ooc Shifted: The Remake (OOC)

[Electrobolt 2,069]

Awrighty, here we go! Let it not be said that Aureity was slower than Nico!

 

http://mlpforums.com...re/#entry649510

 

(My OC will take the role of a Ponyville citizen, I just can't think of a good alternative backstory without me getting carried away again T__T)

 

Um, just letting you know, but... Your link sends me to an error page... You think you could get that taken care of?

[Pinkazoid 3,493]

Aww wanted to join, seems a bit crowded now, and I think I'd have to make a brand new OC... it looked interesting though, I'll make sure to read it whenever I have a chance x3

[Dave247 568]

Alright, after a lot of planning and thinking I think I'm finally finished my first OC. I'm rather proud of the result from all the effort I put into it and all the stress that came out of it.

Big thanks to Scootacool for the help!

Day Light

[Aureity 3,055]

Um, just letting you know, but... Your link sends me to an error page... You think you could get that taken care of?

 

It works for me. 0_o And it apparently works for Scootacool too, because he was able to read it.

Try the link in my siggy if it's still not working?

[Dave247 568]

 

 

It works for me. 0_o And it apparently works for Scootacool too, because he was able to read it.

Try the link in my siggy if it's still not working?

It doesn't work for me either. The permissions must of bugged out and it only shows to mods and higher.

[Klopp 2,050]

@@Dave247, @, @@Electrobolt,

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/aurora-flare-r1347

 

^There is Aureitas' character for you guys!

 

He linked to the his OC's character topic, instead of the actual page, which is only accessible for mods. :3

[Nico 790]

Okay, okay! I'm here for the RP! Just go on ahead and slot me in for this! Sorry I took so long to get around to this.

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/nicolas-quill-r3

 

There ya go. Now add me in and let the fun begin! (Well, whenever everything gets ready, at least.)

[Arylett Charnoa 4,919]

I have done it!! I have completed my first OC on MLPForums!

 

This is Magenta! For a human-turned-pony, I figured a popstar would shake things up a bit. I hope you like her!

 

Accepted. A rather interesting character, I see! Hehehee, I can't wait to see her in action.

 

Timeshift/F/Unicorn

 

Sign me up, Chrysalis is always best villain. And I've never been in a changeling RP before, so this should be interesting.

 

Accepted. I see a few typos here and there, and some syntax issues, but I think you'll be all right!

 

I'm thinking about a native role in the RP, like what PeachPalette had in the last one, I wonder who would replace her in the next one?

 

Aureity's got us covered. His character bellow:

 

Awrighty, here we go! Let it not be said that Aureity was slower than Nico!

 

http://mlpforums.com...re/#entry649510

 

(My OC will take the role of a Ponyville citizen, I just can't think of a good alternative backstory without me getting carried away again T__T)

 

Accepted!

 

O_o Hot gawds, Aureity, this needs to be a fanfiction. I found it very chilling. Can't wait to see her in the RP.

 

Aww wanted to join, seems a bit crowded now, and I think I'd have to make a brand new OC... it looked interesting though, I'll make sure to read it whenever I have a chance x3

 

Spots might open up later as people become inactive. So stay tuned. :3 Glad you're interested though.

 

Alright, after a lot of planning and thinking I think I'm finally finished my first OC. I'm rather proud of the result from all the effort I put into it and all the stress that came out of it.

Big thanks to Scootacool for the help!

Day Light

 

Accepted! I'm very glad you took the time to think this out. Your effort shows! A junior police officer definitely seems like an interesting character. And I'll be more than happy to have someone who shows effort. Just a few minor things: Some of your sentences get a little run-on, so I'd recommend using more commas or ending them prematurely. Also, make sure you split up your paragraphs a little more in the actual RP.

 

Okay, okay! I'm here for the RP! Just go on ahead and slot me in for this! Sorry I took so long to get around to this.

 

http://mlpforums.com...icolas-quill-r3

 

There ya go. Now add me in and let the fun begin! (Well, whenever everything gets ready, at least.)

 

Nicoaccepted.

 

FINALLY JESUS NICO

 

And of course, I edited your character to be my character's brother. Just like we discussed! (I hope this is the last time I have to edit my form. I've made it a lot longer now. ><)

 

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We have too many damn unicorns, guys. You're making me look bad. ;~;

 

But fantastic, everyone! You're all looking great. I think we've got ourselves a good cast. I hope we can keep active.

 

Anyways though, sign-ups are FINALLY CLOSED! Because there was more interest than anticipated, I'm changing the rule from having to wait until two people post before you to three to prevent too much initial chaos. Go read the first post for more information on that.

 

I'll be starting things up tommorow. RIght now, my head's a bit foggy due to lack of sleep. And I want to make sure my starting post is awesome.

[Dave247 568]

Just a few minor things: Some of your sentences get a little run-on, so I'd recommend using more commas or ending them prematurely. Also, make sure you split up your paragraphs a little more in the actual RP.

Now that I'm a lot more relaxed I went over everything again and fixed up what you said as well as picked up some things that I missed previously. Looking forward to tomorrow! Edited August 9, 2012 by Dave247

[Somebody 570]

I'll be starting things up tommorow.

