I understand about the chance of missing some people as a lot of us have applied as well. It makes it harder as there is a bigger decision but I can believe that its just a high possibility that some will be missed.
I think it it rather good. I like how the story goes as it all makes sense and how it is written is just awesome! Great job on it. (it also was good not to read or listen to a pewdiecry fanfic for once)