Angry Twilight Sketch

[Ezynell 2,037]

I haven't drawn for awhile so I thought I would sketch up a quick Twilight Sparkle just to get back in old habit. This wasn't really meant to be anything and only took about 20 minutes.

 

[Swit Swat 536]

Dat circle. :3

 

Anyway, I love the sketch! Even though you say it was quick, I would have taken alot longer and it still would have not been as great as this. Awesome job!

[FortyShadows 217]

BROHOOF FOR PICKING UP ON DRAWING AGAIN! X3

Aww how'd Twi get angry? I don't like when Twily's angry.

Also, dat large mane!

[MVC NVMXD JVRXD 2,406]

Alright, I'll be honest when critiquing a mod.

This is pretty good for such a quick sketch! I'll ignore the parts you drew for reference (the circle, the back of the neck) just because it was a quick sketch. but I have to point out the mouth. It seems kind of big for her head. In my opinion, it should be a little smaller. Her ear also seems big, and rather rabbit-like. her hair behind the ear seems rather odd, and it should probably have been drawn a little differently. And lastly, her horn seems too thin.

But her eyes are great! I love the eye you drew the pupils! And the jaw/nose is nicely done. I also appreciate some of the detail you gave the hair (the strands sticking out, how it hangs over her eyes a bit...)

Overall, this isn't that bad at all. If I had to rate it, I'd give it a 7/10.

[Finesthour 7,287]

My critique:

• Even though this is just a sketch, you need to erase the base lines. You can't go farther in the picture if you still have the fiant outlines. I suggest using a light end of an eraser to not leave any blotches.
• I feel as if the angle her mouth gets to end where it goes into her nose is off angle by just a tad. If it ended sooner into a sharp incline, it looks better in my head.
• You didn't draw her hair quite right. The lines need to be sharper (As in the lines should be like a square), and the hair behind her ear doesn't match with the top of her head.
• You didn't draw the highlites wide enough, they are too skinny as of now.
• Her ear looks quite nice, it just needs to be circular at the top, not to a point.
• Her eyes are beautiful, A+ for that.
• The horn is not high enough on her head, it looks as if the top of her right eye could be attatched to it.

A very nice sketch you have here.

4/5

Edited July 17, 2012 by Crona The Critic

[Pinkazoid 3,493]

It looks really good.... even though I know it's a sketch the circle distracts me xD

[Revandose 39]

If this was just a quick sketch without much effort, I would love to see what you come up with when you put effort into it!

[Pexaro 51]

Cool sketch! I'd like to see it colored

[Hazardus_Havard. 479]

Her hair shouldn't cover her eyes, it lessens the expression to a mild simmer. Try adding anger lines into the eye and make them squint to help emphasize the anger. Also, try making the ears flattened against the head in the back. Plus, shouldn't her horn be slightly bigger? Might be wrong there though.

[Lunalicious 223]

It looks pretty good for such a quick sketch! One little thing I have to say it, I just can't seem to capture the "angry" feeling, Everything else is there but visible eyebrows that show she's angry would complete it. I really don't know how to explain it. Sorry.

[~Chaos~ 3,967]

Looks like a great little sketch! A decent one for 20 mins!

 

I wonder what she is angry about?!

 

Nice job Ezynell!

[Nah 3,182]

Looking pretty good, it would be nice if you colored it in, but other than that it is really well drawn.

[Lonewolf 127]

Really good sketch! If you sketch that good, I can already imagine that the final work will look awesome.

[Azura 1,107]

I should start drawing ponies especially when I have a lot of time in my hands right now.

 

Since I love ponies so much I wouldn't give up that easily, though I'll have to buy a scanner to scan my drawings.

[Felix 1,363]

This is great! I mean despite the fact you drew it in order to get back to old habits, it's still worth the gloating!