RP a lot. Even though this RP is very detailed and we seemed to do a good job at lining up history with 'Hearts Warming Eve' and such, there are a lot of... weird parts that led to some weird characterization and and timelines. (ie: Storm has a very talkative personality, but since Isobel doesn't post that much she doesn't say that much, especially when they go to equestria, there are numerous examples of this we can write out later...)

 

When we finish, we need to make a share google doc or something which we can all work together to fix these problems and rewrite the RP as a well written Fanfic book.

 

We live in different time zones, so this whole process may get complicated. You guys should share your approximate location. You don't have to be specific if you don't want too, just the time zone will do (and relation to GMT) (Midnight, we all know you don't live in the Ukraine). Please be honest about the time zones, so we can schedule this thing.

 

If you don't know your time zone, Use this

 

http://www.worldtimezone.com/

 

 

 

So, I will list our locations here (help me be more specific ) :

 

 

Anony-Bony: Illinois, USA; US Central Time Zone (UTC - 6)

 

Jadefizoid: Utah, USA; Mountain Time Zone (UTC -7)

 

Midnight Moon: Utah, USA; Mountain Time Zone (UTC -7)

 

Isobelthegreat: Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada; Pacific Time Zone (UTC -8)

 

Frenzyhero (i'm not sure if your still want to be in...) :

 

The Awesome One: Lahore, Pakistan; Pakistan Standard Time (UTC +5)

 

All your really need is your time zone, if that is all you want to tell.

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I live in Vancouver, Canada! UTC -8

 

 

I think the shared Google doc is a great idea, and my summer vacation is in the end of June, so I'll have more time to work on it. And in the fanfic I can edit in more of Storm's talking ^_^

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I live in Vancouver, Canada! UTC -8

 

 

I think the shared Google doc is a great idea, and my summer vacation is in the end of June, so I'll have more time to work on it. And in the fanfic I can edit in more of Storm's talking ^_^

 

For the record, Midnight and I both live in Utah; Mountain Time Zone, UTC -7

(for reference, it is 8:57 AM as of this posting)

 

Ok, I put it in for reference.

 

From what I can see, this whole thing wont be that hard, except with TAO, he lives on the other side of earth basically.

 

Oh, and life!

 

if you aren't availble because of school/job/somthing else at certain times, just say so


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Ok, I put it in for reference.

From what I can see, this whole thing wont be that hard, except with TAO, he lives on the other side of earth basically.Oh, and life! if you aren't available because of school/job/somthing else at

certain times, just say so

 

I'm moving June 27th, but I have my iPod so i'll still be able to read everyone's posts!


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I'm moving June 27th, but I have my iPod so i'll still be able to read everyone's posts!

 

To where? Are you staying in vacouver? Our family moves a lot, so i have it down to a science.


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I'm staying in Vancouver, but a totally different area. Bring it on, life with horses everywhere O_O

 

 

OMG PONIES xD

 

 

Same city? Wow, we have always had to be cross country every time...

 

Hey, since your online, why not post (I'm having some trouble with thinking of sule's invention...)?

 

Just see if you can go more in depth with the characters... Especially storm, we know NOTHING of her!

 

*hint* how she became abassador, family stuff...

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The sad moment when you realize you're the only Pakistani on the forum *sigh*. I'm GMT +5 and thankfully, I live in Lahore, which is on the east side of Pakistan and not the wild west side of Pakistan.

 

I definitely agree, we need to turn this into a fanfic. Perhaps get the help of more experienced writers?

 

Also, about the stuff my team gathers in the office....

 

Obviously, it will contain news about the Super Soldiers and they're statistics and basically a complete study on them. Jade will probably find out about the super soldier's weak spot. If that happens, it will be smooth sailing from there, we'll rescue Clover and Storm, launch a full scale finale battle, beat the super soldiers because we know how to, and do a Party Rock style celebration :P

 

Also, I'd like to sum up this RP in a paragraph (in extremely low detail)

 

Bad king get's taken over by good king. Bad king makes a comeback and takes over again. The good guys get kicked out of their city but then, with the help of the Equestrian military, take back what is theirs...(or not?)

