Kyouko-Chan's OC Reviews!

[Sugar Pea 2,682]

I have four OCs, but for this one, I'll have you review Night Flare. 

 

He can be found here: 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/night-flare-r2923

 

He actually also has a powered-up stage

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/night-flare-flame-stage-r2924

The Good- I think he seems like a really cool OC...

 

The Bad- Well...I see more than a few faults. ((Please note I am giving my honest opinions and suggestions, pretty please don't be like the last guy who blindly got mad at me. )) 

 

First off, the reason alicorn OCs are a huge no-no is because it's like saying that they are better, not to mention too godly. Alicorn are really overpowered, as I have noticed in the description. I think it would be best if canon characters weren't involved...trust me, making ponies for your OC to interact with is way funner! ^^

I even don't take keenly to the black and red color schemes, they are kinda overdone. BUT what I would do is get a different color scheme and make the colors lighter. 

 

Rating- 6....if you put a big tweak here and there on it, and I assure you your OC will improve!

[Budding Night 1,043]

The Good- Her story is absolutely perfect! So put together and spot on, I could just see it happening! The design is really beautiful on your OC as well! The Bad- Nothing i've seen. Rating: 10

Oh my gosh! o3o

I never ever thought one of my OC's would get a score of perfect ten!

Thank you very much for the review, its lovely to see what others think of my OC :3

[Blue Moon 6,342]

Can you review OC's just on design, and not on personality or backstory etc? Because I have an OC that I haven't created a profile for yet, but I have the picture.

 

If so, could you review the design of my OC Clear Skies, who is the daughter of my other OC Blue Moon? A picture can be found below.

[Sugar Pea 2,682]

Can you review OC's just on design, and not on personality or backstory etc? Because I have an OC that I haven't created a profile for yet, but I have the picture.

 

If so, could you review the design of my OC Clear Skies, who is the daughter of my other OC Blue Moon? A picture can be found below.

Of course I can!

 

The Good- I think she is really cute looking! Her name is a really cute name to an OC, as well!

 

The Bad- This isn't a bad thing, but is her mother and Blue Moon's wife a Pegasus? Considering that he is a unicorn I just figured XD. I think if you added a bit of her father's coloring...maybe change her scheme a little. I haven't seen a picture of his wife, so I can't really say anything about her mother just yet. XD

 

Rating- 7

[Ihei 714]

Hey! Can you do my OC, Minty? :3 I've gotten a lot of positive reviews and I want to see if there is any thing bad about her so I can fix it.

[Blue Moon 6,342]

Of course I can!

 

The Good- I think she is really cute looking! Her name is a really cute name to an OC, as well!

 

The Bad- This isn't a bad thing, but is her mother and Blue Moon's wife a Pegasus? Considering that he is a unicorn I just figured XD. I think if you added a bit of her father's coloring...maybe change her scheme a little. I haven't seen a picture of his wife, so I can't really say anything about her mother just yet. XD

 

Rating- 7

 

Thanks for thinking she's cute!

 

 

Ze picture of ze wife. (She gets most of her colors from her mother.)

 

Spearmint:

 

Does this help?

[Scootalove 10,689]

I was wondering if you could review my OC too since, your reviewing OCs so I don't mind if you could review my OC. So thank you so much. :3

 

My OC is right below the post, enjoy!

Edited July 18, 2013 by Scootalove

[Sugar Pea 2,682]

Hey! Can you do my OC, Minty? :3 I've gotten a lot of positive reviews and I want to see if there is any thing bad about her so I can fix it.

Certainly!

 

The Good- This has got to be one of the most put together, and really original OCs i've ever really seen. I've been observing your OC for a while and thinking "Wow, I really like this OC." It makes me want to push myself harder into making the perfect OC. ^^

 

The Bad- I've seen nothing bad, but the only thing that kinda makes me scratch my head is the whole "She's afraid, but she's not afraid" thing. Some of it is like saying "I'm scared of spiders, but i'm not afraid of spiders, but then again she's scared of spiders." XD

 

Rating- I really love your OC in many ways but one, sooo: 10

I was wondering if you could review my OC too since, your reviewing OCs so I don't mind if you could review my OC. So thank you so much. :3

 

My OC is right below the post, enjoy!

