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    @@xCuddlefish, lol I do that too sometime, when you had the perfect OC but can't think of a good story for it. Hi Five!
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    The feeling when the main character is so weak to even fight against op opponent that he had to rely on his teammates while couldn't do anything to help but to watch their despair shared with his team. That got me really moved. It's from the anime Kuroko no Basket, a new basketball anime, I'd say more fun watching than Slamdunk.
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    Overall, the story is okay. What I was actually pointing out was your style of writing, the way you write. It's like reading a plain old textbook. The story is just like a description of an event and how it goes but it doesn't feel like a story. If you were to be honest with yourself, I know even you can't feel the story. It has no feelings. It's to "scientific". Sorry, I'm bad at explaining this but I hope you take it as an encouragement and a way to improve because I know you really like writing. (not saying I'm great at writing, just want to give you an advice) Doesn't mean I don't like it but if I say I like it, I'm afraid you might continue this style. Just try to read more novels or read some of the good RP. Believe me, I've gone what you went through, it's painful to accept it but once you do, you can learn more and improve. Good luck my little one! *fade into the abyss...* I don't want to go through mispelling and grammars. Once you've gone deeper into writing, you will start to write slowly and more precisely.
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    Sega Genesis, PS3, but mostly on PC.
  5. CP3_P0n3
    Sweet, I really wanna join but I have an RP going on.
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    Invader Zim - Knows how to do insane dark moments and insane humor sometimes. My all time favourite. Gravity Falls - A bit like above. I guess I just like some dark things in cartoon. This is one of the best. Phineas and Ferb - The one show that actually relates a bit to sensible things (If you watch it, you know what I mean) Kick Buttowski - Geniune laugh in this one, certainly. Transformers : Prime - I agree with the OP. Sadly it appears at the bottom of the list.
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    No, I vote for Westbrook but Brian works too
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    @@LZRD WZRD, I admit, he IS a beast, plus there's Klay to boot.
  9. CP3_P0n3
    Well, keep up with your writing, who knows? It will mature up great. I've read part 2 and rudely said, it wasn't good. Don't take me wrong ok?
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    Kevin Durant, simply. 2nd will be Josh Smith (yeah, he made a bad season in Piston, he just didn't fit into that team)
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    Not busy, but would be nice if it had some paragraphing.
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    @@Megachangeling12, Whoa, a good story but the build up was kinda rushed, also paragraph. Might I suggest you start writing here >> https://www.fanfiction.net/ Also, try read some other good rated stuff there, it will help you Sorry, I had to stop at part 1 @,@@Megachangeling12, I just noticed you guys are new here, I'll add you two. Good luck!
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    lol it did kill kenny, only his brain
  14. CP3_P0n3
    My childhood cartoon, Crush Gear Turbo (the sequel!). Darn that thing had one of the best storyline and best english anime dub.
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    Where can I read it or is it in RP?
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    Mine is that instead of ponies, the Mane 6 are school girls in their junior years. They joined the music club and dubbed the Elements of Harmony. Each of them are master of their own intrument. One particular being Fluttershy who plays tambourine, an instrument that is unlikely to shine. Despite that, they have won 3 awards consecutively in the battle of the band. Along the way, their friendship started to deteriorate the more they develop their skills up to professional level, completely dominating other school band. After graduating into their senior years, they each went to separate high schools, Fluttershy in Ponniville High, Applejack in Applesalsa High, Rarity in Canterlot High, Rainbow Dash in Dash Academy, Pinkie in Rockville High and Twilight in Starswirl Academy. The story follows fluttershy and her new friends into beating the other Elements of Harmony and by proving that a percussionist is just as important in a band. First they will beat Applejack, then Rarity, then RD, then Pinkie, again Applejack, then lastly Twilight. Thus, strengthening their friendship slowly and changes their way of playing music. What are your story of MLP? Any version, anthros or anything would be fine.
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    WUT?!?!?!?!?! *burn all my pony dolls*
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    Dodge Viper

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    Dodge Viper
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    Clio Corvette
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    Happy late April Fools! Ye Scoundrels!

    1. DashYoshi

      DashYoshi

      Happy April Fools! :)

  21. CP3_P0n3
    HondaAnthro~The Power of Dreams...
  22. CP3_P0n3
    My favourite is soya milk with grass jelly, I've tried it with soya of same brand but with hershey choc and I'd say its my 2nd favourite.
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    Sega needs to stop their trend of 'making awesome sonic gameplay but poor storyline, awesome storyline but poor gameplay.' This has been going on forever.
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    Real Madrid almost lost it to shalke but we managed to pull it off, I hope we could win against Atletico in quarter final. Go my monster strikers!
  25. CP3_P0n3

    I'm back guys, sorry for not login so long.

    1. Finesthour

      Finesthour

      How dare you!

    2. CP3_P0n3

      CP3_P0n3

      Forgive me sensei!

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