First drawing, Edit: + Second Drawing

[Lost 1,410]

Ok, as the title suggests, this is my first drawing. This is not only the first drawing I've done of ponies but the first one that i have drawn since i was 12 (nearly 7 years ago now) and even then i only did drawing in art class which were by no means at all good.

 

I attempted to draw this because i was bored:

 

 

It did not turn out so great, but other than the odd eyes and scale issues (head seems too large and body too small) and the front leg too, what else could i improve on next time i draw, if i ever do again.

 

And please forgive the excessive lines, i don't own an eraser or a pencil sharpener, i was using a bunt pencil :s

 

Edited August 16, 2012 by Lost

[XUNUSEDXXX 3,459]

i think its pretty good considering its your first drawing in over 7 years. like you said, the eyes need a bit of work and her neck is a bit too long.

[FortyShadows 217]

You should try drawing your avatar; it looks awesome. X3

If you don't have "basic stationery items" then why not go and buy some?

There's a bit of nope.avi going on there (long neck) and you should use the pony reference guide (Google Image search "mlp pony reference")

Anyway, 'gratz for first drawing!

[Lost 1,410]

You should try drawing your avatar; it looks awesome. X3

If you don't have "basic stationery items" then why not go and buy some?

There's a bit of nope.avi going on there (long neck) and you should use the pony reference guide (Google Image search "mlp pony reference")

Anyway, 'gratz for first drawing!

 

Thanks, i'll try to get some basic stationery items but not sure if i can get away with it XD

 

i'll also look up the reference guide

 

You should try drawing your avatar; it looks awesome. X3

 

I had a go at it, i managed to find an eraser but no sharpener, i had to sharpen the pencil with a kitchen knife.

 

Here is my avatar in full resolution:

 

 

And here is my attempt:

 

 

Thoughts?

[Retro*Derpy 3,181]

First picture- eh its ok Second- That is amazing. I could never draw something like that keep it up!

[Dusty Soul 2,611]

First: It's ok.

Second:It's really good. You got almost everything correct. So what do I think... I think it's awesome. Great Job.

Edited August 16, 2012 by Dusty Soul

[Lost 1,410]

First picture- eh its ok Second- That is amazing. I could never draw something like that keep it up!

 

First: It's ok.

Second:It's really good. You got almost everything correct. So what do I think... I think it's awesome. Great Job.

 

Thanks guys, it is quite literally the second picture I've ever finished drawing. It turned out much better than i expected

[ScottishUnicorn 284]

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Pretty damn awesome dude, that is quite an improvement over the first drawing. I hope to see more from ya dude.

Edited August 16, 2012 by ScottishUnicorn

[FortyShadows 217]

That second drawing...huge improvement! X3

As others have said, there are a few parts off, but not by much.

Anyway, if you want to draw realistic (3d-like) ponies then you might want to try smudge-shading.

[XUNUSEDXXX 3,459]

Like all the others said, the second drawing is awesome. The eyes just need that shine but otherwise it's awesome! Good job

[Devious Detonation 442]

Let me show you my very first pony art ^^ No references were needed for dis :3

 

 

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I did it in about fifteen minutes each ;3.I wish goodluck with your art ;D

[Phaeston-e12 173]

It will be much more helpful if you can use a more firm pencil and start studying the underlying structure behind the character if you are trying to do it with an accuracy and a consistency. I sometimes just take a reference and break it down into more simple 3-d forms, not a flat 2-d as you learn alot more and become much more flexible if you think that way.

 

You then realize that there's a certain proportions existing within the characters and how they are designed, how the artists have thought about the character's skeleton and movement and even realize the mistakes an artists have made in their drawing process. ( and there're numerous errors in MLP:FiM)

[Lost 1,410]

i just noticed that the lower part of her right arm (the one holding the gun) is missing :/

The other errors i'm fine with, but i shall have to rectify that one

[morethanicecream 116]

The first picture wasn't the greatest. I've seen better fan made Applejacks and I have seen worse. The second one is great. It is unique and I like that it looks as good as your avatar. Please color it, I want to see it colored. Colors will bring that picture to life

[Ad Foedera Cresco 188]

I Love the way you've drawn the Second Applejack, all the proportions seem'd spot on . Your first drawing is pretty great too since it's been awhile since you drew another art piece. As all the others though, neck and eye's are off abit' but it's cool, still better than I could ever do.

 

I would post some traditionl art, but none are Pony related, Pony Feathers.....

Edited August 17, 2012 by Ad Foedera Cresco

[Lost 1,410]

I attempted to draw two different drawings over the past 3 hours but they didn't go too well, the first was one of my own design, AppleJack aiming down a sniper-rifle, i couldnt get the gun scale right so i decided i wanted to draw this:

 

 

I failed hard at that too, i think my problem is an inability to draw anything that is at an angle (her head is turned to the side slightly) , any tips for this? i truly suck at drawing :/

Edited August 18, 2012 by Lost

[Ember_star 229]

So awsome /)^3^( I wuv it........ man, thats like..... 50 times better then i could do, nice job...this calls for...