Dat Plot

[Slice0Pie 815]

Took about an hour

Ok, I am being honest. This was a base, but my program I was using was being mean to me, so, I had to draw it. The only thing I didn't draw was the eyes, and ears, and maybe another part.

Just telling the MODS, and everyone else Not trying to steal. Its my Artwork, basically.

Anyways, back to the picture

Its my OC Shining Snow, the one being the plot, and Tangerine Mare, the one falling

What do you think?

Critique, please

[Zygen 6,066]

Hm ;p, well i'm not sure if i understand totally whats going on in the picture. I'm not sure if the tangerine mare is giving a face like "Oh My Eyes!!!" Or if the greenish pony is farting in her face ;p. Or like if shes just getting bumped and falling over.

 

So yeah, it might sound weird, i'm just confused as to whats happening in the picture exactly ;p. 

 

Anyways...

 

Overall drawing looks good to me. I think her hooves may be a bit short in the front ones possibly, and there seems to be a line curved in the front hoof possibly.

 

Other then that it looks pretty well done overall i think. So good job .

[Red Diamond 549]

dat plot

all plot deserves 10/10

 

But serious talk, it is pretty good. Good luck with your further projects, and I hope you can improve!

[Slice0Pie 815]

Hm ;p, well i'm not sure if i understand totally whats going on in the picture. I'm not sure if the tangerine mare is giving a face like "Oh My Eyes!!!" Or if the greenish pony is farting in her face ;p. Or like if shes just getting bumped and falling over.

 

So yeah, it might sound weird, i'm just confused as to whats happening in the picture exactly ;p. 

 

Anyways...

 

Overall drawing looks good to me. I think her hooves may be a bit short in the front ones possibly, and there seems to be a line curved in the front hoof possibly.

 

Other then that it looks pretty well done overall i think. So good job .

Thank you! Ya, the hooves are a little off, and I noticed the line XD

Silly me :3

 

dat plot

all plot deserves 10/10

 

But serious talk, it is pretty good. Good luck with your further projects, and I hope you can improve!

Thank you very much :3

You gotta embrace the booty.