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Well, this was a hard oneimg-1603129-2-dry.png , and i dont know if its my best honestlyimg-1603129-3-dry.png . it didn't turn out as planned but still good enough i guessimg-1603129-4-sleep.png . but i hope you like it, tell me what you think. please, reply, share, and scale it from 1/10 img-1603129-5-wink.png and of you're going to brohoof, please leave a reply with it img-1603129-6-sleep.png *oh and those helmets do have the other 6's cutie marks on them. and i might make the rest of the mane 6 with this style*

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I do think it's good, but I don't really get why there are all the guns and helmets. I know what hey symbolize and that is why I don't get why they are there. I guess it adds to the picture, it adds some mystery.

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looks absolutely amazing! 9/10 for you my friend :) i personally love the way you captured the harshness of war on AJ's face. it really seems to be telling a story...(ideas for a fanfic are coming up now...)


okay i got a terribly good fanfition story about this here picture going on right now. i ask for your permission to post it and link this as the cover art? it would be much appreciated and i'll make sure to give you lots of credit!


 

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looks absolutely amazing! 9/10 for you my friend smile.png i personally love the way you captured the harshness of war on AJ's face. it really seems to be telling a story...(ideas for a fanfic are coming up now...)

okay i got a terribly good fanfition story about this here picture going on right now. i ask for your permission to post it and link this as the cover art? it would be much appreciated and i'll make sure to give you lots of credit!

well, thanks! me and my brother also thought it could be a fanfichappy.png i would have no problem if you used this for cover art,as long as you give credit i am all for it laugh.png  what is the fanfic btw?

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well, thanks! me and my brother also thought it could be a fanfichappy.png i would have no problem if you used this for cover art,as long as you give credit i am all for it laugh.png  what is the fanfic btw?

i'll PM you the rough draft of chapter one once it's finished. i think it would be about 20 chapters when finished. thanks for letting me do this!

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Pretty damn cool.

 

In terms of historical authenticity (aside from Applejack happy.png ) it's about 90% ok.

 

Helmet bands were indeed used by the US in WWII, however they were rarely used. Those that were were mostly used in the PTO, and in Italy semi-famously by commandos. It wasn't until the Vietnam War that they became standard. This leads to the playing card (which can be construed as a "death card"). There are no known images of American soldiers putting playing cards in their helmet bands until Vietnam. The closest thing to it in WWII was the airborne's use of the symbols painted on to designate regiments.

 

So yeah, if you do a fine tuned redo ever, ditch the card, or reset to Vietnam with changing weapons/backdrop.

 

8/10

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Pretty damn cool.

 

In terms of historical authenticity (aside from Applejack img-1603219-1-happy.png ) it's about 90% ok.

 

Helmet bands were indeed used by the US in WWII, however they were rarely used. Those that were were mostly used in the PTO, and in Italy semi-famously by commandos. It wasn't until the Vietnam War that they became standard. This leads to the playing card (which can be construed as a "death card"). There are no known images of American soldiers putting playing cards in their helmet bands until Vietnam. The closest thing to it in WWII was the airborne's use of the symbols painted on to designate regiments.

 

So yeah, if you do a fine tuned redo ever, ditch the card, or reset to Vietnam with changing weapons/backdrop.

 

8/10

Heh, yea, i wasn't intending to make it like 100% accurate. I took most influence from CoD World at War *dumb decision* and Saving Private Ryan *Cpt Millers helmet* the card for me just looks cool, i WAS going to make it a photo of Applebloom for Emotion, but the helmets with the mane 6's cutie marks on them is already enough, and i didn't want the helmet to be dull. but yea i was resisting while drawing the card, but i did it any ways...*nice profile pic btw*

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every day i come on this site people amaze me with their talent you my friend obviously have talent  this picture look awesome id have to rate it 9.5-10/10 i don't often see graphite works but when i do the detail inspires me to become better with my own drawing style

 

very well done good sir and im looking forward to seeing more art works from you soon    

 

 

why is it that good artists say that there never happy with their work but not so good artists say they  are 110% satisfied with it 

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Looks pretty good I think, it took a while for me to make out for whatever reason, not sure why. But it looks cool.

 

Maybe it's due to the bottom part of the picture being a very dark color, not sure what that is exactly, but anyways its still good I think. 9/10.


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Looks pretty good, did you use any kind of shadow based pencils or just your good old standard writing pencil? Also like the gritty fill you get from looking at it, reminds me of an old school black and white photo. lol

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I for one think it looks fucking kick ass. 10/10 man! and you are saying this is not your best?! oh pony! I would love to see your best thing cause this is great!


