OC opinion thread

[Leafeon 2,702]

And Y NOBODY LEIK ALICORN??? 

Because there are only 3 in the show, 4 if you're counting Chrysalis, 10,000~ if you're counting all the changlings. But a standard pony alicorn, just the 3.

 

Since OC's shouldn't align with the show(Which sucks. I want to know Trixie dammit!), it's quite hard to pull of an alicorn well. If it's done right, great pay off, but if not, not many people will like it sadly.

Edited January 1, 2013 by Firebolt

[Descant 1,898]

Because there are only 3 in the show, 4 if you're counting Chrysalis, 10,000~ if you're counting all the changlings. But a standard pony alicorn, just the 3.

 

Since OC's shouldn't align with the show, it's quite hard to pull of an alicorn well. If it's done right, great pay off, but if not, not many people will like it sadly.

I've got a theory about alicorns... I'm tempted to post a topic about it. What section do you put show theories in?

 

Also, just 'cuz I like spamming my characters...

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/cascade-r2241

[Leafeon 2,702]

I've got a theory about alicorns... I'm tempted to post a topic about it. What section do you put show theories in?

 

Also, just 'cuz I like spamming my characters...

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/cascade-r2241

I believe show discussion. I have a theory as well, but I think this video explains it the best:

 

 

 

15 characters to goooooooooo...

 

[Scarfy HOOVES 310]

Well, I definitely like Supernova the most. The persona switch is kinda bizarre, but is creative, and interesting. But what I don't get is, if he was so shy originally, why would he boast to all the fillies that he would go into "space"? Also, the design is quite nice.

 

Serene Night is quite basic. So I'm not going to say much about that one. Also, the design for her is my favorite of the three.

 

As far as Squeebee goes: Never been a fan of Alicorns, and I don't think pony genetics really work that way. She's cute, but I don't think the backstory works for an alicorn. And seeing as she is not associated with any alicorns, it doesn't really make sense, to me at least.

 

That is a gorgeous OC.

AND I AM NOT BIASED.

NOPE.

 

Backstory

>That escalated quickly.

 

I rather like the backstory actually because it doesn't drag out like mine, and makes sense. I also quite like the color combination.

what fire bolt likes my OC?! i'm flattered. but we both no my OC doesn't even compare to the Master Piece that is firebolt. although i can say that the creator of my OC is nothing short of a genius

Edited January 1, 2013 by Scarfy HOOVES

[thor9356 540]

Well I am looking for some criticism just go easy on me? Would you kindly? (Sorry been playing a lot of Bioshock lately lol) Anyways I look forward to hearing your criticism. 

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/dogboots-r1624

Edited January 1, 2013 by thor9356

[Concord 1,982]

Well I am looking for some criticism just go easy on me? Would you kindly? (Sorry been playing a lot of Bioshock lately lol) Anyways I look forward to hearing your criticism. 

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/dogboots-r1624

 

I actually like it. The past story of him was quite interesting to read. It's unique you can say. An interesting way to cover up the cutie mark problem aswell, but i think describing of what it used to be would be a great addition to your OC. The looks are great, no to random colours, the outfit looks nice aswell. You've got a fine OC there!

[thor9356 540]

I actually like it. The past story of him was quite interesting to read. It's unique you can say. An interesting way to cover up the cutie mark problem aswell, but i think describing of what it used to be would be a great addition to your OC. The looks are great, no to random colours, the outfit looks nice aswell. You've got a fine OC there!

 

Well to be honest I was trying to hint that cunning could be his cutie mark but I can't really think of an icon that would work for cunning. Maybe the Foxhound logo? lol. Anyways thank you for the criticism it means a lot to me.

[Fender 1,283]

Come on people! Let's keep this thread going! We need to see some more interesting OC's and see the creative minds of these forums!

[Concord 1,982]

Come on people! Let's keep this thread going! We need to see some more interesting OC's and see the creative minds of these forums!

 

I would get bashed to much, so i'm not going to "ASK" for others to really rate it.   So i'm just going to rate your OC.

 

Hmm. The name is good. The first time i saw it, i thought that it was created from the guitar company "Fender" or the guitarist "Jason Becker"

 

The looks, are quite interesting. The green colour somehow, even being a little random, it somehow pleases the eye.

 

Why do most OC's that i read about, have something tragic happening to their families or their past .

 

I'm not a fan of long stories, so i'm going to rate the backstory just fine. Maybe a little more information on his talents would be appreciated.

 

Overall, It's a very nice OC. You should be proud! It has alot of potential to improve even more in the future.

Edited January 2, 2013 by Concord

[Fender 1,283]

I would get bashed to much, so i'm not going to "ASK" for others to really rate it.   So i'm just going to rate your OC.

 

Hmm. The name is good. The first time i saw it, i thought that it was created from the guitar company "Fender" or the guitarist "Jason Becker"

 

The looks, are quite interesting. The green colour somehow, even being a little random, it somehow pleases the eye.

 

Why do most OC's that i read about, have something tragic happening to their families or their past .

 

I'm not a fan of long stories, so i'm going to rate the backstory just fine. Maybe a little more information on his talents would be appreciated.

