I'll rate your OC

[RAGESTAR 479]

Hello, I'm ragestar, and I've been pretty bored lately and just love to inspect and rate OC'S, so I've decided to make this thread to rate anyponies OC, I'll be honest, but not mean, actually, the only things that induce groans from me are overpowered characters, perfectly flawless characters, and terribly gramnered backstories, plus, as a promise, I won't use the word mary sue/gary stue, on your OC's, I hate that word so bucking much...but anyway, let's get started, who would like to go first? (Looks blankly at the empty audience seats, with a sweatdrop while ignoring the cricket sounds)

 

WARNING: I may use my OC crimson grinn for commentary on your OC for comedy reasons.

[stainesbrony 219]

Oh hai. I was waiting for the next show. Anyway, as I have nothing better to do (apart from eat), RATE MY OCs!

[Blue Moon 6,341]

Could you review my OC, Blue Moon? His profile can be found below. And if you don't mind, could you review my OC's daughter, Clear Skies, on just the design.

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/blue-moon-r2808

 

 

Clear Skies Picture:

Edited July 18, 2013 by Blue Moon

[Silverhoof 2,844]

OK. I'll bite. I'm a glutton for punishment in any case...so sock it to me.

all my stuff is linked in my sig. My fan fic is a mere chapter long. I even have a listing of my spells.

 

Silverhoof is not a combat fiend. He's not a gamer, or even a role player. I really wanted him to fit into Equestria. His spells (while useable for combat) are not balanced, and he has no defenses. His magic is far more useful in peaceful pursuits than in war.

 

In fact, he is like any untrained unicorn: he has one spell, its just very versatile.

 

I know he's an overdone self insert...so have fun. (winces in anticipation)

Character Database Summary (and spells):http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/silverhoof-r455

Edited July 18, 2013 by Silverhoof

[OneTrickPony 64]

This is my new OC it's a mare ok

Her name is Sapling Green. Her cutie mark is a tree sapling

Edited July 18, 2013 by Neptune

[Count Paradox 3,548]

my main one that I pretty much always use is Paradox. You can find the link to him in my signature.

[Ihei 713]

Can you rate my OC, Minty? :3

[RAGESTAR 479]

Oh hai. I was waiting for the next show. Anyway, as I have nothing better to do (apart from eat), RATE MY OCs!

  

Sorry, but I can only rate one at a time bro, I'm kinda pressed for time, so I'm rating your OC rick with a 9/10 my only suggestion is that you get a better picture of him besides a pony creator pic, but besides that its great!

Could you review my OC, Blue Moon? His profile can be found below. And if you don't mind, could you review my OC's daughter, Clear Skies, on just the design.

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/blue-moon-r2808 Clear Skies Picture:

  

I give him a 9/10 for the same reason I gave stainsbrony, if you can get a more unique picture of blu, then it'll make him look much better. Also, I give her design a 10/10, I see no problems here, good job!

OK. I'll bite. I'm a glutton for punishment in any case...so sock it to me.all my stuff is linked in my sig. My fan fic is a mere chapter long. I even have a listing of my spells.Silverhoof is not a combat fiend. He's not a gamer, or even a role player. I really wanted him to fit into Equestria. His spells (while useable for combat) are not balanced, and he has no defenses. His magic is far more useful in peaceful pursuits than in war.In fact, he is like any untrained unicorn: he has one spell, its just very versatile. I know he's an overdone self insert...so have fun. (winces in anticipation)Character Database Summary (and spells):http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/silverhoof-r455

 

Very interesting design, I like how you made him as close to the actual show as you could while still making him a badass, so I'm giving him a 9/10 good work

This is my new OC it's a mare ok

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Her name is Sapling Green. Her cutie mark is a tree sapling

Sorry, but I can't rate her based on a picture, send me her OC link, then I'll rate her, ok?

my main one that I pretty much always use is Paradox. You can find the link to him in my signature.

  

In a word...BAD-ASS! 10/10! I love his backstory and his design works perfectly with his personality! Aswome job dude!

Can you rate my OC, Minty? :3

I like her personality, and her backstory is unique, so I give her an 8/10

[Blue Moon 6,341]

  

Sorry, but I can only rate one at a time bro, I'm kinda pressed for time, so I'm rating your OC rick with a 9/10 my only suggestion is that you get a better picture of him besides a pony creator pic, but besides that its great!

  

I give him a 9/10 for the same reason I gave stainsbrony, if you can get a more unique picture of blu, then it'll make him look much better. Also, I give her design a 10/10, I see no problems here, good job!