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Oh, this is amazing. Keep up the good work, I'd love to see the rest of the mane six. :) I love the shading, I just have one problem. It seems kinda... I don't know how to explain it... Blurry, I guess.

 

8.5/10


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every day i come on this site people amaze me with their talent you my friend obviously have talent this picture look awesome id have to rate it 9.5-10/10 i don't often see graphite works but when i do the detail inspires me to become better with my own drawing style

 

very well done good sir and im looking forward to seeing more art works from you soon

 

 

why is it that good artists say that there never happy with their work but not so good artists say they are 110% satisfied with it

Thank you. Now key me answer your comment... I judge my own work because I like to keep my ego down, when my ego goes up, all the critiques make me mad, you see? And the 'not so good' artists who think there 110% then complain from those who criticize the anatomy or the coloring etc, they go into a huge hissy fit because they either bever encountered critiques, because their new, they have a big ego because their friends say its good, or the replies are too nice XD I hope you get it now :)

Oh, this is amazing. Keep up the good work, I'd love to see the rest of the mane six. :) I love the shading, I just have one problem. It seems kinda... I don't know how to explain it... Blurry, I guess.

 

8.5/10

It not the drawings fault it's blurry, it's the camera, I take it on my phone and its terrible :( sorry a about that, my mom says we have a scanner but I don't know how to use that damn thing >:( so yea, thanks for your input too :D

That's buckin' legit!

 

This needs to be vectored and wallpapered as soon as possible! :P

 

I love the angle and the look of determination on her face. :3 Very good work.

 

9/10

Somepoby...ANYPONY WHO KNOWS HOW TO VECTOR!!! Vector this PLEEEEASSSSEREEgfjfgsyh!!!! Ok seriously I would love to see this redone digital vector wallpaper etc whatever all that good stuph. Thanks for your reply and reminding me to ask someone to vector this :)

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Heres the problem i see with it, the ace card in the helmet, that didnt start till around the beginning of the vietnam war (i think, never saw it appear in any photographs of WW2), beacuse older helmets didnt have those straps or whatever, its good, ill give it that, but the card part kinda bugs me XP

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Wow, a really excellent drawing! It's really well done, I just love it. My only minor gripe would be that it's a little hard to see the cutie marks on the helmets in the background, but it doesn't detract from the overall quality of the piece at all. I'd give it 10/10! ;)


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Pretty great! (Not necessarily my favorite form of art since it smudges all over my hands no matter what, but nonetheless excellent!!)


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Pretty great! (Not necessarily my favorite form of art since it smudges all over my hands no matter what, but nonetheless excellent!!)

Well, thank you, yea I do agree graphite getting on my hands does get pretty annoying, but it's worth it for me. (Lalalalala springs in the air, and I am a flower, with not much interesting to say... Good, limit reached)
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Somepoby...ANYPONY WHO KNOWS HOW TO VECTOR!!! Vector this PLEEEEASSSSEREEgfjfgsyh!!!! Ok seriously I would love to see this redone digital vector wallpaper etc whatever all that good stuph. Thanks for your reply and reminding me to ask someone to vector this :)

I can do this! :D Well, the vectorizing, that is. I'll just cut AJ out of the picture, digitalize her, then make her a vector, then you can get someone to do a wallpaper, because I don't know crap about making good wallpapers... I can only add a vector to a background that someone else made... I'm bad at stuff like that. >_<
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You may be interested in a project I'm working on with a friend of my.

It will be about war between Equestria and Sombria and will be in WWII atmosphere.

 

For example here's Rainbow Dash as the Major of the famous "Rainbow Fighter Wing" in Luftmare - http://i.imgur.com/66gXIfW.png

Also AJ and others from Mane 6 will have their own roles and just like in your picture, AJ will be in infantry.

So I would like to thank you because this drawing inspired me :)

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OMG this is so great! You should totally post this at the Apple Jack fan club! We'd love to see it! Also I give it a 9 out of ten. Although I love it it is a little hard to see in places. (Here's a link to the AJ club http://mlpforums.com/topic/4725-applejack-fan-club/)

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OMG this is so great! You should totally post this at the Apple Jack fan club! We'd love to see it! Also I give it a 9 out of ten. Although I love it it is a little hard to see in places. (Here's a link to the AJ club http://mlpforums.com/topic/4725-applejack-fan-club/)

Ok I'll post it on the applejack fan club page.

And thanks for your reply (Im responding extremely late sorry I haven't been here in a while.)

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9/10.

 

Applejack looks great in graphite, and your style seems to compliment the gritty wartime aesthetic superbly. I'm kind of a sucker for dark wartime ponies, so this hit all kinds of sweet spots for me.

 

Keep up the excellent work. If you're still planning to draw the other 5, I can't wait to see them!


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