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and now I have rewritten the grammarly advert for pony RP :p

"Good grammar and spelling are important, but if you want to write role plays that inspire, dialogue that forges brighter connections and villains that get the job done, you need to think about more than just grammar and spelling. This sentence is grammatically correct, but it's overuses horse puns and is hard to read. It undermines your message and excludes equally valid sheep puns. Grammarly's colour-craft technology helps you craft compelling understandable pony roleplays. 

Grammarly works where you work. Wherever you pone. Imagine what you could do with the secrets of the world's most colourful writers at your hooves anytime you need them. Are you ready to give it a try? Installation is simple and free. Visit grammarly.com today."

 

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Twilight Sparkle has just been coronated. She has ascended to alicornhood. Flight, magic, fortitude, power, prestige, they are all the fruits of her labor. Labor is something you have though, so what

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I'm intrigued by this plot! It's been a while since I've tossed my hat into the RP ring rather than just watching as a staffer, but I think I'd like to join this one As for my character, I think

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I really liked what you wrote, it was very suspenseful 

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Hey, all I'm saying is that there's a reason my RP posts have so few grammar errors. Let's not get off topic though.

What isn't vain is good for your brain. What isn't rotty is good for your body. While art is good for your heart, good people are good for you.

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:blush: heh sorry

we have a well-dressed mare and a ragged traveller pony to contend with and not merely bad grammar. Also how good would Bad Grammar be as an angry pony in a RP :) 

 

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Oh Bad Grammar, do you mean you are a sheep or that is your sheep!?

If only your grammar was better. 

Ok I have gone OT again :(

 

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Hey all. I've been having some trouble with headaches. Leaning on my caution, I abstained form the Internet and focused on my studies.

Thank you for the concern @Califorum. I've recovered seance. Expect a post soon.

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2 hours ago, Loud Opinion said:

Hey all. I've been having some trouble with headaches. Leaning on my caution, I abstained form the Internet and focused on my studies.

Thank you for the concern @Califorum. I've recovered seance. Expect a post soon.

@abrony-mouse

We- we big- huge fan of warhammer! Yes yes!

Sorry about your headaches :(

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@Califorum

I think there's a misunderstanding with my last post.

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 'What could go wrong with doing whatever I want to someone that just got out of nowhere? A place I don't understand in the slightest.'

I put this in quotes to indicate that Silver is mocking Magnolia's though process. He's saying that it was irresponsible to mess with someone physically when they were recently in 'nowhere'. Especially sense Magnolia knows nothing about 'nowhere'. He isn't saying he misunderstands, he's saying Magnolia misunderstands. Essentially, he doesn't want to see Magnolia being careless when dealing with these esoteric matters. You can decide what Magnolia takes away from Silver's words, but you should be aware that Silver's tone was very different in the quotes.

 

I knew I was rushing with my post. Sorry for the ambiguity.

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Also this.

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, in your infinite wisdom,

This is also spoken in a mocking tone.

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@Loud Opinion in another RP a possession of Fuchsia's came up - just wondering if it is ok in this RP too? Fuchsia would probably use it to see if there was any evil magic where Octavia sleeps in Ponyville:

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- a device that indicated when hostile magic was near. It was a gift from a buffalo clan she had stayed with in the desert. She had helped find a lost herd member and been honoured with a dream-catcher - she had assumed that the cryptic assurance from the buffalo shaman that it could sense when evil spirits were near was just mumbo jumbo, but it reliably chimed when hostile magical creatures or items or traps threatened her. Setting it up in her camps, it had saved her more than once. 

 

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Love to see continuity between RP's. 

This seems very in line with the power scale of this RP. You've got a green light.

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On 2021-02-14 at 10:02 PM, Califorum said:

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Ah, I misread that. No need to apologize! I'll edit. And you will like my edit.

Sounds good! I'm looking forward to it!

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I said 'looking forward to it'. What did you think I meant?

I was under the impression that posted got tagged with 'Edited at [insert date]' I never saw the tag, so I just thought it hadn't happened.

Also, Silver was saying that Magnolia didn't understand nowhere. Silver has a very good understanding of that place, but now I'm splitting hairs.

I'll respond right away.

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You're welcome! I've had a great time making something people can enjoy. Sorry for the mix-up.

 

If anyone is interested, I'm considering making a discord server for everyone who has stuck with my cryptic scrawling. I worry my messages come off as a little abrasive. Maybe voice chat will fix that...:dash:

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@abrony-mouse

For flavor, I drew a crude representation of the symbol Fuchsia sees. The red background is the door's paint color.

Apologies for MS paint. I'm not an artist.

 

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A little disappointed with the word count of my last post. Hopefully there was enough substance for you two to work off of.

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Glad you like it!

I had a good feeling about my latest post!

Octavia was included in this RP on a whim, but I'm so glad I went with her now that I get to write for her.

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