I noticed you have two OCs...you don't mind telling me which one I click on do you? ^_^"

 

(Ignore this part I need to fill the stupid character thinger)

[Scootalove 10,689]

Certainly!

 

The Good- This has got to be one of the most put together, and really original OCs i've ever really seen. I've been observing your OC for a while and thinking "Wow, I really like this OC." It makes me want to push myself harder into making the perfect OC. ^^

 

The Bad- I've seen nothing bad, but the only thing that kinda makes me scratch my head is the whole "She's afraid, but she's not afraid" thing. Some of it is like saying "I'm scared of spiders, but i'm not afraid of spiders, but then again she's scared of spiders." XD

 

Rating- I really love your OC in many ways but one, sooo: 10

I noticed you have two OCs...you don't mind telling me which one I click on do you? ^_^"

 

(Ignore this part I need to fill the stupid character thinger)

Oh, you could click on the Sparkling Blue one, it doesn't really matter. You can review one of them or both of them if you want. :3

[Sugar Pea 2,682]

 

Thanks for thinking she's cute!

 

 

Ze picture of ze wife. (She gets most of her colors from her mother.)

 

Spearmint:

 

 

Does this help?

 

Yes it helps kinds, but did little Clear Skies get her wings from another family member as far as genetics go? ^^

 

(Ignore this part i need to fill the stupid character thingy it stupid! >.<)

I was wondering if you could review my OC too since, your reviewing OCs so I don't mind if you could review my OC. So thank you so much. :3

 

My OC is right below the post, enjoy!

Here we go!

 

The Good- I think her back story really adds up to where she is now, and I think her character is adorable!

 

The Bad- I think ALL ponies are born without a cutie mark, though despite working at a flower shop, I think it can be a interesting story for this OC! Try writing a story. :3

Oh and another thing, I think that the grey and black color schemes are kinda overdone. I say, but i'm not telling you to change if you don't want to, but I think that to live up to her name she should have blue color schemes somehow or anywhere.

 

Rating- 7

[Blue Moon 6,342]

Yes it helps kinds, but did little Clear Skies get her wings from another family member as far as genetics go? ^^

 

(Ignore this part i need to fill the stupid character thingy it stupid! >.<)

You're not really supposed to do that.

 

 

Anyway, the reason she is a pegasus is similar to the reason that the races for the Cake twins are different from Mrs. and Mr. Cake. Pony genetics are complex and I don't want to get into them, but if you really want to know, you can google it.

Edited July 18, 2013 by Blue Moon

[Sugar Pea 2,682]

You're not really supposed to do that.

 

 

Anyway, the reason she is a pegasus is similar to the reason that the races for the Cake twins are different from Mrs. and Mr. Cake. Pony genetics are complex and I don't want to get into them, but if you really want to know, you can google it.

 

I understand pony genetics, don't worry, i'm not a skeptic XD

I explained this to somepony once. :3

 

Well, I can't just ramble on if I have nothing better to say.

 

[Blue Moon 6,342]

I understand pony genetics, don't worry, i'm not a skeptic XD

I explained this to somepony once. :3

 

Well, I can't just ramble on if I have nothing better to say.

 

Okay.

 

 

Anyway, thanks for the review. Glad you more or less liked her design, and if I ever get to making a profile for her, I'll make sure to let you know.

[00Pony 286]

Ok, so I've been meaning to get around to this for a bit.

I have plenty of OC's I'd like to have reviewed, however a decent amount of them have been made for specific RP's, or specific genres of RP.

For instance, Connery (http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/connery-r3923)

He's from something of an alternate universe Equestria, where war actually existed, so bear that in mind (though I am a generally chill person, so it doesn't really matter what you give the old coot)

[Sugar Pea 2,682]

Ok, so I've been meaning to get around to this for a bit.

I have plenty of OC's I'd like to have reviewed, however a decent amount of them have been made for specific RP's, or specific genres of RP.

For instance, Connery (http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/connery-r3923)

He's from something of an alternate universe Equestria, where war actually existed, so bear that in mind (though I am a generally chill person, so it doesn't really matter what you give the old coot)

This way coooool~

 

The Good- An old pony? Sweet! We need more old OCs . His background is pretty interesting! He has to be the first military pony i've seen who isn't young, handsome, and has no flaws. Also, I wish you'd put a picture of him :3

 

The Bad- Nothing here. ^-^

 

Rate- 10

[♞RedLotus♞ 360]

OOH please do my OC, he is a very action packed OC, not your average joe His page is on my signature down below. 

