My first attempt at fanfiction

[Demonslayer 9]

I've always liked mlp fanfiction, tho have never thought of doing it myself at least until a friend of mine encouraged me to try it and the result is here its my first so its obviously not very good but im proud of it none the less

Trip to the farrier .pdf

[Reality Check 627]

I think it’s good. Other than a few grammar errors, I like the story ‘cause it’s somewhat easy to imagine the scenario, as well as they’re personalities. Also, I suggest that you describe the character’s entire look early on, it’s just so readers can visualise them better than just looking through to know what a character's mane or claws are like

[Demonslayer 9]

4 hours ago, Dusky Wings said:

I think it’s good. Other than a few grammar errors, I like the story ‘cause it’s somewhat easy to imagine the scenario, as well as they’re personalities. Also, I suggest that you describe the character’s entire look early on, it’s just so readers can visualise them better than just looking through to know what a character's mane or claws are like

Got it I'll try and address more descriptions in my next fanfic thanks for the tip

[LaFleur 24]

I think it's quite nice. I like stories featuring hippogriffs and other well-feathered creatures. I have no idea about grammatic errors and any other issues. <3