the best story ever.

[sparkleshine100 92]

once upon a time,

there was a pony.

it lived happily ever after.

the end.

 

 

[碇 シンジン 27,431]

Woah this is very detailed and thoroughly thought story that will be long foretold It has so much depth into it and the excitment of mystery, Who was this pony what happened <3 I'm waiting for the sequel already <3 deepest story ever<3  Beautiful writin<3 Still better love story than Twilight <3

 

11/10

[Mars Orbit 729]

I cried while reading this.

It's truly a tail of love, loss, and triumph.

Bravo.

Bravo.

[S.F. 1,560]

I'm...I'm at a loss for words, that was just so deep it's rendered me speechless!

[sparkleshine100 92]

thankyou for all your wonderful feedback. i'm working on a sequel. it should be ready by tomorrow.

[Mars Orbit 729]

No. Don't spoil it's beauty with a sequel.

[S.F. 1,560]

But, if the next one is even a fraction as deep and meaningful as the original, I will start having an existential crisis and I don't know if I can handle that!

[sparkleshine100 92]

the sequel to the best story ever...

 

once upon a time.

there was a slightly older pony.

it is still living happily ever after.

the end.

[S.F. 1,560]

I think you have more than earned this! Sublime!

[碇 シンジン 27,431]

the sequel to the best story ever...

 

once upon a time.

there was a slightly older pony.

it is still living happily ever after.

the end.

WOAHHHHHHHHHHH<3<3<3<3<3  this story is such a literatural masterpiece <3<3

[Mars Orbit 729]

I....I'm....I can't comprehend the deepness and emotions in this vivid picture of a story that told me all it's secrets and still left a mystery..

[Bill_theBrohny 31]

cool story bro(5 ponits if you get the reference)

[Dark Bun 681]

Simply amazing. Now then lets get to business. SEQUEL OR RIOT!!1!!

[JacelynUSB 288]

Oh my god.
I need to see a prequel.

[Randimaxis 8,652]

Once upon a time long ago & far away,

there was a pony who was magical.

It lived happily ever after and was happy.

The end!!!!!

 

(Sorry; after the initial success, you should have known there would be a cheap knock-off.)

Edited June 27, 2015 by Randimaxis

[sparkleshine100 92]

the long awaited prequel has arrived...

 

once upon an earlier time.

there was a slightly younger pony.

he isn't living happily ever after yet.

the end.

[Mars Orbit 729]

AMAZING!!!!

YET ANOTHER AMAZING STORY!!!

[碇 シンジン 27,431]

the long awaited prequel has arrived...

 

once upon an earlier time.

there was a slightly younger pony.

he isn't living happily ever after yet.

the end.

OMG better trilogy than LOTR

[An Unknown Pony. 370]

A full review by the General:

An Unique and Marvelous Story and totally not cliche 

10/10 would read again

[CheeryFox 23,821]

Well... I'm speechless. 

 

 

Rarity/10

[JacelynUSB 288]

And the Academy Award for best picture goes to...
*fanfare*

CLARKYMK FOR THE BEST STORY EVER.

Tell me, will you do a video game based off of it?

[S.F. 1,560]

There are tears of joy streaming down my face and slowly flooding my living room - I need to call the coast guard before this becomes dangerous!

[Chigens and Kay 3,832]

This thread appears to be some manner of random (but strangely enjoyable) nonsense, or something spammy of the sort. Thus, it has been sentenced to the Forum Lounge section of Cloudsdale Colosseum.

[Randimaxis 8,652]

Once upon a time, WITH ROCK MUSIC!

There was a pony AND A DRAGON! 

It lived happily ever after WITH RAINBOW SPRINKLE EXPLOSIONS!!!!!

The end WITH TEN MINUTES OF CREDITS!

 

[Michael Bay remake]

[gamecubeguy214 2,512]

Not as good as the story of PAC-MAN.