Fail Safe chapter 2 ( where the gods brew their OC's future)

[Evil Pink One 13,552]

@Emerald Heart, @Samurai Equine, @Scar, @Bakugou is my Man, @CloudMistDragon, @Windy Breeze, @Jesse Terrence.

Welcome to the meeting place on what will happen to our OC in chapter 2.

I placed it here so other people can interact in the story... If they want too. And the main cast can still have a private message if you guys want.

And the title fail safe is still just a working title.

...so chapter 2 is gonna be about destroying a corrupt dimension and

cloudshroud( @CloudMistDragon ), @Windy Breeze are one of the stranded ones that needs rescuing.... And thats what i still have on chapter 2 XD... i make stories on the fly.... And when an idea comes i just draw! 

[Samurai Equine 55,097]

Oh wow! All ready on Chapter 2? This comic is epic! 

[Misty Shadow 8,200]

2 minutes ago, Kujamih said:

@Emerald Heart, @Samurai Equine, @Scar, @Bakugou is my Man, @CloudMistDragon, @Windy Breeze, @Jesse Terrence.

Welcome to the meeting place on what will happen to our OC in chapter 2.

I placed it here so other people can interact in the story... If they want too. And the main cast can still have a private message if you guys want.

And the title fail safe is still just a working title.

...so chapter 2 is gonna be about destroying a corrupt dimension and

cloudshroud( @CloudMistDragon ), @Windy Breeze are one of the stranded ones that needs rescuing.... And thats what i still have on chapter 2 XD... i make stories on the fly.... And when an idea comes i just draw! 

I need rescuing? Thanks for making me a princess! 

Looking forward to the next chapter!

[Emerald Heart 25,167]

@Kujamih

What are your ideas so far?

 

[Evil Pink One 13,552]

4 hours ago, CloudMistDragon said:

I need rescuing? Thanks for making me a princess! 

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Hahaha well it would end up being a bad story if light just destroyed the corrupted dimension and didn't rescue anyone..

 Cali wouldn't mind you get killed though...

And Don't think of yourself as a damnsel or princess... Think of it as a rescued victim who was rescued from the nick of time from his death... Your situation is far worse from a princess if that makes you happy?

You were discovered pretty beat up from fighting for your life with @Windy Breeze. Against the corrupted beings trying to take your place and what not.

What do you think. Do you want any changes?

[Evil Pink One 13,552]

@Emerald Heart

First scene introduction on windy breeze and cloud shroud, getting lost in the corrupted dimension.

Next scene.

Then us entering the corrupted dimension and introduced to its corrupted things in it..some shenanigans... We end up finding some stranded ponies save them ...found windy and cloud..... Then they help us a bit... We found a way to remove its corruption.... BUT its really hard and  friendship is magic needed plot... So we just ended up destroying that universe instead of curing it....

Btw te corrupted and corrupted dimension is such a mouth full and a common enemy name.... Anyone have any ideas what we should call them instead?

Corrupted enemies=?

Corrupted dimension=?

[Evil Pink One 13,552]

Oh and this is cloud shroud....

I hasn't drawn @Windy Breeze yet.... 

[Jesse Terrence 2,971]

Haha, I was actually thinking on having my character rescued. This only fits even better!

Let me get to work on a better reference than the black and white sketches I got and build up a situation and I'll be ready to help

[Emerald Heart 25,167]

@Kujamih

How about "The nefarious" for the enemies. 

And "The Rotten Dimension"

[Jesse Terrence 2,971]

5 hours ago, Kujamih said:

@Emerald Heart

First scene introduction on windy breeze and cloud shroud, getting lost in the corrupted dimension.

Next scene.

Then us entering the corrupted dimension and introduced to its corrupted things in it..some shenanigans... We end up finding some stranded ponies save them ...found windy and cloud..... Then they help us a bit... We found a way to remove its corruption.... BUT its really hard and  friendship is magic needed plot... So we just ended up destroying that universe instead of curing it....

Btw te corrupted and corrupted dimension is such a mouth full and a common enemy name.... Anyone have any ideas what we should call them instead?

Corrupted enemies=?

Corrupted dimension=?

Talking about this and how you flirt with the concept of universes dying... I guess you've heard of the universe's entropic death theory. You know, the theory that says that as entropy on the universe grows, we're closer to absolute death given no more physical nor chemical processes can happen once we reach maximum entropy.

I myself play with that on my multiverses xD

Anyway, parting from there, how about playing with 3 ideas that pop up easily. Entropy, chaos and decay.