 

Overall, It's a very nice OC. You should be proud! It has alot of potential to improve even more in the future.

I have every intention of adding more to the cutie mark and talent explanation, and the green-ish color was supposed to be closer to a blond yellow, though, I never got around that, and appearently neither did Motion Spark......lol.........oh well, anyway, I have bits and pieces to add to it, and thank you for the feedback. Now, continue rating other OC's!

[Literally Snails 2,307]

I just made a picture-less OC for an RP I'm joining and so far I've only gotten an outline. Here it is: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/roto-r2278

 

I still need:

 

- A better backstory.

 

- A cutie mark that fits with alteration magic.

 

- I'm not sure what, but he's missing something else, too.

[Miss Light Diamond 2,802]

I would love it if someone were to take a look at my OC Flame Dancer

I feel like there are things I should work on but...I can't think of what it is 

 

 

I just made a picture-less OC for an RP I'm joining and so far I've only gotten an outline. Here it is: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/roto-r2278

I still need:

- A better backstory.

- A cutie mark that fits with alteration magic.

- I'm not sure what, but he's missing something else, too.

He seems good. And I cant really think of anything you should work on apart from a better back story and his Cutie Mark.

I would suggest putting a little more detail into what he looks like...

Because he still doesn't have a mane and tail color 

Edited January 5, 2013 by ~Flame Dancer~

[Leafeon 2,702]

Would like a very critical review of my OC. Link in signature.

 

 

 

I just made a picture-less OC for an RP I'm joining and so far I've only gotten an outline. Here it is: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/roto-r2278

I still need:

- A better backstory.

- A cutie mark that fits with alteration magic.

- I'm not sure what, but he's missing something else, too.

Quite like the personality. That's probably very nice for RPs. For design, I would suggest dark grey with a lighter grey mane a tail, and possibly a white patch on his back. (This is used as camouflage for Malaysian Tapirs, the white is the moon reflection, and the black is... everything else.)

I would love it if someone were to take a look at my OC Flame Dancer

I feel like there are things I should work on but...I can't think of what it is 

 

 

He seems good. And I cant really think of anything you should work on apart from a better back story and his Cutie Mark.

I would suggest putting a little more detail into what he looks like...

Because he still doesn't have a mane and tail color 

Honestly the cutie mark sounds a bit OP. A bit more detail in the abandonment would be nice. Because I think everyone's parents have died. Including my OC's...

 

I is best hypocrite.

[thor9356 540]

Would like a very critical review of my OC. Link in signature.

 

 

 

Quite like the personality. That's probably very nice for RPs. For design, I would suggest dark grey with a lighter grey mane a tail, and possibly a white patch on his back. (This is used as camouflage for Malaysian Tapirs, the white is the moon reflection, and the black is... everything else.)

 

Honestly the cutie mark sounds a bit OP. A bit more detail in the abandonment would be nice. Because I think everyone's parents have died. Including my OC's...

 

I is best hypocrite.

 

I honestly like the backstory of your OC. It's well done and I do enjoy how she seems to be more of an introvert. I don't think there's really anything to improve upon really. 

[Winona the Dog 1,984]

Hello there everyone i was just wondering if anyone willing to offer some critisisim on my one and only dragon OC. Her name is Aura and im using her for most of the RP's im in right now.

[Colt 555]

Aura  

As a fellow Dragon OC player I must stand and salute this dragoness. The design in the IMG is very nice blends very well with the MLP universe. I like a lot the idea of dragons living u¿in harsh environments such as the northen tundra and I think her quiet personality goes very well with the Ice theme behind her.

 

I like also the idea of her losing control for a more feral self but here I would ask about the core elements of the dragon kind such as the characteristic greed. I would like to know how does she deal with it or why is she immune to it.

 

I also would ask about her parents, I don’t find many sources that say that dragons are kept by their parents or raised by them as a normal family. (Im not saying this would not apply on the MLP World)  but as far as we know the species is not as caring as we would like.

 

To end I would like to know her motivation of going to the out world, was it some sort of call or fight what is her purpose by exploring the new lands.

 

Don’t take this the wrong way I just try to point things I would like to know for me to know her better.

Edited January 5, 2013 by Colt

[Ion 279]

I think I'll post something here. Its always nice to see what people think of things you've made so I'll give it a go:

 

Ion

 

I'll comment of some other OC's soon.

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,353]

meet Scarfy Hooves a ponifed version of me. i love scarfs i'm kinda of shy and bashful. but very curious about everything and love to open up o my friends. My favorite color is white (and red accents it so well). Scarfy Hooves is a female pegasus

I really likethe design you got going on there. Does she have a backstory/job?

 

Also, I'm resurrecting this thread.

 

Here' my New OC, Big Boss Butch, anyone wanna help me improve him?

 

 

I think I'll post something here. Its always nice to see what people think of things you've made so I'll give it a go: Ion

I probably told you before, but I absolutely adore Ion's design as well as her background, I really couldn't think of anything to imrprove.

Oh, and love Falre's design.

Edited March 30, 2013 by Silverwisp the Bard