Bomb Sheep

Another good work of art. You captured Pinkie's head perfectly. 10/10 would see again.

Great job with the art! 9/10

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Nice to see a brony that speaks Chinese around here. (In Mandarin, it's 妹子) Anyways, write Lorem Ipsum Dolor Sit Amet.

As the sun rose, The Strange One decided to go home after his daily visit to the local coffee shop. He had a dark green cloak draped on him and a potion strapped to his flank. Sticking to the dark parts of the city, he used his powers in secret, allowing him to see the world and bend space. When there were no alleys and corners, he would have to walk on the street. People ignored him just as he ignored them. The sunlight burned his exposed hoof. Summer, he thought. Why does it always have to be summer? My power is drained by the light. He prayed that he didn't get burned. At least there was still snow. He hurried back to his house, using his powers when necessary. It had only taken him 3 tickets and 1 visit to jail to get him to learn that using his strong dark powers in front of the police was bad. They allowed him to use his power of sight, sure. Blink? Sure. But draining life force and doing ritualistic things? Absolutely not. That was why he put soundproof panels on his walls, to minimize the sound made from his rituals and studies. When would the city guards allow him to study and experiment in peace? They knew he rarely did something wrong, that he was good. Reaching his door, The Strange One opened it with one quick telekinetic movement. He loved unicorn magic, always so useful. He trotted inside his house, shutting the door, locking it, and closing all curtains instead of one. He turned the lights on and fell down on his couch, lounging while writing something in his diary.

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Nice work on the art! 10/10 would admire again

Good job on making the pony. I don't feel like the background is appropriate though... 8/10

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I don't care about my hair, although I do hate the sprigs that grow on the back of my head. Since I just transitioned from having long hair to having short hair, I shouldn't have that problem for a long while. I don't care about my hair, although I do hate the sprigs that grow on the back of my head. Since I just transitioned from having long hair to having short hair, I shouldn't have that problem for a long while.

The sylvari introductory cutscene theme from Guild Wars 2. It sounds like someone fast-forwarding some ambient music and it feels incredibly forced and random.

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@@JonasDarkmane, Huhhhhhh I did not know that a mod had the same surname as one of my OCs... All hail Lord Jonas Darkmane, Global Moderator, The Dork One, I. M. Meen Residential, Residential Viking!

@@Poly Lingua, it is shown that ponies speak English in the show, or some unified language. There are also multiple "dialects" from different regions, the only three being the normal one, the Manehattan one, and the Appleoosan dialect. They could have different conjugations/ways of saying things, but it shows in the show that different regions' ways of speaking are not that different. I like what you've done with Terrequian, Pegasian, and Unicornish. In the show, it is also shown that Yaks have their own language/use a very primitive version of Equestrian and that Cows speak fluent Equestrian. If you could add words imported from Yak language or any primal language, it would be great! Anyways, I'm not a professional linguist, so pardon my misunderstandings of linguist vocabulary. Overall, the language is nice (BTW, are you working on normal and abnormal nouns/verbs?). Also, how about the writing? We haven't really seen the written language in Equestria, so I suggest you use pictograms as Equestrian Characters. (LOL sorry if I'm being pesky, nice job on the language so far)

@@FullmoonDagger, Thanks for the criticism. I'm really bad at drawing ponies (that was my first attempt at drawing one) and I'll take into consideration my use of brushes. @@JU88snow, Thanks too. Read above.

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