Like, how about something between the line of "entropes" for those that reached the critical amount of molecular chaos and are pretty much just eating up energy from others to survive a little longer?

Following that train of thought, what do you guys think of refering the corrupted universes as decaying ones? Of course, shortening that could be helpful. Just my two cents.

[Evil Pink One 13,552]

Entropy really fits as one of the worst thimg tp happen in onea friendship....hmmmm

*big thumbs*..........

[Evil Pink One 13,552]

Entropes, decay, rotten, degenerates, nefarious (nefariam), worse, putrefied, spoiled, perished, festers, gluttons, vilis.

Devorator orbis. Malus orbis

[Evil Pink One 13,552]

She is definitely gonna be affected by malus orbis radiation....

[Evil Pink One 13,552]

Radiation is the cause of that universe to go corrupt and unpredictable...

The great entity being gods don't like unpredictable stuff so thats why bimm wants us to destroy it.

Sure it makes you question that the great entity seems to want to control us.... But what god or creator don't want to control what they make? Take us for example... We want to control what our OC wants attitudes etc. 

The greatentity just wants the universe to be a safer place.....

Or do they?

[Evil Pink One 13,552]

So i gathered the informations you gave and researched.... I found the most interesting names

Special thanks to @Emerald Heart and @Jesse Terrence

The enemies.... Well theyre gunna have lots of types soooo....

Entropes, Vilis, nefariam!

And the world

Malus orbis (bad world)

Ohh and devorator

Edited November 6, 2020 by Kujamih

[Jesse Terrence 2,971]

So, for the setting, how likely would it be for ponies to stray away from their own universe and end up in another one?

[Evil Pink One 13,552]

The malus orbis eats other universe or worlds... So if its a small malus orbis... Then it will randomly take stuff from other universe to make itself grow and what not.... It wont attempt to eat something too big for it to handle... Because theres a chance that it itself would be consumed instead.

Juat like being spirited away....

You were just walking in the forest minding your own business... Then poof your inside a malus orbis... Then its radiation will corrupt you or its already corrupted occupants would have already eaten you...

But if it grows enough it'll eat other worlds.

 

 

[Evil Pink One 13,552]

Well heres @Windy Breeze.

Still not done though...

A wonderbolt that actually kicks butt!

[Evil Pink One 13,552]

Front cover of chapter 2.

 

[Windy Breeze 15,200]

I'm looking forward to this comic, @Kujamih. Also, nice drawing style 

[Windy Breeze 15,200]

On 11/6/2020 at 9:29 PM, Kujamih said:

@Emerald Heart

First scene introduction on windy breeze and cloud shroud, getting lost in the corrupted dimension.

Next scene.

Then us entering the corrupted dimension and introduced to its corrupted things in it..some shenanigans... We end up finding some stranded ponies save them ...found windy and cloud..... Then they help us a bit... We found a way to remove its corruption.... BUT its really hard and  friendship is magic needed plot... So we just ended up destroying that universe instead of curing it....

Btw te corrupted and corrupted dimension is such a mouth full and a common enemy name.... Anyone have any ideas what we should call them instead?

Corrupted enemies=?

Corrupted dimension=?

In a opinion, I would call the corrupted dimension The dimension of Malum. Malum is the Latin version of evil.

As for the enemies, what do they look like?

[Evil Pink One 13,552]

Malus or malum?

Malus orbis....

Malum orbis?....

Malus= bad

Malum= evil....

*Idea*

I wanted  to put a guilty conscience in us that a malus orbis is just a bad world...like ours, that doant need deatroying YET.

While a malum orbis really needs the off switch....

What do you guys think?

[Windy Breeze 15,200]

3 minutes ago, Kujamih said:

Malus or malum?

Malus orbis....

Malum orbis?....

Malus= bad

Malum= evil....

*Idea*

I wanted  to put a guilty conscience in us that a malus orbis is just a bad world...like ours, that doant need deatroying YET.

While a malum orbis really needs the off switch....

What do you guys think?

What a nice idea. I still don't have any idea how to name the creatures though.

[Evil Pink One 13,552]

Well lets not stick to one ttpe of enemy... It dosnt have to have 1 form....but i already have a drawing of them.... But im not sure if tou guys are gonna br happy at what we are trying to...well kill...hehehehehe...

For the enemies name definitely one name would be "vilis" (cheap, worthless, poor.) it also rhymes with fillies ( young fenale horse, around 4years old and below.)

Vilis have pony body ..... let's say they are the corrupted ponies that got exposed to the radiation for too long.

 

[Evil Pink One 13,552]

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The first look on Vilis...