Just a Couple of Doodles

[Bronyette 835]

Critiques and Comments are Welcome

 

I've finally found more time to draw some mlp stuffs. :3 Well first is a picture of discord I tried to do from memory. x.x I made him have more of a dragon face. (Sorry, I don't own a scanner so I just take pictures.) I know his paw looks goofy.

 

 

And a sketch of a possible new character of mine.I don't even really have a color scheme for him yet. So suggestions would be cool.

 

Edited January 21, 2013 by Bronyette

[Leafeon 2,702]

That first one is amazing. I can find next to no flaws with it, other then the paw, which you pointed out yourself.

 

For the second one, the legs are off. The back legs jut out too much, and are a bit too wavy. The round bit and the straight bit should not connect as one leg when rounded like that, and the back back leg looks a bit too skinny. The front legs are a bit too pushed forward, and should grow thicker toward the bottom. Everything else looks awesome.

 

As far as color scheme, I would suggest paler eyes, and dark everything else. That always looks good, and not many people do it.

[Bronyette 835]

That first one is amazing. I can find next to no flaws with it, other then the paw, which you pointed out yourself.

 

For the second one, the legs are off. The back legs jut out too much, and are a bit too wavy. The round bit and the straight bit should not connect as one leg when rounded like that, and the back back leg looks a bit too skinny. The front legs are a bit too pushed forward, and should grow thicker toward the bottom. Everything else looks awesome.

 

As far as color scheme, I would suggest paler eyes, and dark everything else. That always looks good, and not many people do it.

 

Thanks for the critique I'll remember those when I draw ponies again. :3 I always have trouble with the legs on the far side of the pony. I'm never quite sure how to draw them correctly. x.x I guess I'll have to study more references. I'm normally used to drawing more realistic animals, sorta like the Discord drawing, so pony legs confuse me. xD Oh, and the color idea seems pretty good, I'll have to go and see what I can do.

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Edited July 19, 2018 by PonyLover123

[Zygen 6,066]

I really love the Discord one! Its so wonderful for somereason, looks very professional!

 

The second one looks pretty good to. I think his hoofs have a few little issues in it, the front ones look pretty good, but overall I think they need to be more flat. They're still pretty good though!

 

Great job! Keep up the good work! .

[Bronyette 835]

For the Discord, everything is perfect. His face is just extrodinary and amazing.

 

For the pony, the hind legs seem perfect to me. The front legs need to be pushed a bit back. the hooves on the front legs need to be growing thicker at the end. The eyes seem like they popped right off the show! I dont think you noticed this, but his flank is blank. The rounded part of his hind leg seems to be about perfect... So everything else seems okie dokie lokie!

 

 

The color scheme, I think the pony needs to be a bit darker. Everything else is fine.  I hope I helped you!

Yeah, he is a new character and I haven't been able to select his cutie mark yet. I have a pretty rough idea though. :3 And everyone tells me I'm good at drawing the eyes, but sometimes I can't get the emotions right. Thanks for the critique!

 

I really love the Discord one! Its so wonderful for somereason, looks very professional!

 

The second one looks pretty good to. I think his hoofs have a few little issues in it, the front ones look pretty good, but overall I think they need to be more flat. They're still pretty good though!

 

Great job! Keep up the good work! .

Thank you very much! I'm pretty proud of the Discord picture. I'm just sad I don't have a scanner so I can't post it in full quality.