Castle Bleck 19,333 January 25, 2014 Share January 25, 2014 (edited) 1. Herding: "It's not uncommon in Equestria." Okay, then... ...Show me one other "herd" besides just your OC's. 2. Night > day: Yes, the nighttime is good... ...But does your OC really have to demonize the daytime (and, by extension, Celestia) just to suck up to Luna? Edited January 26, 2014 by Anti-Villain 2 By Emerald.↑ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scootalove 10,689 January 25, 2014 Share January 25, 2014 (edited) Hmm, where do I start? Having OCs in a story that are not only one-dimensional, but they have no personality and they are there just to be there. Also, that their names are just downright terrible with no effort put into them. Edited January 25, 2014 by Scootalove 4 Credit: Moony © Forum FAQ Forum Rules Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~StatesTheOblivious~ 1,795 January 25, 2014 Share January 25, 2014 Celestia and Luna being portrayed as some kind of gods. I mean, come on, Lauren Faust once even wrote a little text about how that is not the case; never was her intention, and I think the curent staff would agree. She posted it on DeviantArt, if I recall it right. 4 "If men define situations as real, they are real in their consequences." - W. I. Thomas & D. S. Thomas Signature by Kyoshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shift 4,272 January 25, 2014 Share January 25, 2014 OC x Canon characters. Some I do support in other fandoms *cough*ishiplokiwiththisocfromthisreallygoodfanficyoushouldreadititscalledonestepahead*cough* but most of the time no. There are exceptions. If it's like this though... 10 Have the courage to think and act on your own. And have the courage to disobey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Bleck 19,333 January 25, 2014 Author Share January 25, 2014 (edited) @Champion Shift, Me: *sees pic* Edited January 25, 2014 by Anti-Villain 3 By Emerald.↑ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Silver Essence~ 2,625 January 25, 2014 Share January 25, 2014 One cliche that I hate is when the OC in the fanfic has a cameo or role just for the purpose of being there. It's pointless, a waste of time, and sometimes, they don't do anything besides just saying hi or just getting in the way. X/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Bleck 19,333 January 25, 2014 Author Share January 25, 2014 3. Heat season: Do I really need to explain this one? 2 By Emerald.↑ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vorax 43 January 26, 2014 Share January 26, 2014 Celestia and Luna being portrayed as some kind of gods. I mean, come on, Lauren Faust once even wrote a little text about how that is not the case; never was her intention, and I think the curent staff would agree. She posted it on DeviantArt, if I recall it right. Chrysalis almost killed her in the season 2 finale! She's powerful, but does not have Gogeta Super Saiyan 4 level strength. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neon Fire 473 January 26, 2014 Share January 26, 2014 When the character lives a horrible life and meets someone (usually not an OC and an already made character) and their life somehow drastically changes for the better. Yes, you can make those good but most of them are...no. 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adente 1,000 January 26, 2014 Share January 26, 2014 Fanfics that exist simply to pair your shallow, 1 dimensional OC with your favorite character Shallow, one dimensional OCs Alicorn OCs OP unicorns Characters acting like they normally wouldn't Unnecessary sadness/violence/swearing/debauchery Emo depressing OCs (Seriously, its Equestria, the magical land of pink ponies! Like nobody is ever unhappy!) Obvious self-insertion into story Humans in Equestria And the list goes on and on.... this is probably why I don't read fanfics... ever... 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grumpy Enchantress 586 January 26, 2014 Share January 26, 2014 Celestia and Luna being portrayed as some kind of gods. I mean, come on, Lauren Faust once even wrote a little text about how that is not the case; never was her intention, and I think the curent staff would agree. She posted it on DeviantArt, if I recall it right. When did she say this? They were always portrayed pretty much like goddesses in the first season and it's a much better direction than the lame "everyone can be an alicorn" shit of the newer seasons. She even expressed disappointment in Cadence being an alicorn and Twilight becoming one. I don't see why a fanfic which obviously doesn't need to be canon to the show can't do something that was obviously implied from the beginning. They were always the two most powerful ponies who rule over everyone and are responsible for the sun and moon raising, how does this not sound like they're goddesses? Plus this: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MorningFlash 214 January 26, 2014 Share January 26, 2014 When the character lives a horrible life and meets someone (usually not