Twilight Sparkle (humanized)

[Pexaro 51]

just a human portrayal of Twilight Sparkle, let me know what you think

[Derpy Dash 234]

Except for the ears and horn, I like it, good work! Are you going to add color?

[WildCard 1,037]

I am not that much a fan of humanized ponies but your Twily looks cute

[MVC NVMXD JVRXD 2,406]

This is pretty good. I appreciate how it isn't one of those "BIG BEWBIES LOL!!!11" humanizations. But I still do have some things to point out.

For the size of her head (by the way, those are some NICE eyes IMO), Her shoulders are a little small. Especially on the left side of the of the drawing. And the arm to the right is a little small. Her arm that's pulling on her collar is kind of small, too. And by what I see, her outfit is supposed to be tight. But the "flamingo" leg thing looks a little odd, as her skirt/dress/whatever retains it's exact shape when her leg moves.

Overall, though, I like it. Nice humanization! Though I'm not a fan of pony ears and a horn...

[moneyshredderofdeath 414]

It's a good effort, and a suitable humanization. However the legs do look out of place due to how her skirt is drawn - the skirt's angle would suit upright legs rather than the position for the legs you used.

[Finesthour 7,289]

My critique:

 

I have a soft spot for humanized ponies...

• Horns and ears need to go. That is an anthro pony with it.
• Her chest... +1
• Her wasit... +1
• Her knees do not have a kneecap that is round enough, looks like wooden peglegs.
• Her eyes are lovely, as is her face.
• Her arms are way too wavy, as in they don't look like arms at all.
• She has no shoulder blades.

I really, really, really, REALLY love humanized ponies, that got you some points there

3.9/5

[Pexaro 51]

Except for the ears and horn, I like it, good work! Are you going to add color?

 

Hopefully, if i have the attention span XD but right now i'm trying to get a lot of sketches done

 

My critique:

 

I have a soft spot for humanized ponies...

• Horns and ears need to go. That is an anthro pony with it.
• Her chest... +1
• Her wasit... +1
• Her knees do not have a kneecap that is round enough, looks like wooden peglegs.
• Her eyes are lovely, as is her face.
• Her arms are way too wavy, as in they don't look like arms at all.
• She has no shoulder blades.

I really, really, really, REALLY love humanized ponies, that got you some points there

3.9/5

 

Thanks for your critiques, I'll take those into account in my future drawings!

[Swit Swat 536]

She has pony ears and a horn... Makes it looks a bit weird. But otherwise, It's a pretty good drawing. Nice work!

[Xievie 498]

FLAT FLAT FLAT-

Finally, some art with a bust that doesn't take up 20% of the screen.

This is really amazing! Are you planning to do other ponies as well? (and showing that to us?)

Edited July 15, 2012 by Suskieshy

[Dusty Soul 2,614]

I like it except for the horn and ears.

[Pexaro 51]

FLAT FLAT FLAT-

Finally, some art with a bust that doesn't take up 20% of the screen.

This is really amazing! Are you planning to do other ponies as well? (and showing that to us?)

 

Eeyup XD I'll probably have Rarity or Applejack up next :3

[Xievie 498]

Eeyup XD I'll probably have Rarity or Applejack up next :3

 

*hoofpump* Awesome! By the way, I suggest looking at them without ears and horns when you draw somepony. You might be surprised at how different it may look.

[Finesthour 7,289]

Eeyup XD I'll probably have Rarity or Applejack up next :3

 

Prepare for the massive boobs.

[Pexaro 51]

Prepare for the massive boobs.

 

Actually, I'm trying to steer away from that XD I won't go over the top with that part (unlike so many artists)

[PonyEcho 1,610]

the ears and horn rely ruin it for me other then that it looks nice