Rainbow Dash's Ascension

[Dj Manjaro 393]

This came to me as an idea almost 2 weeks ago, but I was in Austin TX visiting with family and attending RTX. So I only recently got to spend some time with my tablet. Thankfully, I sketched the idea out before it left me and I was able to bring the drawing to fruition today.

 

Please, if you find the time, leave some criticism.

 

[Jokuc 8,174]

It's very very good, but not something I like, though. Still, it's very well made.

[BobCoffin56 20]

as much as i love this id probably love it more if she was doing a sonic rainboom . but overall its still amazing nice job!

[NavelColt 22,883]

On the plus side, I really like how you did the mane and tail, they look very flowy, not jagged, and realistic. The body is also pretty good, too, and the pose and background are all fitting and nice. On the other hand, and this is my only blatant criticism, I don't like how the wings look. The tops are far too straight edge to look like realistic wings, and the feathers themselves remind me of ice or sheets of metal as opposed to feathers. I think they could be made a lot smaller, especially the top two layers, and made to be more feather-shaped and fluffier, and the straight edge on the top could use a bit of a curvature. So apart from the wings, I'd call this a really, really nice piece ^^ I look forward to seeing future works from you, and to see how you develop your wings

[ProjectRKA 2,848]

The only thing I don't like about this drawing is the mane. It looks... odd, to me. Otherwise, this is a very nice drawing.

I especially like your drawing style :3