 

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jpgy21r_dRE

 

That was my honest to goodness reaction. I'm so looking forward to this! Magenta is going to rock the house.

[Arylett Charnoa 4,919]

@,@, @, @@Ice Storm, @, @@Electrobolt, @, @@Legendary Emerald,@, @,@@Dave247, @@Nico, @@Aureity, @,

 

The roleplay has now begun! Yes, my opening post is really long. I usually make my introductions longer because I have to set up the plot. Don't be intimidated now!

[Legendary Emerald 622]

@,@, @, @@Ice Storm, @, @@Electrobolt, @, @@Legendary Emerald,@, @,@@Dave247, @@Nico, @@Aureity, @,

 

The roleplay has now begun! Yes, my opening post is really long. I usually make my introductions longer because I have to set up the plot. Don't be intimidated now!

 

I just found and read the thread a minute or two before you posted this. And now that you have, I've learned a nifty little way to call people's attention to something I've posted. This "@[member= thing" might come in handy some day.

[Ice Storm 1,020]

Indeed, I didn't even know that little feature existed.

 

On-topic. I'll take a look at it here in a few minutes. I can't wait to get started, though I already know this is going to be an RP where I can easily spend a couple hours on a post.

[Electrobolt 2,069]

Hahah... I thought at least someone else would post first in the RP topic, but meh... Also, IIRC Electrobolt was one of the last few to wake up. This time, he's second Again, I was honestly expecting someone else to post first

[Legendary Emerald 622]

Hahah... I thought at least someone else would post first in the RP topic, but meh... Also, IIRC Electrobolt was one of the last few to wake up. This time, he's second Again, I was honestly expecting someone else to post first

 

Heh, I've been writing my first post since the thread opened. I'm just taking way too long and writing far too much. All in all, a usual post for me in Shifted.

 

Edit: Okay, got my post done. Damn, there goes my last hour before having to sleep. And since this is Shifted, I'll probably read it again tomorrow and find a bunch of stuff to change or edit in it.

 

Also, Electrobolt, I liked your post, but it might make your posts read easier if you don't include more than two spots of dialogue per paragraph; if you have to put anything in quotes or asterisks in the middle of the paragraph, you should probably re-write things so that the thing in quotes/asterisks takes place at the end of the paragraph, or is the start of a new paragraph. And in this paragraph, I have written the word paragraph far too many times. Paragraph paragraph paragraph! And one more just to make it ten... paragraph!

Edited August 10, 2012 by Legendary Emerald

[Ice Storm 1,020]

I'll have my first post up tomorrow. I'm currently running on three hours of sleep and right now not in my best posting state of mind. haha

[Flow 1,624]

Crap, I hope my opening post isn't too bad, I've decided to keep my character to her personality and interact with the others more.

[Somebody 570]

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I seem to have made a booboo in my character sheet. I know I made my character where she would have already been in Equestria for a few days, but that doesn't seem to go with the way the story is going. Should I scratch that and have her wake up like everyone else, or should I just go with what I had and come to see everyone, somehow drawn to them? Maybe somehow she just showed up earlier as a result of a time rift or something?

Edited August 10, 2012 by Questio

[Arylett Charnoa 4,919]

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I seem to have made a booboo in my character sheet. I know I made my character where she would have already been in Equestria for a few days, but that doesn't seem to go with the way the story is going. Should I scratch that and have her wake up like everyone else, or should I just go with what I had and come to see everyone, somehow drawn to them? Maybe somehow she just showed up earlier as a result of a time rift or something?

 

I think the second option would keep consistency. Not everyone has to wake up in the same place! It's just a good starting point.

[Somebody 570]

I think the second option would keep consistency. Not everyone has to wake up in the same place! It's just a good starting point.

 

All right! I shall get to work on my first post, then!... Just as soon as I finish reviewing all these character sheets.

[Finesthour 7,287]

*Psst, tell no one I am online right now. I am supposed to be on vacation from the forum, but I got an email saying the roleplay started. I really couldn't abandon you guys now, that'd just be very unprofessional.*

 

I'll get to work on my post now.

[Killian Jones 2,655]

*Psst, tell no one I am online right now. I am supposed to be on vacation from the forum, but I got an email saying the roleplay started. I really couldn't abandon you guys now, that'd just be very unprofessional.*

 

I'll get to work on my post now.

 

Duly noted, we'll let you fly under the radar. But don't worry, vacation doesn't mean you have to go completely, take a break from other sections. You can stay here.

[Finesthour 7,287]

Lordy, that was quite a lot to read. But of course, I got it done!

I'll be checking back often, as I was already lurking the site as a guest. So don't expect inactivity

[Somebody 570]

*Psst, tell no one I am online right now. I am supposed to be on vacation from the forum, but I got an email saying the roleplay started. I really couldn't abandon you guys now, that'd just be very unprofessional.*

 

That was you? No way! I never would have recognized you in that disguise. The old school Pokemon League hat is a nice touch!

[Finesthour 7,287]

That was you? No way! I never would have recognized you in that disguise. The old school Pokemon League hat is a nice touch!

 

I had Djenty make it for me for when I made my return

I was gonna be just silent for a while, but it seems I shall be just in this section c: