Beat Shock and Rarity

[Beat Shock 581]

Oh yes, this pleases Shocky...

 

I drew this while my brother was at work, and I was bored.

 

 

I must say, my skills have been improving more and more, and I am proud of it! I attempted to draw this about 5 times, and have never been able to get my OC's body right.

 

I FINALLY DID IT!!

 

Well anyway, this is a shipping picture (yes, I am Rarity's future husband) of Rarity and Beat Shock! I've been begging Bris. to make me a vector for a while now, and I think this should be the one he vectors! Again, I am relieved that this turned out ok!

 

(critiquing please! I want to get better)

[Cherry Blossom 864]

This looks very romantic and it's really good! It really looks official and the drawing of Rarity is absolutely splendid! I'm not sure how better you can get with something as marvelous as this drawing! You have a wonderful talent and it's through your enchanted fingers and un crayon!

 

[Zerrodo 104]

I attempted to draw this about 5 times, and have never been able to get my OC's body right.

You doing drugs? It looks great! I have no suggestions on this one, first time I've opened a fan-art thread and didn't see something that could be improved on.

[akita-ken 581]

It's great, the line art is really really clean. I can't wait to see a vector! Spike wouldn't be too happy though

 

I've always wanted to draw a shipping picture of my OC with Fluttershy but have hesitated cuz I got the impression shipping mane 6 chars with OCs was frowned upon Also, I'm sure I'd incur the wrath of other Fluttershy lovers heh

[Dimitri Hammer 3,645]

Very nice work comrade! It's very clean and, dare I say, perfect. Very awesome job! You get a Marx/10 (Good score that is...)

 

It reminds me to make one of Dimitri and Fluttershy.....

[null123456 759]

Nice! Haven't seem very many Rarity lovers lately. So this cheers me up! You have highly improved! Meme Rating: 10/10 EPIC WINNING!

[Motion Spark 7,807]

I liked it a lot, very nice drawing indeed, I want to see your abilites developed...

 

the only flaw I notice is that your OC chest and belly lines don't connect well, I hope I made myself clear in that one.

but after that, it's a flawless drawing.

 

Good Job!

 

having said that....I HATE YOUR DRAWING! >:/

Well anyway, this is a shipping picture (yes, I am Rarity's future husband)

RARITY'S HUSBAND? KEEP DREAMING DUDE? RIGHT RARITY?

[AegisReflector 886]

I usually don't tend to comment on Pony Art, but this piece really impressed me. The lines are really fluent and composition is really clean!

 

Nice job, sir!

[Beat Shock 581]

RARITY'S HUSBAND? KEEP DREAMING DUDE? RIGHT RARITY?

This is the world of Inception, I will be happy to dream about that!

 

This looks very romantic and it's really good! It really looks official and the drawing of Rarity is absolutely splendid! I'm not sure how better you can get with something as marvelous as this drawing! You have a wonderful talent and it's through your enchanted fingers and un crayon!

Thank you so much! I realized that I make better sketches than colored drawings, and I also don't have many coloring materials.

 

Also, my pic of Rarity was drawn multiple times by me. The first one I drew was here, and it wasn't near as good as the one I drew with my OC!

 

It's great, the line art is really really clean. I can't wait to see a vector! Spike wouldn't be too happy though

Thanks, I plan on (begging my brother so he will be) making my vector as soon as possible!

 

About Spike... I'll draw a picture of him jealous of Beat Shock (maybe the same pic with me and Rarity, but spike is in the background all mad). He is Rarity's "Spiky wiky" but does not come close to her true love! (ME!)

 

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Thank you all for your opinions and critiquing! (Even though Motion Spark was the only one who noticed a flaw)

 

I plan on making more in the future!

Edited October 12, 2012 by Beat Shock

[Flash Lighter 9]

I don't actually comment on art, but when i do, its always optimistic.

 

Nice drawing, especially on a sketch, I must say, if you actually colored it.. It would be awesome.

 

And to think that you included your OC, Cool. I wish i had your drawing skills, I sucked since the 7th Grade.

 

Straight to the point, it is nice. I hope you make more

 

(sometimes people just disregard this post cause im a blankflank. Don't underestimate newcoming bronies.)

[Beat Shock 581]

I don't actually comment on art, but when i do, its always optimistic. Nice drawing, especially on a sketch, I must say, if you actually colored it.. It would be awesome. And to think that you included your OC, Cool. I wish i had your drawing skills, I sucked since the 7th Grade. Straight to the point, it is nice. I hope you make more (sometimes people just disregard this post cause im a blankflank. Don't underestimate newcoming bronies.)

Thanks man! /)

 

Just to know, I wasn't really good when I first started. It was because I didn't give up, why I am here now drawing great pictures! My very first attempt at drawing a pony wasn't really... something to look at...? Anyway, you should know that how I improved, was by comparing my drawings to the ones in the show (you will have to look at many different pictures on the internet).

 

How you said; "I sucked since the 7th grade" does that mean you were pro in your kid years, and started getting worse? All you need is patience, because giving up on art is SO easy. Sadly, I've quit drawing before... but I continued making art again ALL BECAUSE OF PONIES (would ya think?)!!!

 

Well thanks, again! For a newcomer brony, that was a pretty professional comment!

[Flash Lighter 9]

Thanks man! /)

 

Just to know, I wasn't really good when I first started. It was because I didn't give up, why I am here now drawing great pictures! My very first attempt at drawing a pony wasn't really... something to look at...? Anyway, you should know that how I improved, was by comparing my drawings to the ones in the show (you will have to look at many different pictures on the internet).

 

How you said; "I sucked since the 7th grade" does that mean you were pro in your kid years, and started getting worse? All you need is patience, because giving up on art is SO easy. Sadly, I've quit drawing before... but I continued making art again ALL BECAUSE OF PONIES (would ya think?)!!!

 

Well thanks, again! For a newcomer brony, that was a pretty professional comment!

 

Thanks man! /)

 

Just to know, I wasn't really good when I first started. It was because I didn't give up, why I am here now drawing great pictures! My very first attempt at drawing a pony wasn't really... something to look at...? Anyway, you should know that how I improved, was by comparing my drawings to the ones in the show (you will have to look at many different pictures on the internet).

 

How you said; "I sucked since the 7th grade" does that mean you were pro in your kid years, and started getting worse? All you need is patience, because giving up on art is SO easy. Sadly, I've quit drawing before... but I continued making art again ALL BECAUSE OF PONIES (would ya think?)!!!

 

Well thanks, again! For a newcomer brony, that was a pretty professional comment!

 

In my kid days, my art was still considerable, cause i really did'nt have problems.. YET. but since the 7th grade, i've been facing tough ones.I think that was the time that i sucked, but, im still trying and im planning to draw my oc tomorrow.

[Batbrony 16,055]

That's really impressive, especially the way you were able to draw Rarity's mane so fantastically; it's probably the hardest of all the Mane 6's manes to draw! But... I don't think everypony's necessarily happy about it.

 

Awkward.

[Beat Shock 581]

That's really impressive, especially the way you were able to draw Rarity's mane so fantastically; it's probably the hardest of all the Mane 6's manes to draw! But... I don't think everypony's necessarily happy about it. Posted Image Awkward.

It's very weird how I can draw her mane so easily... in my opinion, it's the easiest one to draw out of all of the six!

 

Oh well, I guess it's a good thing that I can draw it neatly!

 

Oh, and Spike can go buck himself.

Edited October 13, 2012 by Beat Shock

[Batbrony 16,055]

That's funny that Rarity's mane of all things is the easiest for you out of all of the Mane 6's!

 

 

 

Dang Beat Shock, them's fighting words!!!!!! Spike better watch his back if he knows what's good for him!!!

Edited October 13, 2012 by Batbrony

[Beat Shock 581]

That's funny that Rarity's mane of all things is the easiest for you out of all of the Mane 6's! Posted Image Dang Beat Shock, them's fighting words!!!!!! Spike better watch his back if he knows what's good for him!!!

Your posted image did not show.

Perhaps my computer is very slow.

 

And about spike:

 

Little dragon better watch his back.

My rage and hunger gives me thoughts

of having reptile guts for a snack.

 

 

I find this picture quite fitting

for the rhyming phrases

that I have been spitting.

_________________________

 

I just felt like rhyming, sorry about that... I spend to much time online, and it's making me fat.

Edited October 13, 2012 by Beat Shock

[Batbrony 16,055]

Your posted image did not show.

Perhaps my computer is very slow.

 

And about spike:

 

Little dragon better watch his back.

My rage and hunger gives me thoughts

of having reptile guts for a snack.

 

 

I find this picture quite fitting

for the rhyming phrases

that I have been spitting.

_________________________

 

I just felt like rhyming, sorry about that... I spend to much time online, and it's making me fat.

 

Fixed.

 

And for the record, there are a few things I hate in this world; (1) criminal-scum, (2) muffin-haters, who are the scum that you scrape from the shoe of the criminal-scum, and (3) incessantly-rhyming zebras. Don't be an incessantly rhyming zebra Shock, you're better than that.

[Flash Lighter 9]

I forgot to Mention on my last topic that sadly, somebody already beat me to Rarity. But Flash Lighter is okay with that. Right?

-He nods Reluctantly-

See? [[ilol'd]

[The Awesome One 1,315]

That is an amazing drawing right there. And what I like about it is that the drawing style is just like the show's. Would you mind coloring it? :3

[Jokuc 8,174]

Are you trying to steal Rarity from Spike, huh?!

 

Haha, well it looks really good. It's actually pretty cute too :3

Maybe you could have made the hair of your oc a little bit better, but it's good.

[Kelvocity 211]

That's actually some quality drawing there. I wish I was as talented at drawing as so many bronies are. I don't see anything to critique other than suggesting not to ship yourself with a Mane 6 character!

[Pulcinella 1,016]

That. Is. Amazing. The only Rarity picture I've ever drawn successfully was a piece of crap. But you're really good with that pencil, my good sir. You captured Rarity's mane better than I've ever seen (except for Hasbro, of course). Good job.