 

Oh hey, would you look at that. Took barely two lines.

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The sad moment when you realize you're the only Pakistani on the forum *sigh*. I'm GMT +5 and thankfully, I live in Lahore, which is on the east side of Pakistan and not the wild west side of Pakistan.

 

I definitely agree, we need to turn this into a fanfic. Perhaps get the help of more experienced writers?

 

Also, about the stuff my team gathers in the office....

 

Obviously, it will contain news about the Super Soldiers and they're statistics and basically a complete study on them. Jade will probably find out about the super soldier's weak spot. If that happens, it will be smooth sailing from there, we'll rescue Clover and Storm, launch a full scale finale battle, beat the super soldiers because we know how to, and do a Party Rock style celebration :P

 

Also, I'd like to sum up this RP in a paragraph (in extremely low detail)

 

Bad king get's taken over by good king. Bad king makes a comeback and takes over again. The good guys get kicked out of their city but then, with the help of the Equestrian military, take back what is theirs...(or not?)

 

Oh hey, would you look at that. Took barely two lines.

 

pakistani huh? cool ^^ first pakistani i know that dosent hate me for living in the United States x3 UKRAINE <.< >.>


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The sad moment when you realize you're the only Pakistani on the forum *sigh*. I'm GMT +5 and thankfully, I live in Lahore, which is on the east side of Pakistan and not the wild west side of Pakistan.

 

I definitely agree, we need to turn this into a fanfic. Perhaps get the help of more experienced writers?

 

Also, about the stuff my team gathers in the office....

 

Obviously, it will contain news about the Super Soldiers and they're statistics and basically a complete study on them. Jade will probably find out about the super soldier's weak spot. If that happens, it will be smooth sailing from there, we'll rescue Clover and Storm, launch a full scale finale battle, beat the super soldiers because we know how to, and do a Party Rock style celebration :P

 

Also, I'd like to sum up this RP in a paragraph (in extremely low detail)

 

Bad king get's taken over by good king. Bad king makes a comeback and takes over again. The good guys get kicked out of their city but then, with the help of the Equestrian military, take back what is theirs...(or not?)

 

Oh hey, would you look at that. Took barely two lines.

 

 

Hey dont worry, Im Pakistani as well. Well, my family is from there, i ve always considered myself American, but yes I am from Pakistani decent.

 

 

And for everyting else, it was good, but I think they can take one hostage out now, and leave the other two for the siege (it was hard to carry that one unicorn, right?)

 

I was thinking shiri, because that gives her a chance to expand her character more.

 

Or we could leave one behind, since storm can fly. I would say clover, becuase it gives Sule a reason to keep fightng. we can wor thins out.

 

AND YOU GUYS NEED TO FIND THE ORB!!!

 

pakistani huh? cool ^^ first pakistani i know that dosent hate me for living in the United States x3 UKRAINE <.< >.>

 

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You rang?

 

We'll need to hit it hard with proofreading and editing, first. Some of the characterization is wonky, some of the dialogue isn't believable, and thanks to the fact that we all have different schedules, some of the scenes will come off strange (for example, Indigo surely would've had more to say when Tyrannus overthrew the city, and when Midnight Moon was captured by the heroes; I wasn't online for some of those parts, and therefor Indigo stayed uncharacteristically quiet)

 

Not to mention animation and all that will be a massive undertaking, and I don't think we all have the necessary social skills and whatnot to keep everyone organized and willing to work. I think making a movie is an unrealistic goal.

 

 

An idea I DO like, however, is making a fanfic out of this roleplay. It could garner interest, since it deals with the batpegasai, and would be far more feasible to make. x3

 

I imagine Tyrannus has the Orb... he will probably bring it to the meeting.

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