an OC and an already made character) and their life somehow drastically changes for the better. Yes, you can make those good but most of them are...no. Just this. Even thought it's not directly to do with ponies, High School AUs really annoy me in general because it's overdone so much. 3 Credit to Lunia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NomDeSpite 452 January 26, 2014 Share January 26, 2014 One fanfic cliche that is UBIQUITOUS, one that I cannot stand, is when a character is referred to by their hair color. For example, if you're reading an Ed, Edd & Eddy fanfiction that involves Marie Kanker and the author refers to her as "the blue-haired girl". Or Rainbow Dash, "the rainbow-haired pegasus". *grumbles in discontent because that's just the type of guy I am* :okiedokielokie: 5 On 4/12/2014 at 0:00 AM, Miaq_The_Truthful said: This is the internet, not reality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neon Fire 473 January 26, 2014 Share January 26, 2014 Just this. Even thought it's not directly to do with ponies, High School AUs really annoy me in general because it's overdone so much. I know it's like they get abused by their parents, then find their love life and suddenly the abuse just stops and they focus on their love life. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anilewe 2,178 January 26, 2014 Share January 26, 2014 When a character from the show meets a OC and falls in love immediately, before we even get a chance to know that new character. They confess their love, have a amazing sex, story ends. UGH. I saw it so many times, it still hurts. 5 Fan of Applejack? Join us! We have the best cider from Sweet Apple Acres! ORANGESEXY IS THE BEST PONY! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Bleck 19,333 January 26, 2014 Author Share January 26, 2014 4. Human protagonist = Power Nullifier: "Earth has no magic, so that automatically makes my human OC a walking Kryptonite in Equestria." ... ...So, no neat magical effects on your OC... ever? ... ... By Emerald.↑ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riddle 102 January 27, 2014 Share January 27, 2014 1. Humans turned ponies 2.When all the mane six become Alicorns 3.Canons twisted and bent away from their main points of their personality 4.Cross over fanfic 5. Humans falling in love with ponies and doing things rated X to them 6. Want to be 50 shades of gray with ponies.... 7.Mindless ranting 8.The writer has no idea what spell check is.... 9. Steam punk done wrong 10. Nightmare moon and Luna pairings 5 (Sig made by Me) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GONEFOREVER 518 January 27, 2014 Share January 27, 2014 Alicorns. I mean, come on people. GONE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SS Patches 138 January 27, 2014 Share January 27, 2014 when plots are just predictable or that characters are just put in there for the sole purpose of nothing they are just put there and the writer hopes that they fit in with the story which just annoys the heck out of me 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Bleck 19,333 January 27, 2014 Author Share January 27, 2014 (edited) HIE is actually my favorite genre. But, I digress... 5. Human adjusts to dating pony/ponies way too fast: NO!!! BAD DOBBY!!! When has anyone made a lifestyle-adjustment that fast... EVER?!?! Edited January 27, 2014 by Anti-Villain 1 By Emerald.↑ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hakureimiko 96 January 27, 2014 Share January 27, 2014 Making any of the mane 6 insane ala cupcakes. 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonlight Magician 494 January 27, 2014 Share January 27, 2014 (edited) Mary-sue/ flawless characters, OC X any mane six pony pairing , bad romance stories, Alicorn OCs, cliche love stories. The list goes on. Edited January 27, 2014 by Moonlight Magician Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonlight 7,286 January 27, 2014 Share January 27, 2014 Rainbow Dash hurt her wing and now cannot fly is one of my least favories. I also really dislike fanfics that show Celestia as some evil tyrant while Luna is just the "sweetest little angel". 7 matching setups with my bff pathfinder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle Bleck 19,333 January 27, 2014 Author Share January 27, 2014 (edited) 6. Discord underutilizes his powers: He's clearly all over the place in canon. 7. Sombra now has too many lines: Canon = No Nonsense Nemesis who prefers roaring like the T. Rex from Jurassic Park. Fanfic = Carbon copy of Chrysalis and/or NMM. My personal suggestion = Subtle snarking instead of hammy boasting. Edited January 29, 2014 by Anti-Villain 3 By Emerald.↑ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gary S. 102 January 29, 2014 Share January 29, 2014 Making any of the mane 6 insane ala cupcakes. In addition: Turning the ponies to complete jerks: Racism/Speciesm/Rape/Slavery Do you want me to hate ponies?? 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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