critique wanted My Idea For The Final MLP Episode Ever!!! (May Turn Into A Fanfic)

[Harratot33 93]

Just now, Hierok said:

Well, Twilight could also enter Tartarus in that time travel episode, so Chrysalis can too and the chest can only be used once and that was against Tirek.

Thank goodness hahaha

[Harratot33 93]

On 14/08/2017 at 10:48 PM, Hierok said:

Well, Twilight could also enter Tartarus in that time travel episode, so Chrysalis can too and the chest can only be used once and that was against Tirek.

Do you have any opinions on the two most recent chapters of Tirek's Reform?

[Hierok 11,829]

2 hours ago, Harratot33 said:

Do you have any opinions on the two most recent chapters of Tirek's Reform?

I first need to read them. 

It is good, but the time jumps are a bit vague. Sometimes I have to read something trice to get it. 

[Harratot33 93]

21 hours ago, Hierok said:

I first need to read them. 

It is good, but the time jumps are a bit vague. Sometimes I have to read something trice to get it. 

The trilogy as a whole is probably one of the longest MLP fanfictions of all time, am I right?

Edited August 19, 2017 by Harratot33

[Hierok 11,829]

1 minute ago, Harratot33 said:

The trilogy as a whole is probably one of the longest MLP fanfictions of all time, am I right?

I don't know, but it is indeed pretty long. 

[Harratot33 93]

2 minutes ago, Hierok said:

I don't know, but it is indeed pretty long. 

It will probably be about 25,000 words when it's done - I suppose not many people at all will read ALL of it, but...I dunno, I enjoy writing fanfiction and it's good practise, right?

[Hierok 11,829]

1 minute ago, Harratot33 said:

It will probably be about 25,000 words when it's done - I suppose not many people at all will read ALL of it, but...I dunno, I enjoy writing fanfiction and it's good practise, right?

Sure. If you like it, you must keep going. It looks pretty good, so you now just need more views I suppose. 

[Harratot33 93]

2 minutes ago, Hierok said:

Sure. If you like it, you must keep going. It looks pretty good, so you now just need more views I suppose. 

Any tips on how to get those?

[Hierok 11,829]

Just now, Harratot33 said:

Any tips on how to get those?

No I don't, and if I had, my drawings would have much more views by now. 

[Shadow Beam 1,179]

Stay on topic peeps, remember that anything that does not directly pertain to Harra's story should be discussed through PM and not this thread. 

[Harratot33 93]

7 hours ago, Shadow Beam said:

Stay on topic peeps, remember that anything that does not directly pertain to Harra's story should be discussed through PM and not this thread. 

OK, OK, I'm sorry; I just felt it was the least I could do if Hierok is giving me so much help on my fanfic.

[Harratot33 93]

On 19/08/2017 at 7:51 PM, Hierok said:

No I don't, and if I had, my drawings would have much more views by now. 

So, Tirek's Reform is all done now  

[Hierok 11,829]

2 hours ago, Harratot33 said:

So, Tirek's Reform is all done now  

It looks fine, but isn't bon bon special agent sweetie drops, and not Lyra. 

[Harratot33 93]

1 hour ago, Hierok said:

It looks fine, but isn't bon bon special agent sweetie drops, and not Lyra. 

OK, I admit it - I screwed up I'll fix that tomorrow.

[Harratot33 93]

On 21/08/2017 at 10:01 PM, Hierok said:

It looks fine, but isn't bon bon special agent sweetie drops, and not Lyra. 

Do you think Starswirl's Return is going alright so far? I really want the end of the trilogy to be high-impact, you see!

[Hierok 11,829]

On 26-8-2017 at 8:43 PM, Harratot33 said:

Do you think Starswirl's Return is going alright so far? I really want the end of the trilogy to be high-impact, you see!

Haven't red it yet. Been very, very busy last week, so I will read it when I have the time. 

[Harratot33 93]

57 minutes ago, Hierok said:

Haven't red it yet. Been very, very busy last week, so I will read it when I have the time. 

No rush, dude, don't worry  You don't have to read any of it if you don't want to!

Edited August 27, 2017 by Harratot33

[Harratot33 93]

On 27/08/2017 at 8:42 PM, Hierok said:

Haven't red it yet. Been very, very busy last week, so I will read it when I have the time. 

So, the fanfiction as a whole is completely DONE now! Man, what a journey it's been! I know it's far from perfect, but I certainly gave it my and all and I have to say I'm pretty pleased with the results  

[Hierok 11,829]

10 hours ago, Harratot33 said:

So, the fanfiction as a whole is completely DONE now! Man, what a journey it's been! I know it's far from perfect, but I certainly gave it my and all and I have to say I'm pretty pleased with the results  

I shall give a look this week. Sorry for not replieing the last weeks, but it has been busy for me since I have to read 7 more books in 3 languages before Februari. 

[Harratot33 93]

On 9/18/2017 at 6:46 AM, Hierok said:

I shall give a look this week. Sorry for not replieing the last weeks, but it has been busy for me since I have to read 7 more books in 3 languages before Februari. 

Wow!!!

[Shadow Beam 1,179]

Please remember to keep the replies somewhat substantial and related to the topic folks.

[Harratot33 93]

On 9/18/2017 at 6:46 AM, Hierok said:

I shall give a look this week. Sorry for not replieing the last weeks, but it has been busy for me since I have to read 7 more books in 3 languages before Februari. 

Oh my gosh, the plot summaries for the Season 7 finale have been leaked and...

Spoiler

Starswirl the Bearded is revealed to still be alive in them!

...great minds think alike, or what? Sunburst is in the episodes, too; seems like there's gonna be a few similarities with my fanfiction  

[Hierok 11,829]

8 hours ago, Harratot33 said:

Oh my gosh, the plot summaries for the Season 7 finale have been leaked and...

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Starswirl the Bearded is revealed to still be alive in them!

...great minds think alike, or what? Sunburst is in the episodes, too; seems like there's gonna be a few similarities with my fanfiction  

Yes, I wonder how the episode is gonna turn out. I hope for you the same way as your fanfic.