 

Yay Yay Yay Yay Yay 

[00Pony 286]

This way coooool~

 

The Good- An old pony? Sweet! We need more old OCs . His background is pretty interesting! He has to be the first military pony i've seen who isn't young, handsome, and has no flaws. Also, I wish you'd put a picture of him :3

 

The Bad- Nothing here. ^-^

 

Rate- 10

 

Glad to see you approve of him! I'll send some more in after you give a few more people reviews, if that's alright.

 

Also, I'd love to put a picture of him, but I have no way of making them I'll have to find someone who takes requests.

[Cyborg Doctor 27]

Could you,if you can,please do my oc Hana?:

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/hana-r2850

If you do see any flaws,please tell me.I don't like mary/gary-sues that much so....

(Need more characters  done.)

[Sugar Pea 2,682]

OOH please do my OC, he is a very action packed OC, not your average joe His page is on my signature down below. 

 

Yay Yay Yay Yay Yay 

Okay!

 

The Good- I really love his character, and how he is willing to help the poor and weak. You want to know who he reminds me of? Robin Hood! I love Robin Hood... His design is pretty bad ass I might add, and i'm so glad he ain't any of those overpowered action filled OCs who is all dark, or an outcast.

 

The Bad- Feline....blood? XD

 

Rating- 10!

[♞RedLotus♞ 360]

Okay!

 

The Good- I really love his character, and how he is willing to help the poor and weak. You want to know who he reminds me of? Robin Hood! I love Robin Hood... His design is pretty bad ass I might add, and i'm so glad he ain't any of those overpowered action filled OCs who is all dark, or an outcast.

 

The Bad- Feline....blood? XD

 

Rating- 10!

Awww yeah! Thank you so much and yeah I didnt want him to be one of those shy and dark, mysterious ponies who are all black. I tried to make him kinda like tarzan, robin hood, and mufasa from lion king mixed together XD.

[Sugar Pea 2,682]

Could you,if you can,please do my oc Hana?:

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/hana-r2850

If you do see any flaws,please tell me.I don't like mary/gary-sues that much so....

(Need more characters  done.)

Here we go!

 

The Good- I see she's got a really awesome personality for a pegasus, not so gloatful or a copy of RD. I like that alot

 

The Bad- I've noticed a few faults that I would consider changing....I think her colors should be a little lighter, because neon is just too much. I would say to change her cutie, but if you like it, I like it :3 It's cool looking, though!

 

Rating- 8

[Cyborg Doctor 27]

Here we go!

 

The Good- I see she's got a really awesome personality for a pegasus, not so gloatful or a copy of RD. I like that alot

 

The Bad- I've noticed a few faults that I would consider changing....I think her colors should be a little lighter, because neon is just too much. I would say to change her cutie, but if you like it, I like it :3 It's cool looking, though!

 

Rating- 8

Omg,that was fast.   But any ways,I know about the neon thing.And,thank you with the good thing,'cause I don't like gloating people much my self.And a copy of Rainbow dash.Pish posh.

thank you for the rating also.

[FadedSkies 1,874]

Can you do a review about my OC? Its my first one . Ill give you a link to it, to make it more easier to go to.

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/angelheart-r3948

 

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[Sugar Pea 2,682]

Can you do a review about my OC? Its my first one . Ill give you a link to it, to make it more easier to go to.

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/angelheart-r3948

 

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The Good- I think her color scheme is really pretty, and she sounds like a thoughtful pony! I really like her cutie mark, as well.

 

The Bad- She kinda looks like she has a resemblance to Luna...as in she looks almost like Luna only without the whole alicorn thingy...XD

 

Rating- 9

 

[FadedSkies 1,874]

 

The Good- I think her color scheme is really pretty, and she sounds like a thoughtful pony! I really like her cutie mark, as well.

 

The Bad- She kinda looks like she has a resemblance to Luna...as in she looks almost like Luna only without the whole alicorn thingy...XD

 

Rating- 9

 

 

Thanks for your honest opinion. And she resembles luna because the base of my OC was a picture of luna! 

 

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