 

Very interesting design, I like how you made him as close to the actual show as you could while still making him a badass, so I'm giving him a 9/10 good work

Sorry, but I can't rate her based on a picture, send me her OC link, then I'll rate her, ok?

  

In a word...BAD-ASS! 10/10! I love his backstory and his design works perfectly with his personality! Aswome job dude!

I like her personality, and her backstory is unique, so I give her an 8/10

Here are some other pictures if you really want something other than a Pony Creator Image.

[Radiance64 7,053]

Uh, go ahead if you want, link to his bio is in my sig.

[Silverhoof 2,844]

Very interesting design, I like how you made him as close to the actual show as you could while still making him a badass, so I'm giving him a 9/10 good work

Thank you for the kind words!

[RAGESTAR 479]

Here are some other pictures if you really want something other than a Pony Creator Image.

Blue Moon Older.png

BluMoon.png

Miniblu.png

They look great! I guess that changes your score to a 10/10, congratulations!

[OneTrickPony 64]

here is linkhttp://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/sapling-green-r3940

[RAGESTAR 479]

here is linkhttp://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/sapling-green-r3940

I like her diverse personality, but there were some grammer problems and I stated before that I think pony creator pics are, overused, so it could use a more uniqe pic, but besides that its great! I give her an 8/10

Uh, go ahead if you want, link to his bio is in my sig.

His story is very unique, there are few to no grammer problems, and I like his OC art, I see no problems here, 10/10 congradulations!

[Viscra Maelstrom 3,718]

i can't really bother to retell Viscra's backstory right now, and also it's not entirely planned out in my head, but i guess you can comment on her design:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edited July 19, 2013 by Princess Viscra

[RAGESTAR 479]

i can't really bother to retell Viscra's backstory right now, and also it's not entirely planned out in my head, but i guess you can comment on her design:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Interesting features, I like her color palet, its very unique, I give her design a 10/10

[Foreigner And Lover 207]

I guess you could review mine. I'm not entirely sure about him though. Hopefully my drawing doesn't suck too bad. The link is in my signature.

[RAGESTAR 479]

I guess you could review mine. I'm not entirely sure about him though. Hopefully my drawing doesn't suck too bad. The link is in my signature.

I like how he pretty much doesn't give a f*** what anyone thinks, I also like his design, its unique, I give him a 9/10!

[duidamasterXD 9,627]

@,

 

I meant to do this a few days ago, but I've moved your thread to the Creative Resources section. This is generally the place for OC reviews, as they're giving feedback and constructive criticism on something a member has made.

 

While I'm at it, would you mind reviewing my OC, Downpour?

[RAGESTAR 479]

@,

 

I meant to do this a few days ago, but I've moved your thread to the Creative Resources section. This is generally the place for OC reviews, as they're giving feedback and constructive criticism on something a member has made.

 

While I'm at it, would you mind reviewing my OC, Downpour?

Sure! Well let's see, his backstory is interesting, his design is unique and his pic is very lolzy! So I'm giving him a 10/10 I see no problems here, good work! And I know this may sound weird coming from an OC rater, but could you give me your opinion on MY oc? His link is in my sig...I sound like a tool...don't I?

[Budding Night 1,043]

I can't resist one of these :3

Could you please do my OC Evening Glory? She can be located in my signature. I'm proud of her and tend to update things like her backstory and personality regularly, but I'd be nice to see what someone else thinks of her :3

[duidamasterXD 9,627]

Sure! Well let's see, his backstory is interesting, his design is unique and his pic is very lolzy! So I'm giving him a 10/10 I see no problems here, good work! And I know this may sound weird coming from an OC rater, but could you give me your opinion on MY oc? His link is in my sig...I sound like a tool...don't I?

Thanks for the review . I like the design of yours a lot and he gets bonus points for being a pirate. Very adventury backstory.

[RAGESTAR 479]

I can't resist one of these :3

Could you please do my OC Evening Glory? She can be located in my signature. I'm proud of her and tend to update things like her backstory and personality regularly, but I'd be nice to see what someone else thinks of her :3

 

10/10! Very good grammer, a nice pic, and I like how detailed your backstory is, nice job!!

Thanks for the review . I like the design of yours a lot and he gets bonus points for being a pirate. Very adventury backstory.

Thanks for your opinion!! /)

[Budding Night 1,043]

 

 

10/10! Very good grammer, a nice pic, and I like how detailed your backstory is, nice job!!

 

 

 

Oh, wow! This marvellous! Thank you ever so much Ragestar, I didn't think I could get a perfect ten of our ten for my Evening Glory :3

[Sugarcup 198]

Oh this looks like fun my character dont have much backstory thou, i hope it could be rated anyways o.o

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